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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -dia-

So Geet doesn't know who Maan look now.
Love the sis-bros bonding they share,and their over-protectivness towards Geet.
wonderful update!!!



Yup Geet doesn' t know what he looks like... :) but it will be cool... mayb update today.. as a treat for india's win... soon after i clean up lol :P

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: PLKG90

inn

brilliant update

and wow!

yaar, can't wait for the next part!!!

DD is gonna enter in a dhamake dhaar way nah???





well he has to init i mean he is our maan right.... but how i don't know yet... but don't worry it will be good... hopefully :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mrk_1

wow i love it !!waiting for more


thank you... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
plzzz pm me next time!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

plzzz pm me next time!

continue soon!


will do... did i not send you one??? erm don't worry next time i will x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Loved ur ff... pls add me to ur Pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update.......................
loved the bonding bw brothers and sis...............
is it maan in that photo? cant wat for dhak dhak's intro............pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update.......................

loved the bonding bw brothers and sis...............
is it maan in that photo? cant wat for dhak dhak's intro............pl cont soon


haha :) al tell you now coz im updating... :)
yup...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

Just want to congratulations to the geet team.. thank you for bringing Geet into our lives. :)

Chapter Three

While talking to the picture geet slowly fell asleep. She woke up at around 3 in the morning in her chair.. She was scared… she didn't know why but she was.. Something started bothering her… She had an uncomfortable sleep.. It was filled with peace and quiet… just a rough way to sleep.. her back started hurting… but hey it was all worth it she thought..... she got up and put the picture back in the box. She still had it clutched in her hand and pressed so tightly against her heart while she was sleeping... and went to her door. She slowly opened it and peeped outside. In the hallway there were guards resting ever so peacefully on the floor. She smiled as she saw Ramu her personal bodyguard grunting in his sleep. She walked over to her brothers' room. She was confused which room to go in.. she was going to walk in to Rahul's room but he was with Anjali... she freaked out imagining how she would catch them and maybe in what position lol... She then had to decide from Radhe and Sameer. This was normal for her. If she ever woke up in the middle of the night she would creep into her brother's room... she would be afraid to go back to sleep on her own.. Normally someone would be in the room while she slept. Sometimes it would be Radhe. Sometimes Sameer, Mainly Rahul and Anjali..... but today she just fell asleep... but to get back to sleep would be hard... she made her decision.. she crept up to Radhe's door. Very slowly she twisted the door handle. She pushed the door open silently and crept in. She smiled as she saw Radhe sat in the chair with a file in his hand, snoring his head off... she crept upto him and kissed his forehead.. He smiled... she went upto his bed and lay down, cuddling herself into her sorry his blanket.. She felt contended now and she slept peacefully...

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Early morning the guards woke up.. They were scared.. Geet wasn't in her room... oh crap where was she.. Radhe was still asleep.. Sameer, Anjali and Rahul started panicking... they wanted to tell Radhe but didn't know how too... They searched the whole house apart from Radhe bedroom... Radhe woke up to soo much noise.. He was furious.. How dare they ruin his sleep... He got up at once without looking anywhere but the door. He opened the door and left the room...

Radhe stood with his arms crossed over his broad chest.... his facial expression showing he was angry... Rahul saw Radhe stood there silently.. He gulped his saliva back down his throat...

Rahul – vo bhai... Geet...

Hearing Geet's name Radhe moved his hands....

Radhe - kya... Geet.... kaha hai vo...

Rahul started to get tensed... he didn't know how to inform him, that his sister wasn't in her room... Radhe started getting restless...

Radhe – Where is GEET?? He said in a manner that immediately made Rahul burst it out without taking a breath… ...

Rahul – Geet apne kamra main nahi hain... aur hum ne poora ghar dekh liya hain vo waha bhi nahi...

Radhe froze... kya???

Sameer – hain bhai nahi hain vo yaha...

Radhe screamed ... he gave everyone orders to follow in finding Geet.

He got upset.. Saw the picture of his parents on the wall and cried silently.. I'm sorry. He kept repeating and repeating, How he was a bad brother who couldn't look after his own sister... he angrily smashed a vase that was sat on a small table on the floor... it shattered in tiny pieces... Geet had still not woken up.... not tuned in to what was happening outside... she slept dreaming about how her prince charming... aww…

Radhe was still looking at his parents picture... he felt some hands on his shoulder.. He recognised the hands .. He turned to see Sameer and Rahul ... the same worry and tension look was on their face.. He hugged them...

Sameer – don't worry bhaiii we will find her...

