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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

Its indeed a interesting story no wonder u r thinking abt this story all d tym..... Bv i jst don't understand y he left nd now y he is bk in her life... MAAN KA PROBLEM KYA HAI.......WAT HE WANTS EXACTLY.....

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rohini

@Rohini20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

LUVED IT ABSOLUTELY..............IT WAS JUS AWSUM...👍🏼..WITH PART 3...I THOUGHT GEET WULD GIVE INTO HIM...IF HE WAS THE STUBBORN WHO WULD USE GEET FOR HIS OWN BENEFIT...TO SATISIFY HIS EGO...THEN SHLD GEET TOO..THT WAS A GUD DECISION BY GEET IN PART 4

"Shopping with the boss . . . Interesting" It was a taunt.
LUV THIS JEALOUS MAAN...😆..THOUGH...BUT STILL CAN'T TAKE IN HIS VOILENT ACTS LYK U MENTIONED---

He kissed her neck as bit her at the same spot he had last night inviting a yelp from her. He held her wrists tighter as the image of her in Arjun's arms flashed in front of his eyes."Let me see how you even get in his car" Maan said, gritting his teeth."He held this hand didn't he" Maan spat, as he pressed her hands tighter in his grip, digging his nails into her skin.😔😡...DUN LYK GEET TO BE BETRAYED LYK THIS...THE PRECAP,,😕..WHO SHE PULLED IN TO THE DANCE FLOOR ??CONTINUE SOON..!!

ROHINI

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Just came across this one and i must say I LOOOOVVEEDD IT!!!!

Well u r not the 1st to portray maan as a jerk -a lot of people have done that INCLUDING ME (well somewhat)😆

But that doesn't really matter until the story is good and i really liked the story.

Love,shreya

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tazzo

@tazzo

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

tra laaa la laaaaaaaaaa........loved it!
awesome! wonderful!

more more more!

oh wait! what am i howling for?! the next one is on the line!!! coming in a few hours! hurray!! can't wait!! 😳

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

hey wat??????????????? maan was this much heartless😕..............feel bad for geet.......
looking fwd.............

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Sneha Bhattacharya

@khushi_4ever

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

He knew abt Meha????i am not liking this Maan...but u say it is going to be a interesting part the next one...so iam going to wait patiently and see...............

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

superbbbb update

so finaly maan feeling jealous of arjun

gud

y maan nt showin ny affection luv care 2wards meha

btw gud word

do continue soon

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

awesome update. y is maan treating geet like this???

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

y is maan doing this to her................

y he wants her to b in pain..............

he loved her so much thn wat changed everything bw them.............

i just dont want geet to lose her dignity and self respect............

she has to b very strong in his presence and not let him assault her @ every step.............

pl cont soon..............

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#380

Hmm…so they were so much in love and yet Maan hates her now…I have a suspicion that it has something to do with Arjun- Maybe he got over possessive over Geet and started imagining things that weren't there. I don't know…just speculating. I know you don't want to reveal the past so quickly, but could you please drop a clue or two….please, pretty please!

Thanks for the update, really enjoyed it!

ps: really liked Geet's bond with her daughter...very beautifully captured 😊

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago