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part 156



Mk - mama mama I made this for u
Maan looked at Geet, she was still holding his hand behind, she didn't want mk to see is bleeding hand. Then he noticed mk was not stuttering at all.
Mk - main ne sunshine main ride kiya, she is so so so sweet. Woh bounce bounce karta hain! Ha ha ha !! Mujhe sunshine ke saath rahena hain.. she ran out.. main phir se ride karongi.
Geet finished the call & stood at the window looking at the field.
Mk was riding sunshine & Maan was walking beside her she was happy, smiling, giggling. She got ready & went down. Inhe aache se pata hain, woh inhe kitna miss kartin hain, phir kyun aisen baten karten hain. She went to the kitchen & made dinner for them. She put the dinner on the table. Mk & Maan came in fully muddy. Mk was crying sitting in maan's lap.
Geet - kya huwa?
Mk - da da ...da da ...da da ...da da ...da da ...
Geet looked at Maan
mk took his hand & showed the bruise to Geet.
Geet - kuch nahi huwa baby halka se laga hain

He snapped out of his thought - see I am perfectly fine sweetheart.
Geet - challo challo dono jaldi se naha ke aavoo.
Mk - we..we.... we.... .. w....w...w...w...w....ill ba.....ba....ba....ba.....th to...to...to........ge....ther???
he didn't understand, he felt bad that she stuttered again. So she did stutter because him & now because of his bruise.
Geet - hain baby u both can bath together.
Maan - yah yah yah !!.. it will be fun, we will do bubble bath.
Mk hugged him & kissed him with all her muddy face.


part 157

Khan knocked at the door - r u done yet
Geet - just few more minute
when she came out .. khan just dropped open is jaw & kept gaping at her. moo to band karo uncle makhi chali jae gi
Geet - moo band karo
he gulped the saliva - u look like wow!!!

He came back & took his shower. He called Daadi & asked to send devansh & anjali to farmhouse.
Daadi - wat r u doing in farmhouse
Maan - we r celebrating Mk's bday
Daadi - who is mk?
Maan - Geet 's daughter he said proudly
Daadi was little taken a back.

Daadi was totally confused why Maan is celebrating Geet's daughter's bday.
Anni - lets do this, send sam with anjali & devansh
Daadi - who teehk ho ga kya?
Anni - every thing will be fine. They will get some time to spend together.
Daadi - will she agree?
Anni - aap baat karo, she may not refuse u.
Daadi was not sure.
achi bhali itni sweet si daadi haan un se kya karwa rahe ho

She walked to mk kneed down & gave the gift to her.
Sam - happy birthday
mk ran to Maan & hid herself behind him.
Sam sighed unsure how to please kids, she was never great with them. She walked towards Maan.
She tried again - aap ko gift nahi pasand
she buried her face deep into Maan - I don't accept gift from strangers
sam - I am not stranger, I am Maan 's friend
mk hugs Maan tightly - no ..ur not
sam smiled & gave up - looks like even she knows it.. she said it on a light note straightening herself.

part 158

Maan - that is bad manners sweetheart
mk - mk don't like her.

Mk - mera horsy hain
anjali - uncle ne tumhe diya
mk had the biggest smile ever on her face, really proud & pleased.

Anjali - aab yeh wali gift kholni hain
Maan took & tried opening it for her.
mk shook her head
devansh very cutely said - yeh tho sam aunty ne di hain, kitni bedi hain
mk - mk doesn't take gifts from strangers
anjali - sam aunty is not a stranger she is Maan uncle's fiancee.
Mk innocently looked at Maan & asked - fiancee kya hota hain?
He was quiet.
She lifts his chin - batavo na, kya hota hain
anjali - fiancee matlab mangetar
mk was still confused, she looked at Maan for more explanation
Geet walked straight to mk - challo we are getting late.
Maan stood up instantly. Mk hugged Maan tightly - da da ' sto...sto...sto...sto...tears start
Geet shouts - NANNY
she comes out trembling from kitchen
Geet - put the bags in the car
nanny she opens her mouth to say lek...
Geet glares - NOW!!!
mk cries & goes in with nanny. Prince, devansh & anjali follows them.



itni achi movie story chal rahe thi. phir se larae

Maan was losing it completely with her silence & opaque look in her eyes - maan kyun nahi lethi ki tum aab bhi nahi dehk sakti mujhe kissi aur ke saath aey lo geet maan le tab bhi kya ho jae ga ose ghar aur apni life me lane k liye first step to tab bhi MR MAAN app ko hi lena pare ga na

part 159

maan kyun nahi lethi
haan..she said it looking in those eyes.
chalo ji baat hi khatam hoe. haan g to mr maan ab app ki bari he. we are waiting k yeh sunne ke baad kya kar lete haan ?

Daadi was really disturbed. Next day she goes to meet Geet.

yaar muskan daadi ji ko aram karne do kya tum bar bar inhe geet k peche laga deti ho.

Daadi - u have a blessed happy family, then why r u not letting Maan move on.
Geet's eyes burned, tears probably formed.
Daadi - I know u both had a past but it is a past, usse bhi tho khus rahene ka haaq hain. I never opposed ur relationship with Maan then but now she paused.
Geet didn't say a word, neither did she cry, the tear that formed, evaporated...dried instantly.
Daadi - I hope u understand wat I am saying.

He dropped the file on the table & turned to leave. He did know this was part of her job, but couldn't stand her this avtar. He hated himself being so helpless, he so much wanted to drag her out & punch the hell out of that davis to even have looked at her.

