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Posted: 14 years ago
part 60
oh poor Geet...
doesnt like this doori...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
dat ws awsm part... n i read all parts..n i m likng it very much...
hey wen r u updatng, u said now u will update daily.. well,, waitng fr ur nxt part...
Edited by piyasingh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazng part luvd d whole story juxt read it whole all by today thanx for d pm n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part dear.👏..., cant wait for the next part.. please continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sara, just finished catching up and I have to say that you are an amazing writer. The FF is awesome! Please update soon and add me to your pm list. Thanxs Saba xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Quick Note 1:I Know Nothing About Indian Weather Apart From The Fact Its Sunny So I Dunno If You Have Thunder And Hailstones There But We Sure Have Them Here In The UK.

Long Note 1: And Please Leave Longer Comments Than 'Great Update'Or 'Loved It' If You Can.Although They Are Great And I Appreciate All Comments,They Dont Tell Me Anything.So If You Can Pls Tell Me What You Liked And What You Hated.If There Is A Bit In Any Of My Updates That Makes You Think'OMG!! What Is This Girl Thinking? How Stupid?'Then Please Tell Me Wat It Was Because I Want To Know And Dont Worry I Wont Get Offended Or Anything,Be As Frank and open As You want Because I Think There's Always Room To Improve And To Improve, I Need Constructive Criticism With Both Good And Bad Points.

Part 61

Maan Signalled for me to come outside and i quickly put my coat on as it looked like it was going to rain and ran outside.He Smiled and i ran and hugged him.I Started crying and Maan Looked at me worried.

Maan:Geet!

Geet:Maan,Im Sorry.In Anger,I don't know what i said to you.Im Sorry.Please Forgive me.I always misunderstand you and i don't even give you a chance to explain.I must be the worst wife ever!!

Maan:(laughs)Worst Wife? Geet,When have you ever had the chance to be my wife? I think you spent 2 days being my wife and thats it.The 1st day,We spent mostly in bed and the 2nd on a plane.That doesn't really give you any oppurtunity to be my wife.And when you do get the chance,Im sure you'll do it perfectly.I trust you.And Geet,I Know how hard it was for you to see me and Annie together.And You didn't mean what you said.

Geet:No Maan!! Let Me Take the blame for once!! You cant keep letting me off,I should get punished for what i said to you.

I looked at him and i was upset but he was smiling!! There was a twinkle in his eye and he was smirking,trying very hard not to laugh but failing miserably.I glared at him.

Geet:Youre Smiling?! Im upset and you...Why?

Maan:No,You...

Geet:I what? Huh?

Maan:You want a punishment?

Geet:Yes

Maan:Now?

Geet:No,Tomorrow!! Of course now!!

Maan:Ok Close your eyes.

Geet:But...Why?

He placed his finger on my lip to silence me and covered my eyes.I felt him move his finger away and i knew he was moving closer to me,My heartbeat told me that by speeding up.I gulped.His stubble brushed against my cheek.

Geet:Oww!!

Maan(laughs):Ssshh

He slowly brushed his lips against mine,Stopped for a few seconds and then did it again.This was really torture.Whenever I got into it, he pulled away.Maan moved away and moved his hand away from my eyes.He was smiling.

Maan:How was the punishment?

I pulled a baby face and his eyes twinkled.

Geet:Horrible

Maan:Oh so it wasn't enough.Hmmm...I need to think of a stricter punishment then.

I looked at him in astonishment.

Geet:Are You MAD? That was Torture!!! And You Seriously need to shave.

Maan:Torture? Why? That must have been the easiest punishment ever!!

Geet:No It wasn't,Youre Not a girl,You don't understand how weird girls hormones are.Seriously,its so hard putting up with them.You guys get it so easy,i think all guys should be grateful theyre guys and not girls.Us girls have to go through so much and guys,they have such an easy life.

Maan:Geet,Are you on your period?

I Looked at him shocked and embarrassed.

Geet:Why?

Maan:In New York,You acted like this when you were on remember? I thought i should ask so i know when to be careful what to say because youre in a cranky mood.

Geet:Cranky? Me?

