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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prologue..

It was 4.30... A hardcore riot was running through the mansion of Handa.... police everywhere.... there was glass everywhere... the deal had gone a little bit wrong... but not to worry Rahul had it under control... the only thing that was worrying is that one of their own men had double crossed them. They had done loads for him... Rahul was a little afraid... not of the guy but of as the Radhe... Radhe was big... not that big but boy was he scary... not to his family though.. Rahul heard the car spead up.. uff this was not good.. he turned around.

And met the dark searing angry eyes of a man...his feet planted wide and his hands braced low on his hips, like and ancient conqueror surverying his realm. His thick black hair gleamed in the lights. He had black slashing brows, taut masculine cheeks.. Rahul started stammering...

Rahul – vo... erm... A hand was lifted in the air.. Rahul had no choice but to stop.. a voice so scary, loud and feirce spoke.. this voice was only used for business and the underworld... but Rahul had never experienced it...

Voice – maine kuch poocha... nahi na... then stop...

Rahul – lekin bhai... yeh saab .... don't you want to know what happened.

Voice.... Mujhe pata hai... Aab Radhe se kaun chupa saktha hai... hmm he smiled. His smile was breathtaking.. it was like the icing on the cake...

Radhe – Ramlaal... he shouted for the cleaners. Although he had servents in his house he never treated them like it.

In ran Ramlaal.. he didnt look nothing like a servent. He was well dressed for being a servent.. but he never complained.

Ramlaal – Ji beta.. ramlaal never had any kids so he treated the handa siblings as their newphew/neice.

Radhe – kisi ko kehna ghar ka safie karna... Meri baby anne walli hain.. aur yeh sab usse nahi dekna chahiya...

Ramlaal – Gee Beta... he walked off..

Radhe was in a good mood... he walked over to Rahul and said chall hum yeh sab katam karthe hain.. varna humari behen thu apna natak shuru karla gi...

Rahul – ha aur humara shehzada bhi... they walked off..

After an hour they came to the house... they was no police nowhere, no glass no mess nothing... everything was clean... Rahul & Radhe smirked... Everything was perfect....

They heard a sound of tyres screeching through the drive way...

Next part.. Geet & Sameer Entry...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice prologue...........kya entry hain radhe ki........can imagine sallu in that.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks :) glad you like it....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ooooohhhh interesting prologuee.... cant wait till you start it...!!
lets see hw it goess..
update sooonn...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oooo they love geet so much

too good dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
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U have a mindblowing cast!!! Do add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant prologue pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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.just loved it.👏
awesome 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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please add me in ur pm list so i also get the update
nice update cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice prologue
they really love geet alot
nice to see that

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