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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorryyy I had to go eat dinner 🤣


OMG Shru awesome songs 😳 but its not so tough to spam a thread is it 😆 maybe we should take classes from the head here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yooohooo Anku's back! Go reply to my comment, at least start, because its too long anyway! 🤣

6 more pages x 8 posts per page = 48 posts! C'mon we can do it! 😎
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Posted: 14 years ago
Is anyone excited to see Mere Brother Ki Dulhan? I think Katrina's acted well in it, by the look of the trailers... 😲

Sigh, I can't even watch movies anymore. Screw you exams.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anku, you better give special mentions about mine and Aanya's world class contributions! 😳 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just realized the reason behind Aanya becoming IF-Dazzler before me, in spite of me having joined IF before her... She's the best spammer! Aanya, I bow down. 👍🏼

And its been exactly a year since I joined IF! Wohooo!

I swear I'm going to be banned if the Mods come to know. :|
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Res, will get edited on 25th! =)


*Edited*

Say YAY! 😃

Okay, I don't know yet, if its going to be long or short, but you'll get to know at the end now won't you? 😆

"He looked at Muskaan who was standing silently at one corner of the room, waiting excitedly for all the drama to start, wanting to be entertained by the 'Forever evergreen 'couple."

🤣

Muskaan just cracks me up, man! But you know what, I really do appreciate her character in this story, because in spite of all that she herself is going through, she's still helping AR deal with their lives! Its so damn sweet, and honestly, it is very hard to find friends like her..

Coming to the rest of the chapter, I think it was your best update till date! Honestly Ankita, every word, every emotion, depicted so nicely, I felt like I was there, sitting next to them while they vented it all out! And all I wanted to do, was hug and kiss Armaan, well who doesn't, eh?

And Armaan, LOL, he's so right, Riddhima would take eons to take a decision herself! That's Riddhima...

But at least, he finally put all her fears to rest.. That's exactly what they both needed at this time... And I was right! She was afraid of everything I felt - fear of losing Armaan, of no change after treatment and of losing their last hope which she was so hopelessly hanging on to! Yay!

And somehow, Riddhima had once again managed to turn a blind eye to all of Armaan's insecurities... And I know this update was supposed to be all about Riddhima and her fears, but I'm waiting for the day Armaan vents it out, vents his fears out... Not that Riddhima's unknown to them, but he needs to speak it out sometimes as well.. And I hope that comes some day.. LOL! But honestly, she never once gave a thought to how lonely Armaan would be without her, because it would be the same for him... But well, now she knows..

"Come on Riddhima, I want MY Basket back , the one who fought against me, and went to every extent just to prove her wrong also right. Today fight WITH me , and prove it to me ki tum meri Basket hi ho. Agar apne liye nahi kar sakti toh mere liye hi sahi. If you give up even before trying, ye tumhari nahi meri haar hogi.Kya tum mere liye ye bhi nahi kar sakti basket?"

Okay, see when I read people's work, be it FFs or novels that I read, I always think about how I would right them, and just like that, I imagine scenes I would put in, dialogues I would put in if I was writing the story. And I'm so glad you read my mind, because you wrote the exact words I wanted t you to.. 'I want my Basket back.' I read that, and I had the biggest smile on my face! I was like, Yay! LOL! But honestly, its so perfect for this confrontation isn't it? I mean, this is hardly the Basket that we all knew before the shootout, and its time Armaan gets her back, he deserves it don't he? I <3 you for this Anku!

And I loved Riddhima's answer to that as well!

So finally, we can start counting days until we get our Basket back! Oh, I can't wait...!

And as well know, 'Distance makes the heart grow fonder..'

And now we can all look forward to a new beginning, a new story... And I can't wait for that!

May I just add, I hated how DMG dealt with this issue, they never showed in depth how AR felt about the shootout, except for a few dialogues here and there. These are traumatic incidents, and they don't just fly right out of the window, which was exactly what DMG made it seem like, and I'm glad you came up with a story which revolves around this, and honestly, I couldn't have thought of a better way to write this than you have!

I love this story, and I love the pace at which things are unfolding, its just right.

Kudos to you, Anku! <3 COME! And <3 you for writing it!

Now, go, and continue fast, or else I'm spamming your thread BIG TIME! 😆




AHH this is a long comment 😳. But I obviously love it totally. Just like the spamming you lovely ladies are doing here 😳.

Coming to the comment. I agreee, I love Armaan man, he never got his dues, but I am making sure he gets them here.

He did vent out his fears and insecurities this part, but of course he won't do all of it now when he knows his Riddhima needs him more at the moment.

But there will be a time when he'll pour his heart out, I have thought of it.

Riddhima was wrong no doubt, because she very conveniently forgot that Armaan shall go through the same she has to, but it was just because she was reeling under the shock, she realized on time.

From now on you'll find it a little hard to not like her 😉 LOL .

I agree with you Shru, the shoot out was a huge incident and to be honest had so much potential to take forward, but they ruined it. One cannot simply forget such an incident and its after math in a matter of days. But such an experience only gets two people closer.

Thanks for this deep analysis on the part. Makes it fun and easier for me to write.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its not tough at all Shru, the way we're going 🤣

Oh of course, I was mentally giving my thank you speech for the second thread already 😆

I replied to your comment , Oh and about MBKD , I am WAITING for it, even before that its Bodyguard for me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anku update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Anku update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭


Oh God I haven't even written enough for an installment LOL . I am writing though 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Even I'm dying to see Bodyguard and MBKD! Have you heard 'I Love You' from Bodyguard? Its awesome, so sweet! Although its soundtrack is very similar to Kyon Ki... that Salman-Kareena movie which released a million years ago... Or I probably feel that way because they're in a movie together after eons... Don't know!

I wanted to see Final-Destination 5 as well, but missed it! Only got to see ZNMD and Harry Potter!

Oh did I tell you guys - I saw Jennifer Wingett in HP-7 ka premiere? She was sitting a row ahead of me! She was dressed so casually I almost didn't recognize her, but I guess that was the whole point! 😆 But she's quiet pretty even without all the make-up, although she's tones darker than on TV. 😲

That obviously tells me DMG had classy make-up artistes, because they didn't make her fairness look like make-up! 🤣

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