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Posted: 14 years ago

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Congratulations on your new thread

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Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Pls update soon..... Deewangi also pleeeeeeej

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Eva Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

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CONGRATS ON D NEW THREAD

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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-truly magical-
part 164

he couldn't complete & Maan smashed his face on the wall & punched him ferociously screeming madly she is alive..samjhe tum.. she is alive.. nothing can happen to her.. Maan Singh Khurana won't let anything happen to his wife.
Guatum - u can be arrested for that Mr. Khurana
Maan shot an agonized look to them & walked away. He didn't know wat he was supposed to do now. He definitely was not going to wait for them, or wait for Geet to make her way out herself. He had to get her out. If they can't do anything he will do !! but wat can he do any way. He had no clue about Davis had underworld connections, actually a don. Geet tum sach main pagli ho! Kyun karti ho mujhe se itna pyar.. nahi kabli hoon main tumhare pyar ka. I don't deserve u jaan. He sat in the car gathering as much as information as he could.

He checked the time, it was time to pick up maansi. He spend good part of the morning with Guatum Kumar & then gathered all the information on Davis & his gang. But he couldn't do much. As the time passed his heart was sinking, the final blow was when mk took his phone & tried calling Geet & very cutely she asked - mama kanha hain?
She was used to Geet not coming home at times but, Geet always reassured her calling, talking to her, even if Geet was in hospital she would call & speak to her, never in a stretch she has stayed 24hrs without seeing or talking. Mk began to feel her absence. Maan didn't see that coming. How could he not expect that. Yet again he was talking things for granted. He was worried for Geet since morning, but not even once the thought stuck him Mk would come up with this question, off course a child would miss her mother. wat will he reply now, he was mum. He didn't know wat to answer. He probably would have broken down, because he missed Geet much more than anyone else ever could.
Maan - mama office main busy hain
mk - mama always busy, mujhe mama ko aapni unit test note book dehkana hain
Maan - daddy ko nahi dikhavogen?
Mk was really excited - u will see my notebook with me?
he was shaken from his heart, his baby feels that he doesn't have time to see her little progress. How could that be, he would give up every thing just to be with her.
Mk - I thought u only see my notebook at night, when u sign it for me
he hugged her tightly.. Geet has been forging his signature too.. jaan u have to be here for us. U can't just leave me with our love, I won't be able to take care of her the way u did. I won't be able to create ur illusion.. U have to be with us he let a silent cry hiding his face in her helplessly.

He dropped her home & called up raj. The only person who he thought could help at this moment. Raj didn't answer his call. He kept on trying endlessly. Mean while arranged a helicopter to reach his base. High security was arranged in the base as Maan Singh Khurana was arriving. Every one wondered why was coming there at the first place. Raj didn't even want to see his face. He won't know wat he might just do.

As the helicopter landed. They officers gathered to give him a warm welcome. Officer in command was Raj then, he had to be their as a protocol. Maan immediately rushed to him - I need to talk to u now.

Raj faked a smile in front of every one - meren cabin main chal ke baat karten hain
Maan looked around & preferred that. The moment they walk in the cabin. Raj locks the door & starts punching him. Maan tries to block it away .. raj please meri baat suno..
raj trust another round punch just missing his face, slipping next to his ears
Maan shifted his head right dogging the punch - we don't have time for all this
raj loosened his collar button bouncing on his feet to kick him - right I should have killed u long back he trusted a kick straight into his stomach. Maan curved backward with the impact & coughed..Maan took in a sharp breath & pulled out his tie. Raj trusted another punch, Maan caught his hand turning it backward & pushed him on the chair. He tied his hands backward with the tie & pulled his hanky tied his mouth.

Raj moved furiously to free himself. Maan knew he had just few secs before raj would free himself, it won't be that difficult. He kneed down to meet his eyes. If looks could kill then.. thats wat it was in raj's eyes he would kill Maan the moment he opened that knot behind. He didn't care about any one any more.
Maan - its about Geet.
Raj instantly eased. Maan realized he got his attention now, he untied his hand. Raj punched his face.

