Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#611

Yaaay ... I caught an update before your PM caught me !!!!

Ok ... ok ... I admit 😳 ... I was lurking about in the hope of an update ... and what an update I got !!!! 👏

I'm not even going to try to describe how I feel !

This is def edge-of-the-seat stuff...

You... my dear girl, have taken me to fantasy land !

What a way for a husband and wife to have their first physical 'encounter' ...

The CUP certainly knew what she was doing ... she knew putting these 2 together like this was gonna be explosive ... and that it would tear off the mask of complacency that the 2 of them wore as far as physical attraction was concerned !

Interesting ... so G never felt this way with Salome ?? ... V awakens the 'beast' in him that may be his father's legacy !!!!

What next ????? ...

Are you going to take pity on us and maybe free an arm each ????

Sighhh ... !!!!!!

Edited by rusha4003 - 14 years ago

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#612

i want that gentle kiss that she hopefully takes part in...

god you light the page on fire with your amazing writing. i feel so helpless yet content for them. I wish she feels as consuming as he does...

thanks for updating so fast!! keep them coming need them!

Edited by bushrayou - 14 years ago

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Aisha

@LoveLiveDance

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Posted: 14 years ago

#613

omg what an update loved it...waiting for more

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#614

OMG... I have no words to describe past 2 updates.. Absolutely Fantastic!!!

But I still wonder who is CUP and what is its motive??

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charlie1950

@charlie1950

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#615

u have left me alot of time speechless they

way ur write the sensual parts.

well whosever CUP is have a good

grip on the pschology of humans thats

how he/she ended up being psycho

himself/herself

wht a plan to bring the inner most feeling

of gaurav and vidhya like this.

makin them die for each other touch

though the plan as such is to kill

the lovebirds no matter but wht a

pathos and ectasy

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Apsara1

@Apsara1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#616

Amazing update... Thanks for updating it soon! Can't wait for the next one! 😃

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#617

That was smoking hot ☺️

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arabianpaki

@arabianpaki

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#618

Woahhh baby!!
Totally agree with Lip-a-Licious!

I cant wait for them to be free ;)

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priya..

@priya..

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#619

Awesome!!!

G is realizing what an awesome woman V is..He is telling her stuff he noticed, but has not allowed himself to feel it ..until now that is!!! I am afraid all this passion will be hidden the moment the shackles come off...

Update super soon devi!