Ripped Apart ~3~ (Maaneet) part 25 updated - 13apr

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Hi Stawberry,

How does it feel to taste your own medicene.

Okk now on serious note.

Present track.

So my geet put up a brave show infront of the great MSK . MSK you cannot make her come on knees with your ego but with luv she will go to any extend. Geet is right at her end is his trust was not strong which broke. I think she knows him better then he knows her.

That was too blunt statement he made that he regret whatever happened between them. I know he is angry but also i know he will make her life hell, but in return he is more in pain. feeling sorry for both of them.

NO Angee this time. Vicky ko polo kilaya yaar so that uski dimaag ki baathi jaldi jaljayee and he start working towards uniting them.

Flashbacks are always sweet. But the current track is taking a toll on us i think geet should go on leave and then maan getting again restless and wild.

He thought she knew that the hotel belongs to Khurana's how low he can fall in his anger (which he is gg to regret soon ) but dont make geet forgive him easily.

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: maneet1985
awesome update....

maan is so hurt he cant see geet's eyes and see her hurt she is broken with maan's words...

maan has gone over the limit this time....

poor geet!!!loved ur update... awesome.. keep updating!!!

Thanks dear😳

in his hurt he's not ready to see beyond right now... defensive mode! but he'll come around soon

glad u liked it

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
it's ok love...no worries 😊

thanks Reya😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: zaqxsw
Hey Sonia....
Congratulations for the new thread....
I dont knw what to say about the update... 😭😭😭😭😭😭
💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔
Y are they behaving like this????
Y doesnt Geet tell him everything that happened....????
Y doesnt Maan ask her what happened which made her take such decision in life to go away frm him....???
They were such a sweet happy couple together anyone would dream of...
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Its ur words that they would be back together keeps me reading ur updates... I wish they are back together again... They are soooo sweet to face such pains in life...

About ur writing, I am speechless... U express the emotions amazingly that I can actually feel everything is happening arnd me or with me ...😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Please update soon...
I wait for ur updates sooo eagerly...
Love
Sakshi

Hey Sakshi... aww sweetie... don't worry dearie.. they'll unite😊

Geet will tell him provided he listen... and he is right now too defensive and explosive on the emotional front for he thinks she'll hurt him again!

tht past would always remains what he said was just in his anger which he himself will regret later...

thanks a ton for the appreciation dear.. i m glad tht u enjoyed the writing

sorry to have made u feel sad though😊

Originally posted by: sweginju
really amazing update

thanks dear😊

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: heermeher
Hi Stawberry,

How does it feel to taste your own medicene.

Okk now on serious note.

Present track.

So my geet put up a brave show infront of the great MSK . MSK you cannot make her come on knees with your ego but with luv she will go to any extend. Geet is right at her end is his trust was not strong which broke. I think she knows him better then he knows her.

That was too blunt statement he made that he regret whatever happened between them. I know he is angry but also i know he will make her life hell, but in return he is more in pain. feeling sorry for both of them.

NO Angee this time. Vicky ko polo kilaya yaar so that uski dimaag ki baathi jaldi jaljayee and he start working towards uniting them.

Flashbacks are always sweet. But the current track is taking a toll on us i think geet should go on leave and then maan getting again restless and wild.

He thought she knew that the hotel belongs to Khurana's how low he can fall in his anger (which he is gg to regret soon ) but dont make geet forgive him easily.

bitter🤢

as i had said... Geet will stand upto him and he is doing it right now... she wont break in front of him... definitely she knows him better... thts the reason na for so long she has been maintaining a distance

yea... anger got the better of him them... in his anger he said something tht subconciously he knew would hurt her... imagine his state when he gets to know the truth... he's going to break down himself

Anu would reappear... don't worry and Vicky ki dimag ki batti jaldi jalegi😆... well the flashback is going to end in max two updates... with the whole past in open...i told u to expext fireworks... or in ur terms... clash of titans😆

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

CLASH OF THE TITANS: cant wait......................😎

i understand he is angry and hurt...........but words stay forever........................😭

not only he said he regrets everything between them...............but actually doubted her intentions that she knew about anu and now the hotel.............😡

i can only say...............love is not the only thing that binds people together...........trust and respect equally counts if not more.................😊

he will be shattered once the truth is out............but i guess he should learn his lessons the hard way................

geet must make him drain out his last bit to get her back...............dont make it easy for him this time.................😈

as for the clash of the titans: no matter how much we drool over the DUSHT DANAV when it comes to the ultimate battle of the sexes............its girl power all the way...........😈

show him what GEET HANDA is all about....................😎

for heaven's sake update soon................expecting something grand on the 25th chapter..............😃

as for the writer : you are gifted.................god bless you................. 👏

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: euphoric

Hey Sakshi... aww sweetie... don't worry dearie.. they'll unite😊

Geet will tell him provided he listen... and he is right now too defensive and explosive on the emotional front for he thinks she'll hurt him again!

tht past would always remains what he said was just in his anger which he himself will regret later...

thanks a ton for the appreciation dear.. i m glad tht u enjoyed the writing

sorry to have made u feel sad though😊

I am waiting for it soooo eagerly...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Their reunion and I am sure it would be great... 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
About Maan's behaviour, he is expected to behave in such a way with all that happened...
I am sure u would make the reunion moment dreammmmyyyyyy....
Maan realising his anger was baseless... I have already started imagining it... 😉😉😉😉😉
Dont feel sorry please until u promise me they would meet and u have already done that...
😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Please update soon....
When are u planning to update next by the way????

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

loved it but i want to really hate maan as he is simply hurting geet without knowing the reason why she left him n hope geet is able to tell this truth to someone atleast

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mystic_dunes

@mystic_dunes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Hi there Sonali!!

i know i seldom comment on this fanfic...but i had to comment on this part,,,

i cant even tell how beautifully this part was written...Maan's, fury,angst,agony,rage...i loved the entire thing...and i might be the only one but i dont want you to clear the misunderstandings soo fast...i love this phase of the story way too much,so i dont want them too patch up soon... i know im probably sounding like sadist now...but i love these tension scenes, the fury in the air...in my opinion these scenes added the zing...the lovey dovey scenes can wait for awhile..and also once u clear the misunderstandings,,then there wont be much left in the fic and you wud probably end it...and since i m completely addicted to this fanfic i dont want it to end soo fast...(hey..its only my suggestion not to clear the MU soon,,no compulsion...u do whatever the story requires)

also one more thing that i really liked that you've kept Maan's character intact... which the CV's have failed to do so in my opinion..his tough exterior but a soft person beneath that exterir...everythings is still there...

i hope Vicky acts like a catalyst here, and bring Anu back plzzz

p.s- just want to let u know...i dont comment often..coz most of the time i read the updates via my cell, and commenting from the cell phone can get really tedious,but i am totally addicted to this fanfic..by addicted here i mean, i keep checking evryday if its updated or not... and i absolutely love ur writing style ant the way you pen down evrythng and this fanfic is very close to my heart...and yeah one more thing ... u r a beautiful writer...so when this fanfic ends...plz dont stop writing. start another one..lol

oh yeah..one more thing....update soooooon...cant wait for the next part!!