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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

wow saiii .. amazing work .. loved reading ur ff .. 😊

truly i enjoyed alot .. nyc beginning .. 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome update

pls continue soon



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

great part

love it
cont soon
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome update

pls continue soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 21


Maan tried to move on in his life concentrating on his career… his friends to tried to cheer him up… they spend most of their free time with maan cracking jokes and partying so that geet didn't invade maan's thoughts…



Time passed by



After 6 months

Scene changes [geet's home]

It was geet's birthday

Few of her relatives and friends came to wish her… she received few gifts from them…

While she and her mother were mingling with their friends and relatives, one of her mom's friends came up to her..

Toh rano…iski shaadi kab kar rahe ho?

That's not yet decided… with lot of hesitation and awkwardness

Arey rano…we have to decide quickly… girls of this generation change their minds very quickly…gap nahi dena chahiye aaj kal ke baccho ko…

With a small smile on her face she walked away leaving geet there…on the way to upstairs, she heard her husband mohinder talk on mobile phone

If you get devil as your wife then the husband is bound to become a philosopher like me…samajhthe nahi ho yaar tum…pata hai ye kisne kaha hai..the great Socrates…

And then he turns to see his wife…he gulped his saliva seeing her angry glare…I will call you in a moment…

Come upstairs…now

He nodded his head and followed her

What happened?

I feel humiliated…try to answer those people' questions…you will know the pain….theres no use in criticizing wife on phone…

Her voice was so loud that geet could hear it…

Where is Dev?

When is the engagement?

Geet was saddened and she left the place and went to her room

I cant…I cant answer those questions

Did I ask her not to marry dev?

Did I ask to break the relationship with dev?

Even in her room with door closed she could hear those voices…Her eyes filled with tears…

She did as she liked… what is my fault in that??

Tears flowed from her eyes

Its not your fault

Its all my fault

Geet hides her face in her lap and starts crying


*flashback starts*

Scene : Dev and geet alone at her place..in the kitchen


They both enter the kitchen and geet opens the fridge and starts finding something

If left to dad, then he will telecast our wedding live on television yaar

Geet laughes and takes milk from the fridge

Shayad…but maan will do a better job…

Dev was amused

Haan dev…sach..he is news director in tv-5…even anchors it…

She was so enthusiastic while telling all this…she kept the vessel on the stove and switched on the stove and turned back immediately

And do you know what?

Dev made a questioning face

He does it soo well

Dev had a small smile

Checking the milk on stove and taking all the ingredients she started scolding maan

I wonder what that idiot fellow is doing now..!!

She turned to him

Ek baar apna mobile dena dev

She took it from him and dialed maan's number…it was switched off at that time

She made a disgusting face

Maan ko kiya tha?

Hmmm…switched off hai

I don't understand dev…ek phone ka bhi reply nahi de raha na hi e-mail ka…you know its so irritating

She started pouring milk in the 2 mugs to make coffee and headed off outside kitchen to the dining area with the mugs…dev followed her

Why do you…at first point …call him and then get irritated…

He is my friend dev

Dev had a big smile when she said that

Geet was confused with that smile

What? What does that smile mean?

Nothing dear…take it easy

No..tell me

Geet..theres no rule that if you are engaged then you shouldn't like another man

Geet was stunned when he said that…she looked at him with shocked expression

What?

What are you saying?

Ever since you returned from Hyderabad…you have made 30 calls and 20 messages from my mobile alone…

So what?

No..no I am not doubting you

Then u kept the count of 30 calls and 20 messages??

Geet..all I am trying to say is…some relationships turn into friendship and some friendships turn into love…it all happens without our knowledge…without ourselves actually realizing it

Geet was blank now

So you think I am in love with maan?

I am just telling you to check yourself

Geet was like okay…and nodded her head

So u think after being engaged to you…you suspect that I am in love with another man? Right?

Dev had nothing to say…he just ran his hand through his hair...he tried to explain her

Geet..all it could be is…

Wait wait wait

You want me to check before marriage?

What if you feel like checking it after our marriage?

Its not so yaar..

Geet was tensed for a sec…

You know what dev…

If you don't trust me….this wont work…

She walks away saying this…it was over…

*flashback ends*

thank you so very much for reading this part...

i hope you all like it...
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Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi...thanks 4 pm n lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow milli dear ..

great upd. 😊
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all I m extremely sorry Sai dear for the super late comment
But I had to catch up with all my pending work due to that accident
Really sorry
Update was awesome really loved it
Poor maan gun tho le li par kidnapper maan se dho kadam aage nikal gaya bullets hi nahi the
aww maan pehle dekhna chahiye tha na chodo abhi achhe bacho ki tarah story continue karo
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago



Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved it but want to see maaneet togther.updtae soon.









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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oh!my poor maan!

like to c maneet...









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