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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

thanku simi.... yar me tere wait kar rahi thi
tumhe kya lagta hai me tumhari tarh brainless hon...

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

kyun bhai kiya hua ?? mere brain ki complain kyun ho rahi hai ??

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

part 3

after some time she trying to reach on the door .. and she kick door with the help her leg .. and then he listen then he opened the door .. then ayan understand that she want to say some thing .. then he opened tap form her mouth ..

mahi: dekho mujhe our kuch nahiin chahiye our na hi main ab kuch karun gi .. but plz try to understand mujhe bhookh lagi hai .. kuch khane ko de do ...
he go from there ...

then she thinking .. uff yeh kiya ho raha hai .. main apne hi ghar main bikhari ki tarah khana mang rahi hun ..

ayan: lo yeh khao our phir chup chap so jana ...
mahi: yahan ???? i mean bathroom main koi khana khata hai kiya ?? ,, plz kahiin our bitha do ..
ayan: ok jao ..
mahi: hath ki pati toh khol do ...
when mahi start walking then ayan said : ruko ... then he slowly stand and he again tied her hand with his own hand .. b/c she should not go out ...

then ayan and mahi go out and sat on chair .. and he sat an other chair from her side .. and a glass of drink on his hand ..

mahi: are tumhe bhookh nahiin lagi kiya ??
ayan: main tumhe pahle bhi kah chuka hun .. our ek baat mujhe baar baar kahne ki aadat nahiin hai .. chup chap khao our so jao ...
then ayan staring at her ..
mahi noticed this .. the she said : dnt look me .. khana khate waqt mujhe koi dekhe toh acha nahiin lagta ..
ayan: dekh hi toh raha hun .. tumhara khana toh nahiin kha raha na ...

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Simi, awesome part! :D

I could imagine them as AY here. 😆 Bathroom mein koi khaata hai kya? 🤣 Haha, I love Mahi. <3 One request : Don't make her week or vulnerable, she rocks with her quirky sense of humour. 🤣

LMAO .. ''Dekh hi toh raha hoon na, khaana toh nahi kha raha....'' Dialogue of the day! 🤣 Love you for this, Simi! Continue SOOOOON. =D

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_
Simi, awesome part! :D

I could imagine them as AY here. 😆 Bathroom mein koi khaata hai kya? 🤣 Haha, I love Mahi. <3 One request : Don't make her week or vulnerable, she rocks with her quirky sense of humour. 🤣

LMAO .. ''Dekh hi toh raha hoon na, khaana toh nahi kha raha....'' Dialogue of the day! 🤣 Love you for this, Simi! Continue SOOOOON. =D

i try for this ..
and thnks for the liking ..

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Shreya(everyone call me Trisha)

@_SnowFlake_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

then she thinking .. uff yeh kiya ho raha hai .. main apne hi ghar main bikhari ki tarah khana mang rahi hun ..🤣 that was my favorite line

ayan: dekh hi toh raha hun .. tumhara khana toh nahiin kha raha na ...
this is 2nd favorite

fab part👏

cont soon

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

awww... bechaari mahi... usko bhook lag rahi hai😆

ayan is so mean 🤣

usko bathroom mein kahana khaane bola raha tha, and then usko khate wakt ghoor raha tha..

i so loved the dialogues..

dekh hi toh raha hoon, tumhara khaanna nahi kha raha🤣🤣🤣🤣

amazing update..

plz cont sooon

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MAYA ROI

@shwetaloveyou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

ayan: dekh hi toh raha hun .. tumhara khana toh nahiin kha raha na ...
( ayan is coll man main to fada ho gaio hon us pe ab mahe to bhi fada ho ja....🤣)

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

part 4

after some time she sleeping ..and she looking beautiful and he staring at her ..
then stand and he saw a guitar he took it and then he played guitar ....

in the morning time .. someone nock the door then ayan wake and he confused that now what i do .. then he woke her up ...

ayan: utho hey plzz jaldii karo dekho door par koi hai .. jaldii utho ...
mahi: kiya hua ?? koi bhoot dekha hai kiya ??
ayan: apni bakwaas band karo our thora apna brain use karo our jo darwaze pe khara hai .. use bhgao ...

mahi stand .. she ask , who is there ???
a man say : ji dood wala
mahi opened the door and she take it ..
now she go in washroom and when she go out from there she saw that ayan injured she say to him .. are tumne agli wali pati kyun kholi ... tum ruko main abhi aati hun .. and she got first add box ... she give him

mahi: yeh lo .. and i m getting late so i go ..
ayan: where ??
mahi: office .
ayan shouted her .. tum kahiin nahiin jayogi ... yahiin raho ....

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

res!

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itna chota update? :O bada bada likho, simi. :(

aww, guitar. now it's so pakka yuvi-ashiish. 😳 gosh, this story reminds me of Kidnap again and again. 😆 you know what?, make mahi like the girl in Kidnap-types, you know, sort-of strong, able to protect herself. a week spineless mahi doesn't give me a ashi-ish feel. 😳

main office jaa rahi hoon. no tum kahin nahi jaa rahi. 🤣 nicey! continue soon.

Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago