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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_
res!

-EDITED-

itna chota update? :O bada bada likho, simi. :(

aww, guitar. now it's so pakka yuvi-ashiish. 😳 gosh, this story reminds me of Kidnap again and again. 😆 you know what?, make mahi like the girl in Kidnap-types, you know, sort-of strong, able to protect herself. a week spineless mahi doesn't give me a ashi-ish feel. 😳

main office jaa rahi hoon. no tum kahin nahi jaa rahi. 🤣 nicey! continue soon.

thnks akhi .. is baar thora jaldii main likha toh thora chota update ho gaya ...

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Shreya(everyone call me Trisha)

@_SnowFlake_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

OMG guiter🤗luv u yaar simi

ayan shouted her .. tum kahiin nahiin jayogi ... yahiin raho ....😳

mujhse door mat jaao mahi😆

cont soon😊

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Meeko

@Meeko

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

kitna chotu update simi..

par it was mast.. loved every bit..

aaya bhi toh kaun.. doodh waala.. mahi bhag nahi sakti thi tab? lol

and ayaan shouting at her.. nahi.. tum yaheen rahogi.. lmao..

plz continue soon yaar😳

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hey !!! simi and shelly ... finally finished reading all the parts .... par itna chotu chhotu size ka updates kyun ? 😕 anyways , i really loved the concept ... imagining Yuvi as a criminal ... it's really interesting 😛 ... loved the witty dialogues you guys have used .. waiting to read more ... jaldi update karna .. thanks for the PM ..😛

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MAYA ROI

@shwetaloveyou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

this part also beautifull......
waiting for new part
cont................

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samara abbasi(simi)

@Simi_YaRaLover

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

part 5

ayan put tap on his mouth and he tied her hand with rope again ... and then he went to washroom

mahi think: main kab tak aise bethi hongi.. koi dekh bhi nahiin sakhta ke main kisi se kuch kahun... hey bhaggu plz help aap toh dekh hi sakhte hai na ... mujhe koshish karni chahiye kiya pata kuch ho jaye ..

then she try to open rope atleast she did it .. and then she open tap form her mouth....
then she saw a window . she think yahan say try karna chahiye .. she try to jump from window then she listen his voice that is ayan ..

ayan: kahan ja rahi ho ... mene kaha tha na kahiin mat jana .. how dare u tum yahan se hili bhi kaise

he slap her and then he put gun her head .. and mahi start weeping very sadly..
then ayaan without say any word and left

after long time in night she seep in bad she was looking cute.. ayan looked at her and saw that he lips was bleeding then he realized that he was wrong then he go to her bed where mahi was sleeping .. he looked at her .. she look beautiful .. he come close to her face .. then he go form there

in morning she woke up then she saw a blanket into her ..then she saw ayan .. ayan sat form window side she come and she sit form other side to ayan

ayan: sorry

mahi: kiya hua ??

ayan: kuch nahiin bus woh kal us slap ke liye sorry .. dekho mujhe gussa jaldi aa jata hai .. tum mere mana kane ke baad bhi bhagne ki koshish ki .. dekho aage se aisa sochna bhi mat ...

mahi: is main meri bhi toh koi galti nahiin hai na ..
(then ayaan didn't say anything and just staring at her)

mahi: coffee piyo ge ??
ayan: hmm

when mahi was going he looked her back

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concept of this part by (daizy01) sunads abbasi
written by me ..
with the help of charmingshelly

Edited by similuvs_ashiuv - 14 years ago