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Liz where is update as u said one update/day????

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There is something in the way you write. It's intriguing. It is always YOUR story told YOUR way and I love that because no one can tell it better than my jaanu. *sigh* makes me happy that I know such a renowned author. You put all of my writing to shame.

I love the mystery you posed. The two years all of a sudden stated randomly. I was left with thinking, what in the hell is she talking about? Was the whole wedding atmosphere a flashback? I loved the fact that she could feel his eyes drilling into her as if she was exposed. It made geet feel vulnerable and you portrayed that all too well. Might I say, the dancing and the fun was a bit too long. I was ready for you to discuss the hot, sexy maan already!

I have to say, his entrance into the wedding party reminded me of Pride and Prejudice, the moment when Elizabeth was having the sweetest time dancing with her best friend and Darcy made his brute, cold entrance but his charisma left everyone awestruck while only Elizabeth was unaffected. It felt sort of like that and I loved it.

When she ran out and he caught her dupatta, it could've been cliche but you in the strangest way made it your own. When she was breathless, so was i. his sudden kisses left me confused. I was like how can he kiss a woman without her permission! So wrong but so hot! I know geet liked it a lot.

The ending when he ended up just picking her up and kidnapping her in his bedroom, I was just like, oh Maan. You can look hot even if you are violent. Poor geet, having to deal with him being so aggressive. But the first moment of reading geet laughing marvelously to the end when she laughed as they fell on the bed, I was like wow. You really captured geet's character. u enhanced her character by making her out to be a convivial, fun-loving character. Even maan's character. Most people would spontaneously make him from a cold man to this nice person, smiling and laughing with geet even when the last moment, he was an angry, brute man. there would be no connection. But you capture him. Especially when he trapped geet. He was smiling but once he averted his gaze from geet, he forgot that he had smiled a second ago.it made him the dispassionate person he is only affected by geet's presence.

It was a beautiful OS 👏and I am honored to be mentioned. Oof! 😳This hot OS dedicated to moi. How lucky am I?😃😃 Especially since it is coming from my Liz jaanu😉.

You've made me blush more than sixteen yr old girl should. ☺️ too bad it wasnt u that made me blush, it was ur OS. we hav a strange relationship na?

nd r u joking? i am GLAD i didnt notice this until now. i wud've had to wait for ur three aprts to come out. god knows, how irritated i wud b. 😆

Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

There is something in the way you write. It's intriguing. It is always YOUR story told YOUR way and I love that because no one can tell it better than my jaanu. *sigh* makes me happy that I know such a renowned author. You put all of my writing to shame.

I love the mystery you posed. The two years all of a sudden stated randomly. I was left with thinking, what in the hell is she talking about? Was the whole wedding atmosphere a flashback? I loved the fact that she could feel his eyes drilling into her as if she was exposed. It made geet feel vulnerable and you portrayed that all too well. Might I say, the dancing and the fun was a bit too long. I was ready for you to discuss the hot, sexy maan already!

I have to say, his entrance into the wedding party reminded me of Pride and Prejudice, the moment when Elizabeth was having the sweetest time dancing with her best friend and Darcy made his brute, cold entrance but his charisma left everyone awestruck while only Elizabeth was unaffected. It felt sort of like that and I loved it.

When she ran out and he caught her dupatta, it could've been clich but you in the strangest way made it your own. When she was breathless, so was i. his sudden kisses left me confused. I am just like how can he kiss a woman without her permission! So wrong but so hot! I know geet liked it a lot.

The ending when he ended up just picking her up and kidnapping her in his bedroom, I was just like, oh Maan. You can look hot even if you are violent. Poor geet, havig to deal with him being so aggressive. But the first moment of reading geet laughing marvelously to the end when she laughed as they fell on the bed, I was like wow. You really captured geet's character. Even maan's character. Most people would all of a sudden make him out to be this nice person, smiling and laughing with geet when the alst moment, he was an angry, brute man. But you capture him. Especially when he trapped geet. He was smiling but once he averted his gaze from geet, he forgot that he had smiled a second ago.

It was a beautiful OS 👏and I am honored to be mentioned. Oof! 😳This hot OS dedicated to moi. How lucky am I?😃😃 Especially since it is coming from my Liz jaanu😉.

You've made me blush more than sixteen yr old girl should. ☺️