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They took Radhe to his room. They made him sit on his bed when they saw a girl lying in his bed.. Both brothers had their eyes wide open and the mouth hanging.... Radhe looked at their faces. Wondering why they made such n ugly face... he saw them looking at his bed in surprise... he followed the eyes to where he saw a girl lying in his bed....

Radhe was left shocked. NO WAY!?!?! He walked around to see who was lying down in the bed... the boys followed him curious to know which girl radhe had inhis bed...(TUT TUT NAUGHTY BOYS ... SHAME ON YOU ITS YOUR SISTER.. :( )... They walked around to see a beautiful girl... his heart skipped a beat... OMG.. It was GEET. She looked ever soo peaceful lying there sleeping…..she had a frown on her face whilst she slept… her eyebrows went together.. indicating something was bothering her… she hadn't gone anywhere.. She had been Sleeping in Radhe bed... she was asleep.... Radhe was soo pleased to see her and a little bit worried too... maybe she had a bad night that is why she was in his bed.. Normally she would wake him.... but today she didn't... he bent down and put his hand on her cheek. He slowly kissed her forehead.. Radhe suddenly remembered someone kissing his forehead during the night … Maybe it was Geet.. . He tapped her slowly trying to wake her.... Geet slowly murmured n her sleep Geet – Kya bhaii… sona do na… Radhe looked up at his brothers… he gently shook her again… she gradually opened her hazel brown eyes. The bright light was hurting her eyes so she shut them tight... she put her hand over her eyes trying to block the sunlight... she then opened her eyes forcefully.

Geet yawned indicating she was still tired.. she saw her brothers sitting down watching her... she also saw the worried expressions on their face... she felt bad.. She sat up on the bed… She held her ears slowly and made a cute face telling them she was sorry and to forgive her...

Geet – Sorry Bhaii...

Sameer – Geet tum ne huma dara diye tha!

Geet – Dara diya thaa?? Kyun?? She was confused...

Rahul – hume pata nahi kya hua jab tum apne kamra mein nahi thi...

Geet – sorry ..she said with a sad face...

Radhe – tum teek ho na..

Geet – hmm...

Just then anjali walked in. Seeing Geet Radhe's bed she was confused but glad she was okay... she rushed over to her an hugged her... she couldn't help but smile at her Bhabhii..

Geet – Bhabhii... Aap bhi??

Anjali – Kya..mein bhi?? Of course… mein bhi... we were worried…

She laughed...

Anjali – tum yaha kya kar rahi hoo...??

This question was on all of their minds.. they were wondering what she was doing in Radhe's bed.. they looked at her, waiting for an answer.. she looked at their faces and smiled.

Geet – mujhe raat ko neend nahi aayi... isilye mein Bhaiya ke paas aai thi... bhaiya chair par soau raha thee isiliye maine bed par sau gaye..

Radhe hugged her and smiled...

Radhe – pagal... you should have woke me?

Geet – mujhe daar lag raha tha bhaiya...

Radhe – kis baat ka daar.. for waking me up ?? she didnt want to say anything.. but it was true she was scared...

Geet she shook her head… - pata nahi... baas daar lag raha tha.. she was worried about what people would say when she goes college.. they will all be talking about how she walked off with Radhe.. the biggest gangster/ underworld don/ second biggest businessman (wondering who the first one is guys lol :P ) she took a deep breath and said … jab college mein joangi thab kya hoga.. saab bathay karenga...

Radhe understood why she was worrying…

Radhe – koi nahi baat kara ga... hum hai na? ... tum joa ready ho gao..

Geet – hmm she said while nodding her head.. She got up and hugged Rahul and Sameer and said sorry to them..

Anjali forgot to mention something so decided to tell them now...

Anjali- Arre Geet.. i have to tell you something..

Geet stayed in the hug but turned her head to face her Bhabhii..

Geet- ji??

Anjali – my sister is coming.. Ada.. today tho tum jaldi ana.. hmm

Geet moved out of the hug and went to anjali...

Geet – ada is coming?? Wow... cool... ada was older then Geet but both were close… they loved each other… ada knew everything about Geet and why they keep her identity hidden.. so she never talks about them unless she needed too.

Anjali – Pagal. Ab ja.. Get fresh and come down for breakfast... You are already late...

Geet - Late?? She was confused. She thought it was only 7,...

Sameeer - yeah your class has already started … Now Quick.... she Grabbed Rahul's Arm and looked at his wrist.. looking at the Armani watch on his right wrist.. she gasped.. she saw it was 11.

Sh*tt... she said quietly..she let go of his hand and ran to her room, quickly got her clothes out and ran to the bathroom to have aquick shower get ready ... by the time she came rushing down it was already 11.45 ... she quickly ate her breakfast and left the dining area with Sameer.......

