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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

ANKU! Tu ne likhna shuru kar diya? AHHHHHHH :D Let me just tell you once again, you do NOT suck, you're such an amazing writer, and I feel like the words almost just come to you because they flow together so so so beautifully! Now, that I know you so well..I'm not gonna hesitate one bit in asking for an update! So be ready, because I'm a greedy reader, and I like fast updates 😳 ESPECIALLY, for fics that are so good like yours!

You know how much I love Armaan, he's the definition of perfection for me, but you seriously just made me fall in love with him all over again with your first part! Do you realize yourself how beautifully you wrote down all his emotions? You can see that his love for his basket is so deep, and she's honestly so lucky to have him! Pshht, he almost needs her more than she needs him and I love how you showed that!

The cute little romantic moments between them made me smile! The way he held her in his arms and rocked her like a baby, the way he knew that she was hitting him to hide her blush,the way he carried her in his arms around the house saying whats the need of a wheelchair when he's there..it was all so so so adorable, and I LOVED it. Like Kashu, I've always wanted to see an AR scene after the shootout, but DMG never showed it..but you fulfilled our wish for us!

I absolutely loved loved loved the part, keep writing Anku because you seriously are an amazing writer!

Love you tons🤗

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

awesome!!!!!!!!!!! great start n very very interesting concept......

love it!!!!!!!!!!!

cont soon 😊

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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

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aww Anku so good to see you writing 😳

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okay so sorry for the late edit :|
loved the part. I could totally see KaJen doing that kind of a scene <3

hayye I wish it was like this only after the shoot out :|
but I won't get into that cuz that will only make me sad

I loved how you started out! aww Ridz :(
I have known people who were on bed rest and everything. Life is hard for them. and what Armaan is doing is so sweet :)
I can't wait to see Ridz back on her feet 😳

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey ...
i seriously luvd ur ff...
specially bcoz there was no season 2 in it........
hoping to read further ..
do continue.....
n pls add me to ur pm lisst....

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Noma

@Nomaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Ankitaaaaaaa! Damn this is soo gooddd! I love you're writing its AMAZINGGG! hkhzhfksdhzuihsnvis I loved thiss :| i loved how you described their waking up routine! and OMG! You made me fall in love with Armaan even moreee! HAYEE :| you really need to write the next part JALDII! cus i dont like waiting :S tehee! Ahh i cant wait for the next part love <3333

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Julie

@JULIEL

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

WOW!!! That was amazing .... totally loved reading it and soooo looking forward to the next update!!

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Aakansha Agarwal

@Jenniferfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

hey nice start
loved the concept
add me to ur pm list
cont soon

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annihilation

@annihilation

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Anku - 🤗

I'm so glad that you have taken to writing FF's.

You remember this post of yours :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1375321/armaan-and-riddhima-moments-our-choice

When I had read this post first, I didnt know you at that time.

But after reading it, my first impression was 'Woah! This girl has talent!'.

Seriously, believe me from that day onwards, I always looked forward to read your topics/posts/comment because you write so well.

Coming to your this part, really it has been given a very good start.

It is sure to bound readers attraction and make them stick to this one for further updates.

I loved how you have completely abandoned the existence of DMG season 2.

Seriously, season 2 wasnt something people would like to get reminded of.

(If you dont consider AR and gang moments)

I liked how this one has been given a fresh start because had you included characters from season 2 too, it would have been easy for readers to predict.But this one's got fresh angle to it and readers are going to like it.

Really liked the way you started off with Armaan's thoughts.

Riddhima not being able to walk and Armaan doing all that he can for his love is so touching.The whole setup is nice, like both are in US, just the two of them, with their unconditional love for each other and their share of difficulties.

It will be interesting to know what all happened during and post shootout and how these two will cope up with the challenges life is going to throw at them.

All in all, a very good start.

Sure the credict apart from you goes to your friends who forced you into this.

So, Siddhi, Sary and others - great job!

Add me to the list of pesters! LOL!

And to your PM list as well :)

Looking forward to the next part.

All the best and Loads of Love :)

Edited by herms_angel - 14 years ago

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@awarapan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

edited.
So I'm extremely late, woops! :$ Meri gaalti nahin hai, psssssht!

OKAY. SERIOUSLY. You can write damn well, jaan! You've honestly come so far. I LOVED your first part, and everything you've written ever since. I know I'm supposed to comment only about part 1, LOL, but I'm gonna comment about everything I've read all in here, tehe!

Jaan, I'm honestly SO amazed at how far you've come as a writer! You really are honestly amazing! The way you write is so intriguing. You've developed your plot line so brilliantly, and you've brought it to a point where everything is so calm, and serene, but at the same time you've laid this strong foundation where everything is intertwined, and makes sense! Honestly, I LOVE reading your FF, everything about it is so fantastic, and I LOVE how you've made Armaan the back bone to Ridhima's life!

I've always read many different versions of AR's life after the shoot out, and I've written many myself, but honestly reading yours, it's so realistic, and it's something I can actually see happening! AND I LOVE that about you! YOU have honestly gripped this storyline so well, where you narrate this amazing story, both from Armaan's and Ridhima's point of view! You don't influence one's decision upon the other. You resolve all conflicts with a mere moment of patience and reasoning, and you always have a way out of all the little kinks in their lives!

You've brought this FF from a point where everything was dark and gloomy, to a point where everything just stands out, and is so happy and calm! You've honestly mastered this FF. And you really have a long way to go with your writing skills! I'm so proud of you for taking a step forward and writing, because honestly, jaan, you're an amazing writer! I love you for staying strong, and continuing this FF everyday, or so, because not many people *like me* can possibly have a continuous FF! Yikes! It's a big pain, but at the same time, you manage to write so amazingly, where all I can do is scroll down for more words, and wait to read more on my favourite couple!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your concept. Let's get that clear! I LOVE how you have Ridhima paralyzed, but despite that, the Armaan we all know and love, LOVES Ridhima nonetheless. I adore the fact that he was so courageous and took Ridhima out of the country without marriage, and is leading her life with her and is making her so strong, and so happy! It makes me happy to see that! It's so enlightening! Eeks.

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER, JAAN! I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH! <333

PLEASE continue writing this amazing FF, I CANT WAIT to read even more from you! I honestly am in fits of anxiety when I see your update! Tehe :$ THANK YOU SO MUCH! Keep updating, love! <33

MUAH! I promise to comment on next part, with no delays! <333

LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU!

Edited by Phatty16 - 14 years ago

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sanju

@Sanju_

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Omggggggg!!! Anku what a great start yaar [=D>
I'm speechless the way you have written, the concept everything is just so awesome
How I wish dmg cvs were creative enough to forward the show using this kind of storyline but you have done an amazing job
Complete justice to armaan and riddhima's characters because we know this is what should have had happened coz this is so ARish!

Edited by KaJenYaianSanju - 14 years ago

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