Geet's heart missed a beat.. for once she would be ready to sip the drink herself but Maan, no .. not even over her dead body. Geet immediately looked at Maan, the look was a clear NO. rather a strict NO!! he gulped his saliva - I don't take hard drink at this hour. kya understanding he

Later at in the evening every one was sitting at the dinning table. Maan carried mk & comes down. Mk smiles looking at the entirely family. She immediately goes & takes turn to kiss every one's cheeks, badi Daadi..ummah
anni aunty ummah
Arjun uncle ummah
dev uncle ummah
nt aunty ummah


every one was shocked then she plonked her self in maan's lap.
Daadi - aap hum sab ko jaanthe ho .. aap ne bataya nahi aapka naam kya hain?
Mk - mk
anjali laughed nahi nahi .. jaise main anni ki anjali
dev says - main dev ka devansh
mk kisses Maan 's cheeks & says aur main Maan ki Maansi
















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part 160

anjali laughed nahi nahi .. jaise main anni ki anjali
dev says - main dev ka devansh
mk kisses Maan 's cheeks & says aur main Maan ki Maansi
every one froze, blank, thoughtless for a brief moment
mk proudly said - maansi khurana, mama kehti hain main aapne da da da
Daadi offered - daddy passing an annoying look to maan
mk smiled & nodded main da da.. ki tarah hoon bilkul Maan si.. issliyen maansi


Maan sat there speechless, suddenly realizing his absence, uncontrolled grief, unspoken beliefs..the belief that took away every thing from geet, even the eternity seemed concealed now. How the years gone unnoticed. blank, thoughtless ..maansi his dream, his life was all the while in his arms, longing craving for him only him. Geet lived his dream, their angel, she was his.. exactly wat he wanted. Their little Pari like Geet. Who loved him more than anything else just like her mother.
The shock of what is not, is more disturbing...than the acceptance of what is! How could he !!!! the reality hit him hard deep he stopped and dropped..as reality delivered, ceasesed attempts nothing wat he thought so far, nothing he did so for ever made sense. Losing his attention, losing the illusion that drove him, to have and behold delusion now the delusion and THE reality ... he hated himself.. even that he couldn't.. their love didn't let him!!! he wanted to bleed himself.. that would be bliss to him but just kill them..he wanted to cry ..cry out loud to free his soul from this caged meaningless life..worthless life.. but it was not his anymore.. it was never his.. she took it with her all to herself, to treasure, to pamper, to cherish to eternity.




he immediately lifted her hugged her & cried.. nahi baby... u r very good girl u r very good girl.. u r the best baby in the world..u r sweetest, cutest the thought ..she thought he was gussa !how could he ever be.. that too when he saw her for the first time !!.. he kissed her madly.. nahi daddy gussa nahi.. daddy apani nani Pari se kabhi gussa nahi.. she kissed him back sachi..he kissed her continuously sachi sachi... kabhi nahi kabhi nahi..

Daadi & dev went to geets house. As they drew in dev pointed the name plate to Daadi..Geet Khurana! Daadi closed her eyes in misery. Why didn't she see this board in the morning before speaking all those harsh words to her.

Daadi - when did u guys get married???
Maan - london main
anni was shocked.
Daadi - mujhe badana bhi zaroori nahi samjha, u were waiting for me ask u???
wat stopped u from accepting her as ur wife???
he stood quiet looking down, he had no answer.. anything he said would be just an excuse
u r married for last 8-9yrs & I am like a fool trying to fix u with girls. Mera nahi tho kamse kam Geet ke bareme tho socha hota, handa's ke baren main socha hota. Unki beti bin byayen maa!! poor soul suffered every thing alone, when she deserved to be respected & treated like a princess.

Every thing I ever dreamt off.. babaji gave me.. beautiful, elegant, caring loving badi bahu.. & aur uski parchayen.. nanhi Pari.. meri par poti...but u kept them away from us.
maansi fever main thadap rahi thi.. she broke in tears.. aur hum usse dular bhi nahi kar saken. Hum tho phir bhi sambal jayengen..How r u going to make up for these 7 yrs of her life..her hell. Those words tore his already torn heart further. why she looked younger to anjali when she is in same class as anjali, do u know anything ??
He sadly added - pre- term
Geet did try telling him, but he didn't understand then.
Daadi held her heart & fell on the sofa.. jab humsab ko Geet ka khayal rakhna chahiya tha.. usken nakhren sahne the.. usse sarahano pur rakhna tha.. humne usse ignore kiya.. sab aapki wajah se.. why didn't u tell me before. Mana hum naraz then.. but it was because I didn't know u were married.

















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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful...... now i want maan to save her from dat dirty davis......... hez such a bas***d.... grrrrrrr
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Posted: 14 years ago
really Muskan ur just great amazing wht a perfect turn yaar i wish u could be a writer of GHSP reall i want to see write some scripts for some seirel yaar just love ur updates u r amazing hats off to you no one will be like you muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh amazing keep it up keep rocking uffff thanks to giving us such a amazing FF. muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya aaj ek aur update pllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.... loved maani .....poor MAAN!
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally muski di u have given out mk's full name maansi.... so apt
u do have a gr8 penchant for writing the story
it's been an awesome story so far
with truly magical moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting.............😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
plzz update soon.....
previous part was awesm.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luvd the update.... It was awesome..... Finally Maan has cum to know the truth........ N has no excuses to tell Daadi why he dint tell her abt their marriage........
I hope he cums out of his guilt soon n saves Geet from dat Davis...... I hope she is fine..... Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

update soon........waisay where do u get so many ideas and they all r so amazing..........

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
trully magicall
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am so, so, so happy and relieved to know that Maan's family has expressed their unconditional love and support for Geet and MK. Looking forward to lots and lots of beautiful moments when the family demonstrates their affection for these precious but long lost family members.

Anxiously awaiting your next update.

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