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Posted: 14 years ago
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tanks for al the coments.😉




Pyaar main dance

Chapter 5

Maan was staring at Geet, and wonderd what is her biggest secret in her life.

Then Geet stared talking:

G:-But whatever Maan can you pl help me choose a color. I had thinked me some very bright color in this room, what do you think?

M.:- No Geet use some more darker color it will suit this room better.

G:- Yeha you are right, plus with this big window will the room be to bright. But Maan wtich color help me na!

M:- haan haan let me look first.

Geet gave Maan the book with colors. On tht time the doll bell ring and Maan was gonna give back Geet the book so he could go open the door bcs it was nobody at home except this two. But geet said:

G:- I will go and look.

M:- ok

Geet got down and walked too the door, she opend the dor and saw Rahul. Rahul was first shock to see her and then she lloked at her from top to button. Geet was wearing black leggings blue shortes and black and blue sleevless t- shirt.

( Just imagen this black and blue and with balck leggings under)

Geet got unconftabel with look at Rahuls face. He looked at her with lust full eyes.

Geet asked him.

G.- hi Rahul what are you doing here.

Geet knows him from Maans class.

R:- I am here to meet Maan.

G:- Ok, wait a min, Maan Maan.

Maan came down.

M:- Geet what is it cant you leave me alone for some time, Pl don't say you have broken a vase or something again.

Rahul stared to laungh and Maan looked at they whay and saw Rahul.

G:- Maan Rahul is here to meet you.

Maan looked at Rahul, how he looked at Geet and in anger he souted at Geet

M.- Geet what the hell are you wearing.

Geet was totally shocked bcs whenever she was in KM she always weard clothes like this he had never said anything to her, instead he said, something like this

Geet I think you shued wear leggines or something under or a necklas, If it was a big neckline one clothes. He always said whay she don't feel bad and she can wear what she wearing but something more to it. He and daadi always incrge her wear cloths likte this. But just at home. Not in school. Bcs on time he got angry he didn't want guys to look at her. And today first time in her life Maan had say something like tht. Then she understand.

And said:

G:- I will go and change and ran up to her room.

M:- So Rahul what do you want? Maan asked him

R:- I needed some notes bcs I wasn't in school today so I came here to borrow your notes if its ok.

M:- Yhea wait I will get them, you sit down, I will get them.

R:- ok.

Maan got up to his room and got the notes. On the other hand Rahul was looking for Geet , then Maan came down and looked at him, he asked:

M:- how are you looking for? Maan asked little suspices.

R:- no one just lookkng at your house its really butiful. He said

M:- Thanks.

R:- by the whay can I ask you a question? If you don't mind it.

M:- Yeha you can

R:- What is Geet doing here?

M:- Nothing of your business Maan said angry.

R:- Sorry Maan I didn't mean to hurt you just asking.

M:- She is here to meet my daadi.

R.- oh I had thinked she is you girlfriend. If you don't mind can I ask her out.

At the same time Geet came down and heard everyting she was wating for Maan to answer him.

Maan said:

M:- First she is not your typ, and second do you really think tht I will send her out with a boy like you how use girls as tushu paper, you got the note get out from or I will do something witch my daadi have learned not do with guest.

Rahul was on the way out when he saw Geet on the stairs, he smirked and go up to her and thinked Maan Singh Kurana just wait and watch how Geet says yes tome to go out with me.

R:- Geet will you go out with me.

G:- ofcoures

Maan looked at Geet angry, and Rahul smirked on Maan and then Geet said:-

G:- Ofcoures I will go out with you, but over my dead body.

Geet said,Maan cloudent control he laungh and laungh at Rahul how dicht he got. Rahul got angry and walked out and thinked: Geet just wait and watch I will bring you to bed and it will be today.

After Rahul was gone, Maan got up to Geet and gave her a big simle and said:

M:- Good job Geet.

G:- thanks.

M:- You had scared me first I really thinked oyu will go out with him but,

G:- Maan how well do you know me? You know I will never go out with a person like him.

M:- Sorry

G:- it ok,

They looked at each other and stared laungh.

M:- Did you look at his face

G: yeha I saw it, to good.

But just then the phone rang and Geet got there and toked the phone

G:- hello

D:- Geet, idont know if I will come there today. I think I will say over hear for the night I have something important do dicuss with your parents.

G:- ok I will come home then.

D:- No Geet you stay with Maan or you know he will be alone at home. Or are afraid of him, she teased Geet.

G:- Daadi, do you think I am afraid of him?

D:- I was just kidding I will see you tomorrow ok bye.

G:- Bye daadi.

And put the phone down got up to maan and said:

G:- Maan daadi will not come home today she wants to talk abt something important with

M:- ok, then he got a call from Adi and he said, tht he will be satying over at his freand house

M:- Geet Adi will be satying at his friends house today, so its just you and me.

G:- OK, Maan what do you want to eat?

Maan really loved Geets, hand maid palak panner with rotti and gawjar ka halwa.

But Maan didn't want to say it so he said

M:- Geet make some pasta.

G: ok, said Geet, she knew exactly what Maan wanted to eat and she new hhe will never say it.

M:- By the way sorry for yelling at you before, when Rahul came.

Geet: Maan its ok, I know why you yelled at me, so schill, ok.

M:- Yhea, Geet if you want you can wear those cloths again, you know I don't mind. He winked at her.

