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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Guys i have changed one thing Maan and Geets birthday is the same day and it will not be 14 march, you will undertand when the birthday part comes why i have changed it.

Pyaar main Dance.

Chapter 7.

Maan and Geet was on the way down, But after on step they stop bcs Geet had pain in her back. So Maan carieed her down, they sat and ate, then Geet asked Maan:

G:- Maan how will Pinky stay with she cant be alone at home, and when she is home alone so i can go and stay with her, you know na tht she needs comany.

M:- Geet very smart, but i am not dumb if you go home you will not take any rest nor will you go to the doctor and somhow yoou will blackmail Pinky, i know you very well. And yeha i am asking Adi to stay with her.

Geet maked a face, and aete after awhile both where finished with eating and Maan asked her:

M:- Geet my suprise i want my suprise now.

G:- Sorry Maan i cant get you your suprise.

M:- Why? You promised

G:- Hmmm when did i promise and i cant get up i get pain in my back you forgot?

M:- Oh yeha, if you say where it is i will get it. And promise i will not look.

G:- ok, go to the kitchen and look where the sink next to the sink its in the bowl.

Maan got in and go the bowl, Geet toke small bowls how was on the table. She opend the bowl and toke a spun and Gave it to Maan:

M:- Gawjar ka halwa yay! Geet you are the best.

Geet looked at him, he was eating like a little boy how sombody had give him a lollypop.

M:- Geet you are the best, gawjar ka halwa is the my fav dish and sepacalliy maked by you thanks.

G:- Maan you are welcome, Maan you own me one more thanks.

M:- Wtich? Maan asked confused.

G:- The thanks, to save you from the knife thing and toke it on me, you forgot? Geet said lifting her i brows.

Then Maan stared feel gultiy and said:

M:- Sorry and thanks, if you wouldent been there, i could have same wound as you , now you have it bcs of him, he said in guilt.

G:- oh come on Maan, you had done the same thing for me na? And dont feel gultiy and if you feel it, and want to return the favour then you have to help me wth somthing?

M:- Whats tht Maan asked with a confused face.

And Geet gave him an evil smirk.


PL no chuttis and chappals, i have promised you 3 word pgs and i gave you tht, infact it little over 3 word pgs, i will continue more tomorrow.


If i get many comment😉

Love Amina

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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
me First ehhehe😆
nice Part !Amina
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Maan saying 😳 Oh yeha, if you say where it is i will get it. And promise i will not look🤢🤢🤢OMG OMG OMG
Geet looked at him, he was eating like a little boy how sombody had give him a lollypop
ahhahahahhahahahha so sweet Maan Lollypop ehheheh😆
oh my Baby 😆
Geet gave him an evil smirk
ahhhhhh
i want to see her Evil Smirk 😆
Love Maaneet so much 😳
Maan to much say thx 😆

such a sweet update
con soon :D😆
Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
lovely update.......😊
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
awesome part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
amazing update love it maaneet scene so cute pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wooow this is awesome

please add me to your pm list and update soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
nice part.
loved it.
continue soon
thnx for pm
do pm when u ud again. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Ok dear...thanx for the update...waiting for more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Very nice update
Love it
Mauhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Wonderful
Amazing
Fantastic job
Thanks 4 da pm
And do pm me plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80

Pyaar main dance

Chapter 8

M:- No Geet, i know what you are thinking. But i not gonna do it forget tht.

G:- Do yoiu know what i want?

M:- Yes in know, you want me to have girl clothes on and go to school, with make up and everything. Right?

Geet looked digust at him.

G:- Maan what do you think i am a bimbo or what? I had never imagen tht you will say somthing like tht are you crazy i doi want you to go clad in girls clothes in school, i am not dumb i let you or some one eles do such stupied thing. Thanks for the dinner good night, she said angry and try to go up to her room.

M:- Sorry Geet i didnt mean tht i was just kidding, let me help you.

G:- No Maan i know tht you wasnt kidding i know you to well, you cant lie and let me be i can go myself. I hate you Maan

She tried to walk but she got pain in her back, afters om sec she was in the air, she looked up and saw Maan carry her, he looked at her and smiled but she looked down in anger insted. Maan got upset. They came to her room and Maan plased her on the bed.

M:- Geet i am really sorry i promise i willnever ever do tht again.

G:- Promise.

M:- Promise, ok what ever, what do you want me to do.

G:- you have to help me set up the room.

M:- What, no i am not gonna do tht, i will more go to school with girl clohtes on.

G:- Why do you dont want to help me setup the room?

M:- bcs i dont know what it s gonna be and you dont have telled me yet, wasie does daadi know abt the room? I mean what you are gonna do there?

G.- yes ofcoures, everybody know it, Adi to. But he has promied me tht he will not tell you. And gave him a evile smrik.

M:- Geet its not fair.

G:- ok, will you help me or not? Bcs i really wanna get it done this month.

M:- ok.

G:- Yes, Maan you are the best, i love you.

Maan looked socked at her.

G:- i mean like a friend, she said embaressed, we will start after school and after we have been at the doctor. OK

M: OK, and yeha i will be with you the whole day in school tomorrow, ihope you havent forgot tht we will have all ower lecuters togther. He winked at her and said good night and go to his room.

Next Moring Maan came in to Geet room and saw she was having truble to come up from the bed.

Maan asked her what she wanted and said clothes she needs to change for school, Maan got them out and said:

M:- Geet it ower birthday next week and its ower 18th birthday to what will i get from you.

And looked at Geet how looked sad he asked her what happen she said:

G:- its ower 18th birthday, and no mom, dad or daadi. I will miss them.

M:- Me to.

Then Maaan caried her to the bath room and said get ready fast, he got down, toke the breakfast and got back in the room and saw Geet had manged come back herself.

They bothe ate breakfast toghter and the driver came and said tht the car is ready to leave Maan caried Geet to the car and they went of to school.

Precap: Sasha fuming in jealousy and and anger, she push Geet down the stairs and Tasha ( Sahsas only friend) brokes the friendship with her, Geet in hospital.

Guys i dont think i will update on this weekend, bcs i am gong to Norway, but my ester holiday satars on Monday so you will geet much much longer updates.

Love Amina

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