Maan:Yes

Geet:Well...Why haven't you shaved?

Maan:I Thought id grow a beard,Its very in you know.

Geet:You are not growing a beard.Urggghh!!! If i have to,I'll shave it off myself.

A flash of thunder lit up the sky and i moved to Maan and Hugged him tightly.

Maan:Youre Scared Of Thunder And Lightning? The Strong Sherni Geet Is Scared Of Something?

Geet:Im Actually scared alot of things.See,That shows how much you know about me,Your wife.Nothing.

Maan:Oh and you know everything about me.

Another bolt of lightning flashed through the sky.

Geet:Maan Please,Lets Get Out Of here,Its Worser Outside.

Maan:Go Inside Then.I Cant come with you because of Annie can i?

Geet:No,I want to stay with you.

Suddenly,A loud Boom Echoed everywhere and i screamed.Rain and Hailstones started falling violently.

Maan:Sssh,They'll Hear You Inside and know youre not sleeping.

Geet:Maan,Im Scared.And Hailstones Hurt.

Maan:Where Can We Go?

Geet:Maan,Your Car.

Maan:Oh Yeah,Come On.

We ran to the car but we were already completely drenched.We collapsed inside and laughed.

Maan:Geet Do You Remember Something? The Same Scene But In A Different Place?

I intertwined my fingers with his and smiled.

Geet:How could i forget?The Night Before Our Wedding,Right?

Maan:Hmmm...The same Rain,The Same Atmosphere,You Were Even Wearing The Same Colour.

Geet:You Remember What Colour I Wore?

Maan:Hmmm...White.Everythings the same.

Geet:But Different,Everythings Changed.The Relationships not the same,The feelings aren't the same,Now there are responsibilities,Were not the same free people we were.

Maan:The Feelings Arent The Same? You Dont...Love me anymore?

He looked hurt and shocked.I stroked his cheek and smiled.

Geet:Noo,Is That What You Thought I MEant?Maan,If i didn't love you,Why would i be here with you? I Meant Theyve Changed,Gotten Stronger,More Powerful With This New Bond.

Maan:Ok But you think Youre not free anymore? Youre Tied down?

Geet:Not yet but i will be.Maan,Your parents arent going to want a DIL who Comes Home late and Wakes at 11,Are They?Or Someone Who wears Shorts And Strapless Tops? Hmmm? Think Of It That Way.

Maan:My Parents Are Pretty Open Minded

Geet:But Maan,Even The Most Open Minded Parents In The World wouldn't want that from their DIL.Anyway,i Dont Mind,Ill Give Up All That But Not College.Maan,Im Still Going To College.Im Gonna Finish This Last Year And Then Get A Job.

Maan:Dont Worry,They Wont Have Anything Against That.

Geet:Good!!!

Maan:BTW,Geet Do You Always Wear White When You Sleep?I Mean,I Should Know.

Geet:No,Not All The Time Why?

Maan:Whenever I've Seen You At Night,You've Always Worn White.And White Makes You Look even more beautiful.

Geet:Well,Actually Youre Wrong.I Havent Always Worn White.Remember The Night After Our Marriage,I Was Wearing Black!!

Maan:Thats Because You Were Wearing MY Clothes.

Geet:But Still,I Wasnt Wearing White Was I?

Maan:OK,OK You Win.

Geet:I Always Win

Maan:No,I Let You Win.

I Hugged Him.

Geet:Good.Thats How It Should Be Aswell.

We Both laughed.

END

Precap:Annie In Geets Room

Annie:Marriage Certificate? Geets Married?

Please Leave Comments And Press LIKE.

Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res EDIT:
OMG

lovley update
i loved the maneet moments
i wonder when annie will learn at maneet
i get the hint in the next update:
superb
cont soon
BTW THANKS FOR PM

p.s
when will u update next i m already getting impatient 😆
Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, you finally updated, yay!!!!!!!!! Great update, loved the part about Maan growing a beard 😆 The precap 😲 Looking forward to it, want to see Annie's reaction. Update soon and thanxs for the pm
Saba xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one jaani!!
keep pmming
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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