G:- Geet got up to her room and changed, when she came out of the bathroom she walked down to the kitchen and stared making palak paaner, rotti and gawjar ka halwa.

After it was fineshed she called Maan and said to him to set the table. And Maan did tht. When she came with the dishes Maan opend and looked at it and got a big smile on his face, and looked up at Geet and said

M:- Geet I really wanted to eat this, witch is maid by tou for a long time thanks.

G:- Maan I knew it so pl start eting bcs I have one more surprise for you after the meal.

Geet sat down and then she got up again and said tht she has forgot something in her room. And she said it to Maan and said it to him and got up to her room to geet her phone if anybody rang. When she came in eher room, toke her phone, then she hear a click and spun around and saw Rahul

G:- what are you doing here.

R:- You will know in some min, you said no to me and now I am here to take revenge.

She was just abt to call Maan when Rahul, throwed her on the bed and got on her, Geet mange to push him, and she yelled for Maan came running up.

And breaked he door, and saw Geet on the bed and Rahul on her. He toke Rahul from the neck and push him down. Then he got up to geet and asked her:

Maan:- Geet are you ok?

She nodded positive and then she hug Maan, the she saw Rahul running trowads Maan with a knife, she pushed Maan at the side and got the knife on her back.

Maan got up and stared punching Rahul and Geet somehow mange to call to call the police and they came and toke Rahul away. After tht Maan hug Geet again and felt something wet on her back, he turned her a round and saw blood.

M:- OMG Geet you are beelding.

He sat her on the bed and got the first- ad kit. And said to Geet:

M:- Geet I have to take down the shirt a bit, is it ok?

Geet nodded positive, Maan got up and toke a showl and toke down the shirt a bit and put the sowl on the front, and then he stared to aply the medecins and bandge it.

Thts all guys I will write more tomorrow, and yes is this long enough or shud I do it more longer?

Note: if you don't get any Pm its bcs, you are not in my buddy list and if you want PM pl add me on your Pm lits

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
lovelyy update
urghhhhhhhh rahul 😡
thnx for d PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
gr8 update
Love how geet rejected Rahul & Maan started laughing
Awww both know each other so well from their actions
Want Maan 2 find out Geets secret
Urrgghh h8 dat idiot Rahul thx god he'z arrested
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

when read the first

part i knew rahul is evil😡😡😡

the he looked at geet
wow maan so overprotective
toward geet
thank god he save her
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Wowwwwwwwwww
Long one :))))))))))))))))
awesome update but rahul😡😡😡
nice was nice :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Thanx for longer update dear..
I loved the way Rahul was punched by Maan...How caring he is..And Geet preparing dishes for him..hayeeee...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
brilliant part. loved it.
rahul 😡
maan is so protective towards geet.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz can you add me in PM list .....
ur FF is awesome do continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pyaar main dance.

Chapter 6

After tht Maan got up and helped her too take up her shirt and then said to Geet:

M:- Geet i have to tell daadi, uncule and antiey.

G:- Maan pl dont tell them they will just get worried pl dont tell them, Geet begged and the said.

G:- If they know abt tht then they will get angry at me and you, it can be like i cant even come here, pl Maan.

M:- Geet why will they get angry at you you havent done anything bad i will talk to them dont worry. And then he called daadi and Geets parents and told them everthing tht happen.

D:- shud i come home?

M:- No daadi everthing is fine here you dont have to get worried pl let me talk to uncle.

Mo:- Maan, is Geet ok? Shued i come and pick her up? She was really worried for Geet.

M:- No uncle everything is fine here, she can rest hear and i will call the doctor and pl take care of antie and say everthing is alright here.

Mo:- yes i will do tht, and yeha i forgot to ask you. Can you take care of Geet like a month. We have to go to HP you know why.

Geets mom and dad and Geet leaved in HP first but after Daarjie gave order to Brij to kill Channi, Channi was Mohinders little sister, bcs she was in love with a guy and didnt want to marry the guy Daarjie had select for her. Before Channi could get kill she had ran away with her lover, and when Mohinder got to know abt this he toke Geet and Rano and came to delhi and stared busneiss here. Now they have to back to HP bcs Darjie has select a guy to Geet witch she will marry when she get 18, but Mohinder, Rano, daadi and Maan never let tht happen bcs they guy is not a good person. Geet never new anthing abt it first she was really little and second Mohinder and Rano had said tht there famliy died in a fire.

M:- yeha i can, its ok and yeha uncle if its needed you can take my new as you know.

Mo:- thanks Maan, can you handle Geet? And daadi ma is coming with us so you know.

M: yeha i can handel her dont worry, and pl say to daadi to take care of her you know she is when its comes to Geet.

Mo:- yeha i will, dont worry when your antie is with us do you think tht she will let daadi ma stress herself.

M:- thts right ok uncle bye

Mo:- Bye and take care.

Maan smiled and end the call, then looked at Geet how looked confused.

M:- Geet Daadi, uncle and antie are going out of country for some busniess wrok so you are staying here with me. And yes tomorrow we will go to the docter to show your wound. Come with me now we will go and eat, i want my suprise too.

Sorry guys i am really tired today, i wont promies but i will try to give you a longer update tomorrow.


and thoes how want pms pl accept my buddy requst

Love Amina

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
Urrghh h8 dat darji
Cont soon plz Xx...
Thx 4 the pm

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