Maan licked the blood with his tongue & turned his neck. While raj undid his mouth. His hand raised again Maan held it in mid air.
Maan - some davis gang has kidnapped Geet
raj - Davis is dead
Maan - Geet killed him
raj - it was food poisoning
Maan - she poisoned him
raj - why would she do that
Maan dipped his head .. he was surely guilty
raj held hid collar spitting the question
Maan - Geet is Gk
raj - IPS officer.. why G..k??? the person whom he was questioning was himself the answer
he closed his eyes.. u guys where married.. he punched him again.. how dare u Maan?
Raj paced restlessly.
Maan - she disguised herself as shweeta kapoor ..poisoned his food. They have taken her, I think they are doubting her connection in it. As of now they don't know shweeta is GK.. cops r not doing anything as she was by own in this. They don't want to interfere as this may disclose her ID as gk & the doubt that they have shweeta's hand in davis killing will be confirmed.
Maan said all that in one breath..
raj - all because of u .. u know that right!!!
Maan nodded sadly.
Raj thought for a while.
Maan - they had lunch together
raj - no that can't be
raj clinched his fist - if something happens to gudiya I will u
tear formed in maans eyes - main mk ko kya javaab doonga?
Raj got really scared ..he didn't even want to think they have a child & Geet brought her up all alone - mk??
Maan - humari beti
raj couldn't even imagine his gudiya with little baby. She herself was a baby.. how she managed it all alone he cried .. hugging Maan.. how did she!!!

Precap
viraat knows the whiskey was poisoned

-PREV NEXT PART 165-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Sameenaas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Yeyyyy!!!! Im the 1st one to comment for the 1st time in my whole lifetime......hehehee....getting too emotional...
Update was fab 👏 👏 👏
Ehhhhh Why is Maan so helpless 😡 😡 😡
luvd Raj's reaction after he came to know the truth...... Awesome....
Hope Geet is fine..... Also waiting for the reunion of 4 frnds..... And Raj-Naina ki shaadi.... Poor guys!!!!
Luv U Di..... Cont soon
Plz update Deewangi also

Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago

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Eva Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

omg omg omg

wat an update muski

luv u yaar n mk is soo innocent

n Raj he's d man

luved it

but u did not update bout Geet's condition

plzzz update soon yaar

YOU REALLY ROCK BABE

Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
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😭 for mk...

😭 for geet...

😭 for maan...

😭 for raj...

😭 for all the readers of TM including me...

😡 at u for making us 😭

i second jyoti ...

I think i'll stop asking you for updates .. coz after the pleading for "acha update" we end up getting a more terrifying one ... so to save my self from the heart break .. i shud stop asking for it 😡

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

fantabulous updater⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

i just didn't even think he would involve raj in this matter, you totaly blew me up with it

poor mk why is her luck such hard on her i.e. you muskan 😒

now gradualy maan is getting all the happenings & illusions geet have created in mk's life for a fatherfigure😭

how he will ever cope up😕

the way raj reacted in the cabin was fab & punches maan got were excelent

love the way maan controlled raj & tied him with his tie & seal his mouth with hanky😆

why didn't prem tell raj about geet's arrival & Jr mk??????

cont soon

great update & thank you for giving us hope on GHSP's 1st b'day for gk's safety😊

plz cont soon 😉

Edited by -memorable- - 14 years ago

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my_maan_geet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

congrats for new thread di............

awesome update as usual.................raj is so nice...........how badly he misses his gudiya😭............really he is so nice..........and also i liked maan's move that he goes to raj...........ab thodi akal aane lagi hai😡..................i hope wo dono geet ko jaldi se bacha lein......

thanx for such a nice part di...........

Edited by my_maan_geet - 14 years ago