Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#621

Ahhh! Most of my comments start like this! What are
you doing to us!? I'm still hyperventalating... This update was out of this world amazing!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what G does next. *grinning evily* :)

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#623

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Whoa Devi! back to the regular updates. Thank you for that.

Well what can I say about the encounters...there is something about the way you write sensual scenes...they are still every bit alluring at yet coming out 'clean'. Its a knack that doesn't come easy. As I was saying the other day..."its show and not tell", have us conjure the mental images based on our appetites 😉. Very well done indeed.

As for Rescue goes, I'm so hooked to the new revelations that await after this. Now that the truth about Aditya is in the open, not sure how Devyani's role at home is going to change. Of course also about how Gaurav's own image of his mother will alter.

I'm all eyes...(if that idiom is acceptable...)

Great updates Devi.

Hasini

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#624

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AHHH! So close to sandwiching your update! Oh well, Oh ho, Mother to the rescue?! Interesting. And the REAL CUP is dead? Then who is this faker? what does she have to with them? The last line was amazing... :D Thank you soo much for the updates!!!! 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
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AHHH! So close to sandwiching your update! Oh well, Oh ho, Mother to the rescue?! Interesting. And the REAL CUP is dead? Then who is this faker? what does she have to with them? The last line was amazing... :D Thank you soo much for the updates!!!! 😃

Sorry Devi...not sure if I can answer...

Fickle only points to Gaurav and Salmoe's text conversation Krishna...Do you remember?

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#626

Devi you're amazing! .. I wished for them to be free..and TADAAA they're free in the next update!
the only person who told Gaurav that his love was fickle was Salome... so it is her!?!?! I fail to understand why she would chose such tortuous ways to prove her point?
Great update!
I'm want more now...pretty please :D

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#627

Devi, if the last one was an explosion, what was this ? GOD, you manage to depict the intimate scenes in the most sensuous ways...i really admire your writing skills...they are bang on.😆

So the mystery deepens - i liked this theory of the ultimate revenge that Devyani could take was that the SSP loved her illegitimate son more than his own son...that was a great thinking indeed..

And so the CUP has been bothering them for quite some time...and this is not the original one..

Its good that Vidya fainted and I loved Gaurav's acknowledgement at the end 😃

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Apsara1

@Apsara1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#628

I have a couple of questions. Why did the fake CUP let them go when she didn't get Brahmanand even though she went through all that trouble? I don't understand that. How is the mom coming made it okay for SSP to not come? Is it because CUP got Brahmanand since he went to Aditya?

After reading the update three times, I finally realized that SSP thinks that Aditya is his son. Am I right?

Any response will be helpful... 😆

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#629

oh man oh man! made my NIGHT!

oh the parting line... i feel like i just keep sighing! I HOPE AND WISH AND CROSS MY FINGERS... that maybe just maybe she heard that...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Apsara1
I have a couple of questions. Why did the fake CUP let them go when she didn't get Brahmanand even though she went through all that trouble? I don't understand that. How is the mom coming made it okay for SSP to not come? Is it because CUP got Brahmanand since he went to Aditya?

After reading the update three times, I finally realized that SSP thinks that Aditya is his son. Am I right?

Any response will be helpful... 😆

I am going to leave this up to other readers to answer as any answer from me would be considered definitive.

Any takers?

-Devi