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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

~HATE That I LOVE U~

hey guyzz ... i m starting a different love story i hope u guyzz like this

[ main lead ] mahi (a simple girl she doing job)
& ayan( a criminal )

i update after some time .. i hope u like all .. and if u really want read this then plz comment here ...

note : jo bhi couple aap ko pasand u can imagine in these main lead .. but i love ashi yuvi (Raj Priya) form remix .... so i just image them ...

Thanks..

"simi"

part 1 : page 1 , similuvs_ashiuv
part 2 : page 2 , charmingshelly
part 3 : page 4 , similuvs_ashiuv
part 4 : page 5 , similuvs_ashiuv

Edited by similuvs_ashiuv - 14 years ago

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

thnks for the comment .. i try to soon update ...

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Shreya(everyone call me Trisha)

@_SnowFlake_

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

wow ur own story🤗

cont soon simi

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

part 1

2 years ago her parents got divorced and after that she had wanted to live alone because she could not see her parents like this , so she decided to live alone away from her parents and then she shifted into mumbai . when she feel sad, she sit o the rock near to the river , away from all the peoplebecause no one can see her tears and today slow rain also helping her to hide tears ,
after some times she listen a vioce , some caling her : mahii mahii ..
she looked back there was anu ( anu , she is mahi's friend they work together in same company )
anu sit with mahi in other side

anu: mahi tu yahan bathi hai mene sara shahr dhund liya

she saw her tears again ..

anu: ohh God phir tum un purani baton ko leke bath gayi , if u not forget ur past then u will never live ur life in easy way .. plz forget about that plzzz ...

mahi: tu kiya sochiti hai purani baton ko bhulana itna easy hai ??

anu: woh mujhe nahiin pata leken for once tum in sab baton ko bhula ke aage barhne ki koshsh kare gi then u will feel better ,

mahi: acha choro plzz .. i m getting late ghar jana hai ..

anu: chal main tujhe ghar tak drop karte hun ...

Now they are in the car ..

anu: ohh God ab kiya hua ??

anu call a man who is controlling tarfic or some thing ..

anu to this man: kiya hua aap hamain jane kyun nahiin de rahe ??

man: ma'm aage car ke jane ka rasta nahiin hai .. and he left

anu: what the hell , ab kiya karain .. tum ghar kaise jaougi ??

mahi: koi baat nahiin yahiin thori hi door mera ghar hai .. main chali jaungi ..

anu turn her car and she left ..

and when mahi come in her home and she opned the lock then she saw that 2 police car passed from this road , after she entered in home she on botton of light and she feel something strange .. like anyone follow her and suddenly she felt someone's arm in her neck and a gun too her head side
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guyzz if u like story .. then plz tell main aap ko pm list main inclued kar lun .. plz tel who want read this and who want in pm list .. thnks

"simi"

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Res!

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Simi, firstly, a hearty congratulations for starting your own FF. =) Me really liked the whole criminal idea; I've always been a sucker for those kind of stories. 😆 Despite everyone hating Kidnap, I fultoo enjoyed the movie. 😃

Coming to the part, it was awesome. So, Mahi has a lonely past, I loved Anu! 😳 And .. :O :O is that person Ayan? He keeps a gun on Mahi's head?

Continue sooooon! PS - Super brownie points for the title. Love it! :D

Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago

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Meeko

@Meeko

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

wow simi!! u finally strted it..

plz add me t the pm list.. love the idea.. a smiple chick and a criminal...

hoping to see u continue soon!! loved reading ur part!

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

thnks sooo much guyzz .. itni mushkil se yeh likha buht mahnat hai yaar is main .. elizza and akhi how u do this ??? wel u guyzz like it .. thats really nice ...
i try too update soon ..

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MAYA ROI

@shwetaloveyou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

awesome sweety soo continou...........
pm me 2nd part...

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ambar

@AY_RHr4eVer

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2

she was really scared and she did not say any word and the man who put his gun on her head says
don't afraid from me i will not kill u but if u will say anyone about me then i will kill u..
he slowly removed his gun from her head and leave his hand from her neck and he held her hands tight from her back side and
pushed her but did not leave her hands....
and
then he speak
tumhara bathroom kahan hai....
mahi was thinking that he came here for bathroom then why he put his gun on my head if he had permission from me then i allowed him
mahi: aap mujhe pyaar se bhi kahte phr bhi me maan jati..
he shouted: shut up
mahi: she was really afraid now and she had been knowing he came here for something else...
when they reach close from the bathroom door he asked ye hai bathroom..
mahi said yes...
and then he was watching the bathroom view and the he pushed her in the bathroom and he came out and locked the bathroom door....
mahi said: aap ne mujhe lock kyon kya hai and then she was crying
and then he sat in the floor and said apna natk band karo me yahan kuch din k liye yahan hon jb tak mere lag ki injury khtm nahi ho jata...
me ayaan hon or me tumhe kuch nahi karon ga bs kuch din k liye mujhe safe jagah chahye thi...
tum yahin raho gi bathroom me kuch din k liye jab tak me yahan hon....
mahi: me yahan nahi rhon gi... ye mera ghr hai
devil smile on his smile.
ayaan: acha to ye tumhara ghar hai mujhe nahi pata tha... but i don't care agr ye tumhara ghar ho ya mere phr bap ka ghar ho...
mahi was crying loudly.. ayaan open in the door and slap her very tight.... and he put tap on his mouth and he tied her hand with rope