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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

well that was great part..loved reading it.

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Hey Guys:

I am back with my updates...I have an important question to ask you guys: Do you guys not like my fan fics? I have noticed that I am not getting much response from any of my fan fics..if you guys don't want to read my fan fics anymore..let me know I will stop all my fan fics at once...it is quiet disheartening to see that with each update the level of response is decreasing...

I know that I don't respond back to any of your comments its just that I am very busy and with whatever time I get I update...if you all noticed I am not around IF at all or read any of your fan fics..I want to but I don't get around to it...so I want to apologizes to those who write fan fics and also read my fan fics but don't see me doing the same for you...I want to but don't have time..I read few fan fics whenever I have time and try to comment when I can...but like i said if you guys don't like my fan fics at all than let me know I will stop updating right away...I don't want to be wasting your time and my time as well...😳 (and I don't mean this in a "bad" way even if it sounds like that..😳)

I will be updating this in English from now on!

Chapter 5

Everyone sat at the dinning table..while the servants serve everyone...Dadima kept looking at Geet from time to time...very happy to see her culture and respect for all the elders..she knew that she will be the right person for him...

Anushka: Dadima everyone is here but where is your grandson Maan? (Whispers in her ears)

Dadima: he is getting ready..he will be here soon...don't worry

Anushka: I hope this goes well..I didn't tell Geet that she is here to see a boy or else she would have not come

Dadima: Main hoon na...don't worry (Anushka sighs and goes back to eating)

Madhuri: So Geet beta what do you do now?

Geet: Ji I am taking classes at Delhi University..I love studying

Dev: I go there...I will show you around college...and introduce you to my friends

Geet (smiles): Thanks but I know how to find my way

Dev (looks at her and smirks): No problem..we will surley see each other after school and hang out

Ronit: Geet beta if you have any problems at all let us know...

Geet: Ji thank you...

Madhuri: Lo Maan aagaya (she says as Maan comes to the dining table..he says namaste to everyone)

Dadima: Maan this is our guest...you know our friends Mr and Mrs. Handa and this is their daughter Geet (Geet looks up from her plate to look at Maan..she gets shocked and stands up)

Both: Tum!

Dadima (got happy and so did everyone on the table except for Dev): You guys know each other?

Maan: Haan yeh wahi chudail hai jisne mujhe aaj tapad mara tha

Geet: Tumne mujhe chudail kaha

Maan: Chudail ko chudail nahi toh kya pari bulaoon?(Geet and everyone is shocked by Maan choice of words and Dadima is imagining Maan and Geet as bride and groom) ek minute yeh toh main tumhne chudail kaise kehe sakta hoon...(Geet looks at him confused) Mujhe toh tumhe bandari kehena chahiye...tum bandari jaise joh dikhti ho

Geet: Shut up...main bandari nahi tum bandar ho...nahi nahi tum bandar nahi tum toh ek dum buffoon jaise dikhte hoo

Dadima: Chalo aacha hai ek hai bandar aur ek hai bandari kya jodi hai (everyone laughs) now it has been decided you two will get married...(Dev spits out the food from his mouth and excuses himself)

Both: Kya!

Both: Shadi?

Both: Aur isse (both point at each other)

Anushka: wow you too are already talking in sync...

Ronit: Maan take a seat and eat something

Maan: No I cannot eat after seeing her face

Geet: What do you mean?

Maan: I mean that I lost my appetite looking at your face

Geet: Who want to see your face either

Maan: Like I want to see your face...Now I am sure I will have nightmares all night long thinking about your horrible face

Madhuri: its good at least you will think about Geet...

Maan: mom what are you saying...I won't get married..you know the reason why

Geet: waise bhi tum jaise buffoon se kaun shadi kaun karega

Anwesha: You will Geet...now lets eat in peace after dinner we have a lot to discuss

Geet: But mom

Rahul: But nothing..we will discuss this later

Both Maan and Geet look at each other worried
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Maan: Dadi please I can't get married...why don't you understand

Dadima: I don't want to hear anything...you are getting married and that is final

Maan: Why don't you have Dev marry her...I won't marry that chudail

Dadima: You are the eldest...you have to get married first..

Maan: But I can't I devoted my whole life to Pandayji...I can't even think about marriage or even touch girls...it will ruin all my hard work

Dadima: I don't care...you will marry Geet and that is final...

Maan: No...I am not going to get married..(he gets up to leave the room..as he was about to open the door he hears Dadima crying...Maan goes up to her) What happened?

Dadima: I don't ask for much...I am getting old and all I want is for my grand kids to get married before I leave this world...I thought I could depend on you but I was wrong...Maan ke Dadaji please call me to you..I can't stay here anymore (looks up at the ceiling..with folded hands..while Maan looks at her with worried expressions)

Maan (wipes her tears): Ok Dadima...mujhe bas thoda waqt chahiye kya woh mil sakta hai?

Dadima (gets happy): yeah yeah take your time but let me know as soon as possible

Maan: Ok (he leaves the room.while Dadima is happy that her plan worked)
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NO NO NO NO NO I AM NOT GETTING MARRIED TO HIM!!!!

Anushka: I don't care...we know what is best for you and we have decided to get you married to Maan...you should be lucky

Geet: Lucky? how can I be lucky...you know that I don't have any marriage plans yet..I want to study

Anushka: Don't worry I have spoken to Dadima about this and they are completely ok with you studying after marriage

Geet: But mom..I don't want to get married just yet..why don't you understand
Rahul: Geet we as your parents know what is best for you...we won't make any wrong decision concerning you

Geet: But papa he called me a chudail and whatnot..and did you see the way he dresses..he is so not my type

Rahul: he will change his dressing style after marriage am sure you can help him with that...and as for names you slapped him remember and I don't think I even want to know why you even slapped him...

Geet: ugh I hate you both!!! (goes up to her room and slams the door)

Precap: Geet and Maan together...

Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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cue1

@cue1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Waahhh kya baat hai...by swearing and calling each other names baat pakki

LMAO!!

Im loving it

Please add me to your PM list and update soon :-)

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

awesome update::

loved their confrontation

omg they start calling each other names infront of their familys

glad dat maan had agreed to this marraige after dadi's fake act

maaneet together,,,get ready for WW3😆😆

i luv your fan fics,,,i've read every single one of them,,you are such a talented writer i would be so sad if you stopped ur FF'z ,,plz dont do that

cont soon Xx...

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

Oh how did I miss that?
What a cute update.
I'm so happy maan called her a chudail. Hate it whn girls raise
hands over men n think that they've done sumthing amazing and viceversa.
R u really going to get them married very soon. I wish u give them sumtime b4 wedding.
Do write soon.
For now I'll go to n check if I missed updates from ur other ffs too.
Thank u so much for a wonderful update.

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

r u seriously seriousss

oh goddd

me jumpinggg

maan talked no no sorry fighted with a girl n didnt say any of those mantras of his

wowww

nw pandeji u better find a new student

maan tho gayaaa

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

the firs bit was so funny...with maaneet calling each other by names...n dadi she managed to get her way out...she was even imagining them as a couple...lol...continue soon...