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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
luved it
waiting 4 d nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
wow this is really cute....... ek biwi ki saat ek bacchi bhi muft🤣


update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
aww that was so adorable .. the way MAan handled her ... and bedtime story was sooo cute ...

awesome update .. continue super soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Awesome update...loved it..
plz add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
i really like this
wow maan is so cute he told her a bedtime story :)
he seems very understanding and responsible too
plz add me to your PM list
update soon! xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Yipieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u r updating again
Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
chapter 2

Khurana mansion- Next day Geet woke up and found maan getting ready in front of mirror.
geet- good morning

maan-good afternoon geet its 2 pm,now get up take bath and geet ready.
geet-are u going to give me bath
maan's eyes widened in shock,no,never,impossible and by the way what do you mean by that.
geet -- I dont know how to take bath,my mother use to help me.
maan- -you are 13 and you dont know how to take bath.and murmers to himself such a spoiled girl.
wait i will send my mom to help u,ok maan went downstairs and informed Jaya about geet,she smiled and left for his room,
she arrenged milk and rose patels in her bathtub.then undressed geet and wrapped geet in dupatta
and took her to bathtub,Vicky comes there and was surprised to see geet taking bath with milk and rosses etc
vicky-'wow' u bath with milk is that why u are so white, milky and beautiful.
geet -vicky if u want to be like me u can join me in my bathtub.
vicky-i would love to do that but geet i want to live more,my bhai will kill me.
jaya rolled her eyes and throws vicky out of bathroom.
vicky comes downstairs where maan was sitting with his cousins Dev,Rahul,Ashlesha and Prachi.
Vicky- Bhai I am feeling very bad as just now i missed my 1st beautiful oppurtunity of my life,that to scared of u.
maan rolled his eyes seing drama of his brother,and what was it vicky.
vicky-Geet offered me to join her in bathtub,dev chocked on his drink,Rahul Ashlesha and prachi were still in shock
and bechara maan got little heart attack and gave vicky a glare . vicky ran for his life.maan smiled thinking how innocent
his little wife is. Jaya dressed Geet in plain red suit with very minimal jewellery,and took her downstairs,all
relatives were praising her beauty,Jaya first took her to maan's grand mother savitri devi who is very strict in nature
and grand father pratab singh khurana,a very polite man.they blessed geet.and then introduced her to both sisters of raj
geet this is badi bua mother of Dev and Ashlesh,and this is choti bua mother of Rahul.for some reason both bua din't liked
geet and gave her forced smile.badi bua always wanted Ashlesha on that place.and choti bua felt geet is very immature
not suitabe for handsome maan
Savitri devi took Geet to kitchen and said,as today is your first day in our house,you have to make some sweet
dish,and lunch for us.at your age i used to cook everything,but today's generation,leave it.cook what ever u can and bring it.
with that she left and restricted every one for entering in kitchen.But 'vicky is vicky 'he jumped inside kitchen from garden window.
and found geets with open mouth still in shock. vicky-geet what r u doing just start cooking dear.
geet-cooking what cooking i dont know how to cook.
vicky-I have an idea I will order food from near by restuarent and then u serve ok
geet - No vicky i dont want to cheat everyone,let me try what i can do.
lets start with sweet dish,she took a bowl added milk sugar and cereal
now dishes for lunch ok vicky,he nooded his head
she took a packet of popcorn and poped it in microwave
then took two slices of bread added salad in it took souce and decorated it with smiley on it.
vicky smiled at his innocent friend and left from same window,and joined entire family on dining table
waiting for geet.maan was restlessly waiting for geet,how much he wanted to go and help her.
but he cant disobey elders.
soon geet came with tray in her hand she uncovered food,dadi's eyed pooped out seing popcorn for lunch,
Dadaji and Raj broke into laughter .jaya praised geet saying atleast she tried her best to serve us,saying this she served
sweet cereal to everyone.and also kissed geet's forehead and presented her khandani haar.geet was very happy seeing love
of entire family.maan lovingly ate first food made by his little wifey.
precap -- farmhouse

so friends,here is 2nd chapter,hope u guys
enjoy it.sorry for mistakes.plz comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
great concept!!!!!
by the way wht's the age of maan?????????
n add me 2 ur pm list plz......
Edited by fizza25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: fizza25

great concept!!!!!

by the way wht's the age of maan?????????
n add me 2 ur pm list plz......

18..he is 18 geet is 13
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Lovelyy as usual
see i comented befor u send me PM 😆
bt sorry would not able to comment on ur updates till ne month
had my LLB [law] exams
keep writing dear
ur FF is jus awesome
geet jus tooooo cute who can offer her dever
her company in bathtun as he also became fair like her 😆
loved loved it loved it 😊

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