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Posted: 14 years ago
loved both the parts
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute.. hope this turns passionate like ur other ff!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ur FF is nice... I just read the 1st part.... Luvd it.... I guess U hav written many parts in a short time..... Concept is awesome..... I'll read the other parts n then comment..... Keep writing... All the best!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

hi

mujh sai naraz ho kia 😔
mujhai is FF ka PM bhi nahi karti, mai nai PM kia tha uska reply bhi nahi kia 😭
sorry agar koi baat buri lagi hoto 😔



You didn't get my pm? 😕😲 Sorry🤗

I have loads people on my pm list and you are on it...let me check and keep commenting as I love your comments😉

Oh yeh I just pm'd you and I could not send it your pm box is full probably thats why😆
Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10


Maan was alone in his room. Dadima came in and knocked.

"Dadima andar aye na."

"Beta aap se baat karni thi...aapki shaadi hogai main khush hoon ke aapne Geet ko chuna bahut hi achi larki hain...aur sab se ziyada muje ye baat uski pasand hain ke itne bure mahol main reh kar wo kitni saadgi hain uss main"

"Haan dadima ye main bhi sochta hoon ke kitni achi hain".

"Toh pir Maan aap usse apni biwi ka haq kyon nahin de rahe?"

"Dadima main samja nahin"

"Kal rath aap ki suhaag rath thi aur aap ne usse chuwa tak nahin..kahin ye shaadi aap ne mera moo bund karne keliye toh nahin ki?"

Maan paused and then quickly replied "Dadima don't be silly...aisa kuch nahin hain..aur aap aise hi pareshaan ho rehi hain..mere aur Geet ke beech bahut hi mazboot dor hain" he kissed dadima on her cheeks. She left not really convinced.

Maan was pacing up and down..getting annoyed *iss Geet ne dadima ko toh nahin kuch bataya..aane do poochta hoon*. Geet walked in their bedroom.

"Geet! Tumne dadima ko bataya ke humare beech kuch nahin hain?"

"Nahin toh"

"toh dadima Hitler ki tare muje sawal pe sawal kyon pooch rehi thi..ke humne wo wo suhaag rath kyon nahin manai" stuttered Maan slightly embarrased.

"Maan muje kiya pata"

He grabbed her by the shoulders and pulled her close...Geet was shocked.

"Toh kise pata hain..tumara kaam banta hain unne yakeen dilana ke hum teek hain aik couple ki tara".

"Maan muje choriye ye kiya kar rahe ho aap". Geet struggled and fell on the bed taking Maan with her. Maan was on top of her and both eyelocked..Mahhiiiiiiiiiiii moment. Dadima had come back to Maan to ask him something..she walked in and saw Maaneet in a compromising position..she smirked and shook her head *Main toh hamuha gabra rahi thi"..she left them thinking they are having a newly wed romantic moment. Maan broke off and got up and fell back..he got up and saw Geet struggling to get up..he lended her hand and she took it.

"Geet maine tume pehle bhi kaha tah ke hume doosoro ke saamne teek se rehna hain, chalo neeche aur mere paas rehna samji tum?" she nodded.

"Acha main tume aise pakarta hoon chale khaana khane?" He put his arm around her and she looked up feeling a bit hot with his closeness". She nodded. Both went down with dadima looking pleased.

"Beta aapko pata hain aap dono ko aise sath main dekh kar hume bahut khushi hoti hain" Maan and Geet exchanged glances and forced a smile.

"Aur bhabi aapko toh manana pare ga ke aap toh jadugarni hain humare bro ko mana liya...I'm shocked..main bhi aapka fan hogaya hoon..aur pata hain agar main aapse pehla mila hota toh main bhi aapki adao pe fida hojata" went on Dev.

"Dev! Baat soch samaj ke kiya karo"

"Sorry bro...dekha bhabi kitna pyar karte hain aapse..aap ki baat koi kare toh bardashat nahi kar sakte" teased Dev. Geet smiled thinking what a jovial bro he's got and look at this Dhust Danav.

"Tumne kuch kaha?" asked Maan.

"Nahin toh...Maan main upar chali".

Geet went to a spare room and started dancing. She loved to dance. She wore her dance clothes and ghungroo and danced like this. Maan went to look for her and saw her dancing. He stood there motionless in awe of her talent.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1LZpXFdrvI[/YOUTUBE]


She finished her dance and Maan incontrollably clapped. She looked up feeling shy, her dupatta was off, she quickly ran and grabbed her dupataa and was about to fall that Maan grabbed her..Mahhiiiii moment...she got up and Maan broke his stare.

"Aap yaha kiya kar rahe hain?" asked Geet awkwardly.

"Wo main tume batane ayaa tah ke kal party hain humare aik client ki aur tume bhi aana hoga" Looked Maan down.

"Teek hain kitne baje?"

"tomorrow at 9pm" Geet walked off and Maan held her arm..her breathing quickened and her heart beat increased a million times "Geet tum bahut acha dance karti ho". Geet was shocked Maan giving her a compliment? She sweetly smiled feeling a bit shy and ran off. Maan looked on in awe.

Geet ran and showered and got changed quickly...she was thinking why was Maan coming so close to her and complimenting her. She put it down to him being honest about her talent.

Maan on the other hand kept on replaying her dance. Her smiling face and her cute ponytail with lace aroound it. Then he began thinking of her yummy neck and her pretty feet..they were fair and slim. He broke off his thought and began ringing his friends.

Maan came to bed and saw Geet reading.."Geet ye tumare liye" he handed her a few bags. Geet looked and saw a white sari and some jewelley.

"Kal party main ye pehna...uhh tum meri biwi ho toh tume Mrs Khurana lagna chahiye". Geet looked on confused but she agreed.

"Geet tum meri har baat itni jaldi maan leti ho"

"Aapne meri liya itna kuch kiya, izzat dhi apni biwi bana kar toh mera haq toh banta hain aapke liye kuch karna" she looked up and both eyelocked Mahhiiii moment.

Both fell asleep in the middle of night Maan saw Geet shivering and he put a blanket on her but she still was shivering...he came close and she hugged him and he reluctantly hugged her back. He was feeling really turned on but he controlled himself.

Precap...Milao na yoo nigah humse hona jai koi guna humse...

Hit the like button and comments please...cheers honies


Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow soooooooo nic precap sounds gr8 do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...👏

maan complimenting her....thats a start....

lets c party me kya hota hai...

update soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
loving the way story is moving....😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update ... Can't wait to read what is going to happen next in the story ... Please update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
amzing part....hope nothing goes wrong at the party........

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