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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samaira39

so short????????????????????? not done but loved it..............


sorry

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

nice short part lol

con't soon!
geet in the disco now too?


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Posted: 14 years ago

thanks😊

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

lol gr8 update
I got scared at the last update but now I'm ROFL
Really? maans worried over hair loss😆
let's see wat maaneet du in the disco
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

awwwww so it was the problem of hair loss that Maan was facing....
yahan meine kya kya soch liya tha.....lolz...
anyways me loving this FF....
it's going great.


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Posted: 14 years ago




As he was about to enter the washroom...

A girl pushes him aside and enters it..

He double checks it if its men's washroom...and indeed it was...

He waited for the girl to come outside...

As soon as the door opened...he was stunned and happy to see geet

Part9

Phir se pe ke utli karne aayi thi??

Maan!!!

Exactly...

What are you doing here?

I think I should ask you that question...its men's washroom...

Oh..woh kya hai na...ladies washroom is full...so...

Now if you permit...can i?

What?

Geet...just move yaar...I too need to go...

Oh ya ya..

With that she moved aside...

After a few minutes they both together entered the disco...

When did you come to hyd?

Friends aa rahe the toh mein bhi aa gayi...tum yaha kiske saath aaye ho?

That's my gang...pointing his finger to misha, romeo, yash n pinky...

Pinky (dressed in completely black) and yash(dressed in purple t-shirt and faded jeans) were facing maaneet while misha(dressed in white knee length dress) and romeo(dressed in white shirt and blue jeans) sat opposite to them...pinky's face was bit clearly visible...

Woh purple shirt white dress wali pe line maar raha hai na

Maan was stunned...Tumhe kaise pata..

Geet was proud of herself...I know face reading...

Maan dint believe in that sort of things...any one can tell that simple thing by just looking at them...

Pinky and yash were talking to each other so their side faces were visible to geet now...

That girl in black dress...

Ya..pinky...

Too noisy girl...

Who bhi dekh ke pata chalta hai...

Geet acted slightly offended...Hmmm...she is a devil in literal sense...pehle sab gaali degi uske baad hi baat karegi...one year back..ek chota sa accident...

Maan was surprised to hear that...

Oh shit...!! Woh tumhe kaise pata...

Pinky saw maan and started scolding...You stupid idiot...!! How much more time will you take to come?...

She goes near him to bang his head...

Hey geetu...!!!!

Hi pinky...

Maan she is childhood friend yaar

Maan wanted to kill geet at that moment...while geet was enjoying the facial expressions of maan...from happiness to surprise to shock to i-will-kill-you-look...

When did you come idiot?

Yesterday with my friends yaar...staying with my uncle...I will be here for a week...we will do full too shopping...

Geet was very excited...

Oh shit man...!!! I am going to my granny house...some boring function is there...you could have called before coming na...

Tere jaise binna kaam ke log bahut hai na...kissi ko bhi saath bhej de...

Wow...!! Mill gaya..

Kaun?

Tum

Ya...me...what? me?

Geet started laughing seeing his face...

I am having lot of work in office...I cant...

You stupid..always have that crying face plastered to your head...do you know geetu? Isse car, petrol etc etc sab kuch free hai...

Wow..!! recession ke time pe bhi itni facilities? Nice yaar..!! patting his back...

Karte kya ho maan?? Excitingly...

And maan acted delighted...

Scene changes...

tv 5 news channel studio..

Maan was directing an episode of crime watch...

Actor : dhundthe dhunte uski friend satya uske office gayi...

Meanwhile geet was about to enter the studio...

Actor : she got angry that she was stopped by the watchman...

Watchman of the studio :aae madam andar nahi jaane ka...

Actor : now anger was visible in satya's eyes..her eyes were blood red...she just bursted...

Tum kaun hote ho mujhe rokne wale?

Watchman of the studio : arey jao madam jao

Actor : bas...satya ko ab koi rok nahi sakta tha...she was unstoppable...

Do you know who am i?

Maan's fiance...

Actor : her anger was at its peak now...

Kitne kaam hai pata bhi hai?

Cards final karke printing ke liye deke...unpe naam likhke...purre shehar mein baatna hai...

Phir shaadi ki bhi taiyariyan bhi karni hai...aur tum beech me aake kya andar nahi jaane ka laga rakha hai? Huh?

Mein tumhara kachumar bana dungi...phir math kehna...

Ab hato...

Saying this she pushes him aside and enters the studio with a victorious smile...

Actor : what did satya do after entering? what bitter truth did she she? Coming up the other side of the break...

Geet spotted maan and was curiously seeing what was he upto...

Cut cut

Ishaan...satya ne kya kiya...kya dekha ye sab itne simple tareke se batayenge toh there wont be any curiosity in the public...do it this way...

What did satya do?

What did satya see?

Was it horrifying?

Coming up the other side...

Do not go away...

Maan said all this with a lot of depth in his voice and with a stress upon each and every word ...he said this to built lot of curiosity and anxiety in the viewers...(it was too funny in the movie and the expressions were too good)

Geet could control herself and started laughing like hell...she could even stand properly...she adjusted herself on the stairs...she was in such a euphoric state that she had tears in her eyes and her stomach was paining...

People around her wondered who was she?

When maan saw a bit of crowd gathered near staircase he went to see what happened...

As soon as geet saw maan she pointed a finger at him and started laughing even more...

Maan was embarrassed...

He took her outside near the parking lot and opened the door for her...after she sat and making himself comfortable in the driver seat..he asked...

Kahan jana hai?

She burst out laughing...

Geet yaar please...

Ok ok sorry...koi bhi shopping maal le chalo...



thank you so very much for reading this part...
i hope you like it...
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please dont forget to comment at the end...😊



Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.........so it was geet who was shouting with the watchman.......omg she introduced herself as fiance.............maan aur dir interesting yaar
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
love, nice part. loved it.
maan worried for hair loss 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
cont soon Xx...
thx 4 the PM




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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 9:-
awesome, brilliant part. loved it.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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