MG FF - Gharwali, Baharwali - note page 149 06/12

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

nice concept.

bechara maan wanted a wife but is getting a buisnesswoman. hehehe....

continue soon.

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

awesoem udpate dear
loved it
can't wait to read the engagement part
update soon

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123pritha

@123pritha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

nice update

feel sorry for maan

continue soon

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lovelycutietedy

@lovelycutietedy

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

ha ha ha geet seems to be like a practical girl.... lets see how would maan impress her............

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Maaneet_Deewani

@Maaneet_Deewani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

lovely!!!! waiting to see how maan woos geet n wins her heart....

i can't believe tht geet started talking to maan abt business instead of saying a good-bye... 😆

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

I so loved Geet & Maan convo ; Geet is no - nonsense kind of girl 👍🏼 if she's game she plays it fair n square ..... 2 instances proved this ............ the 1st 1 when Mohinder confronted Maan about Geet's sudden change , she came to manage the situation .

But when she was alone with Maan , she straight came to business 👏 I really loved how you've built up character neatly 👍🏼 👏

Maan is head over heels smitten by Geet 😳 ; come to think of it who would'nt be 😉 This Geet's an Enigma ⭐️ ; a woman defined by her own set of rules 👏

I applaud you coz this is by far 1 of the best characterization of Geet I've come across 👏

Fab update , loved it & thanks for pm ..... 😃

Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago