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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 1
Khurana mansion :It was Late night 3:Am All relatives were settled in there guestrooms
Maan was on his way to his room when his father Raj called him to his studyroom.
Raj;Maan I know you had agreed to this marriege because of your grandfather's serious
health condition and his wish of seeing your bride.when your mother jaya was showing you
photos of girls for marriage
my friends daughter, geets photo was accidently mixed with other girls photos.
but when you saw her photo you made your decission that either you will marry her
or no one else.
It took lot of efforts to convinence my friend mahender and Rano for his
marriege.becaue geet was there only daughter so they were very scared but at last they
agreed.I must say my son's choice is too good.Maan feel shy and bends his head.but maan
I am sure that you are unaware of one thing and that is Geets age.So let me tell you she
had just completed her 12th birthday and her 13th year just sharted.Maan was shocked.Dad
I had seen her photo that was also not clear only her eyes were visible and thought she might be 16 yrs.
no one mentioned it before.Though it will still not effect my dicision of marriying her but
I might have delayed it.this was the reason my son,we have done this because of your
grand father's health.So please coperate with us .
One more important thing maan as you are 18yrs you might have started your dreams with her.
but my dear son,you have to wait.a very long wait of at least 7-8 yrs,right now she is a very small girl
neither mentally nor physically ready for this marriage.Now you have responsibility of many things
like taking care of her,her studies,as well as your studies and some times office also .
So for now you can go to your room,you can stay with her but take care of all that I said.
Maan nooded and headed stairways where his cousin Ashlesha was waiting with a smirk on her face.
she is of maan's age and has a crush on him.he always ignored her.Ashlesha Hi, maan i am so confused
you got married or adopted a child.she is so stubborn.maan 'what do you mean'you will come
to know soon.suddenly maan hear's breaking noises from his room,he runs and was shocked to see his mother and servents trying to control geets anger,which she is taking out on every small things of his room.she then started pulling all the decoration of bed shouting and crying 'mujhe ghar jaana hai'"mere ghar jaana hai".maan was first mesmerised by her beauty, soon came back to reality with sound of breaking of one last flower vase of his room.
He slowly enters his room and went to his cubord he picks his childhood toys and put it on bed .
geet was about to throw that but was attrached to cute blue bunny.she slowly picks it up and smile.
jaya was very happy with her son's act.she ordered servents to clean the room. soon geet demanded
again,mujhe ghar jaana hai. then maan said Par geet there is no one in handa havili,he lied -your
parents got some urgent work in london.then why they dint took me.because you dont have passport thats why.
look geet our parents are friends so its time we should be also friends right.

maan calls vicky and introduce him to geet vicky was 16yrs old.and in few minutes they became good friends.
so geet now that we are friends will you stay here till your parents are back,geet agreed.
Jaya was very much impressed with the way maan handled the situation.he exactly khows how to deal
with his little wife.Jaya took geet to restroom and changed her dress to simple night suit,took off her
jewellery and kept safe in maan's cubord,and left room with vicky.Now maan and geet were alone.maan changed
and was about to settle himself on sofa when geet demanded I have a habbit of bed time stories.
geet its almost morning so please rest now i will tell you story tomarrow.geet was again in tears.
maan could not take it he went to her side settled himself on corner of bed,and tells her story.slowly geet
fell asleep maan admires his beautiful wife and then tugged her in blanket.and went to sleep on sofa.

precap---Geets first cooking.

Here is my first chapter,sorry for my spelling and other silly mistakes of this ff.Once again thanks
for all love and support.
Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
aww...so cute.
amazing..
maan is so loving ,caring and understanding
supreb..
cant wait for the nxt update.
do continue soon.
thank u..
KavyaNaik123 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww,,,that was sooooooooo cute,,updt the next part soon,,cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
nice concept....keep up d good work...n zdd me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love how maan so caring & understanding his little wifey beautiful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn cant wait to read
next part
pls do pm me
i already req
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the concept.........👏👏
maaneet are so cute............
pls add me in ur buddy list................
continue plz...............
Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro..
plzz add me to ur PM list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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soooooooooooo cute... but child marriage??? she is 13 and he is 18???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am in love with your story !!
its just so cuddly , cute and exasperating. why exasperating because though one might get crazily mad with Geet , imagining her varying expressions i would let her get away with murder.
a totally adorable ff !!!!!

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one sincere request instead of doing a leap of 5 or 8 years can you grow them up gradually . like show things such as how Maan handles things when Geet gets her first crush etc etc.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good concept .Plz include me in ur PM list.

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