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There stood in the driveway she remembered she forgot something special.. the most important thing that kick starts her day.... she rushed back inside and gave her brothers a hug... they smiled at her as she ran off excitedly like a two year old kid... while running through the driveway she bumped into someone. She was about to fall when two strong hands grabbed her waist. She closed her eyes in fear thinking she was going to land of the hard ground.. she realized someone was holding her...

She opened her eyes and met the dark searing eyes on a man. She quickly moved away from him. She looked at him from top to bottom inspecting him.. This man stood out ... He was stood in her driveway with a smile.. Clearly he didn't know who she was, otherwise he would not have kept that smile on his face...He didn't look like anybody she knew... His feet were planted wide apart, his hands braced low on his hips, like an ancient conqueror surveying his realm... His thick black hair gleamed in the sunlight... Not so heavy, but light stubble shadowed his jaw, he had black slashing black slashing brows, taut, masculine cheeks and a mouth so sensual it made her breath catch.. A black suit gloved his tall frame... He was handsome, riveting – shockingly so.. But more than his darks looks commanded attention.. He had a stillness about him, something which she had seen in her brothers.. A feral intensity that excluded intelligence, authority and power...

Her heart thumped, made a funny zigzag in her chest.. The word predator flashed through her mind.. The edge of his mouth kicked up at her blatant inspection.. His eyes smouldered even more....Then his own gaze dropped making a long slow slide over the length of her...Trailing a firestorm in its wake... Her knees trembled. A zap of awareness sizzled through her blood... And a completely different type of tension arose in her nerves... Her face burning, she simply ran past him and sat in the car, where her brother was waiting for her. .She was finding it difficult to breathe. She glanced in the side mirror to see if he was stood there but he had gone… Once again Sameer was stuck with his breathless sister not knowing what to do.. He simply got her pump out of her bag and gave it her.. She took it twice and started to get her breath back...

Sameer was fuming... no way was he going to let her go college... not after this... he got out of the car... just then he saw a car pull up in the driveway.. he saw a woman and a man come out. Recognising them to be Anjali parents he went up to them and hugged them leaving Geet in the car...

Then he saw a girl come out of the car. She looked about 20, 21.. She was tall and slim... her bouncy brown hair was just below her shoulders.. she had honey brown eyes and a beautiful shaped mouth.. She had sunglasses on the top of her head.. Her smile was big and her eyes showed her excitement. His gaze slid to what she was wearing.. She had black leggings and a grey sparkly dress that stopped just above her knees. She smiled at him and walked into the house leaving Sameer stood there amazed by her beauty......

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In the house Radhe and Rahul saw a man stood near the door.. Radhe looked at the man and gave him a look… this man gave him the same look back… Radhe walked upto him showing this man his walk… then the man got his arms out of his pockets and put them on his chest, folded… Rahul smirked…

Radhe – Tum kaun ho?? He said smiling micheviously…

The man replied with a stern tone…

Man – Main kaun hoon yeh pooch raha ho??

Rahul joined in with this little talk…

Rahul – Haan .. bhai ne pucha tum kaun ho? Jawaab do…

Man – arre kyun jawab doon??

Radhe – because I said so.. now tell me who are you?? Still with that grin on his face.

Maan didn't want to give in…

Just then anjali walked in and saw this man stood there with his arms folded across his chest… she recognised this man and ran to Rahul to see his face…

Anjali – Maan Bhaii … aap yaha??

Anjali was Maan cousin sister… she was his dad's niece.. he loved her loads..

Maan looked at anjali and smiled..

Maan – kya yaar.. tum bhi na.. sara mood karab kar diya… he moaned like a child…

Rahul – Anjali .. what man.. you spoilt our little game..

Anjali what game?/ she waited for an answer but just then she saw her parents and sister walking through the door in amezment. They were looking around the room they were stood in.. anjali parents were proud to see their son-in-law and daughter's house soo beautiful… she ran to her parents..

Anjali – papa... mama.. aap log bhi...

Mama – haan hum bhi.. lekin only for a little while...-

Anjali – Ada.. she hugged her sister tight... tears streaming down her face...

Next part - Geet sick… and Maaneet meeting again…

Pretty long Update :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Superb update
Awww Geets brothers are so caring--Wud luv 2 hav brothers lyk hers
Every1 was Lukin here & there 4 geet and she was peacefully sleeping in her brothers bed
Yayy Maaneet met
The first top businessmaan is obviously our MSK
Seems lyk sameer has found his true love 😊
Nice precap--sad dat geet is sick
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago

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