-Remorse- M&G- THREAD 6 - Page 70

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The silence covered there room. A unwanted silent. There breath played along with the music. Heavy breath. With each passing second there was only love. Passion. Devotion. Geet puts her hand up to touch the water from the beautiful waterfall. Maan strokes her hand along. Geet shivers...
The water glitters along the moonlight while the harmony plaies along. Both wondered how long this will last until it clasped down like a rain.
Maan "expression is endless! Then why my heart still not satisfied?" geets eyes were playing along with water. It twinkled. Her eyes smiled in joy. The answer was simple! "our love is limitless. There are more love to discover! That's why the fear always tingled...."
Maan spines her round "why?"

Did he want me to answer this or it was simply a question! Geet observes his eyes. There was urge to discover there remorse until he finally finds love. There was urge to bare the pain. Urge to over come the fear.... But why wait? Wait for me in this unloving world. I couldn't concentrate! For fraction of moment my mind left me! Left me to the dying bed! Life is not simple or careless! We choose not to care!

His soft lips only touched my forehead but it felt different! Was it the way I looked at the whole situation! His touch was so gentle soft! A warm felling started to cover my body. The loving was different! Loving in remorse was different! A satisfaction which somehow brought a greater effect. His feathered lips gently moved down only to discover my eyes. What he felt? I wondered! How exactly was he satisfied?

Maan couldn't say much! Everything was forgotten in the distance of the dark night. Hidden beneath somewhere where he could never discover! The life was something he could not bare! This life was presses position. It was too much to bare. It was a paradise. Geets warm body took him somewhere where no one could ever took the liberty to overcome to break this bond. This bond will tear him apart if separated. His eyes filled up as her touch was only provoking him to love. Love her with beyond his knowledge. Geet opens her eyes only to find maan's closed eyes. Fighting with the tears. She Drinks them again.
Maan "why won't you punish me?" thats the only word he could utter! But there was no answer. It was there love! There was no space for punishment! Only for remorse. Regret! Regret every moment!

Ani was home. Walking up & down. It's been 3 hours now. They suppose to be home at 7 but both were late. She wanted to say something to them! & there phone was switched off at the same time! Ugh!

Hotel

Maan picks her up & walks in to there room. Not removing there gaze from one another eyes. They were lost. Geet reaction towards his touch have changed but it was still the same! She would not react back! She drops her on the bed... & before he could think he was having hard time to remove him self from her! Something different was in the air! There exchange of words only made each cell restless. restless in there love! Or remorse! Maan gave up with the mixed feeling. He gave up with all the effort he have to waste! He rather waste in loving her... He gazed at her innocent face! Something he always does but today they both were looking at one another! Speechless! There was no words today! No words to say! No words to feel! No words to love. Only them. Geet somewhere understood her exact feeling but somewhere there was still refusal! Maan have long way to go to discover his treasure! Long way... He kissed her cheek. Again & again... Softly! Gently! Slowly! Lovingly... With each passing second geet only discovered his lips on certain parts of her face. Loving her gently! Loving her sweetly... He closed her eyes & stroked his nose along with her. Geet felt the tickle. He rubbed his rough cheek against her soft! Along with few wet kiss. Geet felt sigh! He knew exactly how to love her. He knew how to get response from her... He sucks on her chine... Flowed by a bite! Something geet didn't expect! She moans & spines round instantly under maan. He smiles... A smile came to there face after such long time! Actually they never smiled! There life was so captivated in sorow that they simply forgot to even smile! A smile he have stolen from there life. He alone is the responsible! Alone to blame... He stops for while! But his concentration again lost in geet after hearing the noise of her payel! She laid on her stomach. Holding the pillow... Hiding her face with her dupatta... Geet could feel maans body weight on her back. Making the situation more venerable as her heart somewhere melting... Was remaking with his love! Maan strokes his index finger along her arm to her finger. Gently! Flowed by kiss... He rests his his right opposite of geets face. On same pillow... Geet peeps. Only one eye visible. One eye clear... Her eyes were smiling... Maan could see the sighness! The love! The passions! The remorse! Everything was there... He removes all her hair one by one... Sliding her dupatta off completely... He kiss her cheek again. Sending a warm chill down her body. She instantly closes her eyes. Breathing heavily.
Maan "do you know how beautiful you are!" geet nodes a no! & slowly slips in maans embrace. Facing her her against his chest. Maan snakes his hand round her slim body... Hiding his face on her neck...
There finger locks between one another... He gives her a gentel kiss on the back of her hand before it rests on the bed again... & slowly bends down to kiss her lips. A passionate kiss... Nibbling.......







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