Destiny's play-Last Part, Epilogue-Pg 74,81 (2/4)

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
nice part. loved it,
so finally maan know the truth.
update soon.

thanks Prithvi. Yes, the secret is finally out

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
Opti, the entire story has been sooo enjoyable it does not even feel like it is that long. You should try one which is longer. A new target, maybe 200 parts? 😆

Pleeeaaasse Nooooooo! I'll try to finish my other fic Maaneet scenes once I get a few things in shape at work.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
nice part. loved it,
so finally maan know the truth.
update soon.

Thanks Prithvi. The secret is finally out.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: Opti
Pleeeaaasse Nooooooo! I'll try to finish my other fic Maaneet scenes once I get a few things in shape at work.

Ok. If you promise to continue that one, I will accept the end of this story. Although till you give me updates I will keep going over this story over and over again. 😳

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: simi91
finally maan find out the true wow maan with trick of his kids geet for forgive him was cute & sweet moment love it brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yu my dear

Thanks Simi. Maan knows how for manofy his Geet.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Ok. If you promise to continue that one, I will accept the end of this story. Although till you give me updates I will keep going over this story over and over again. 😳

If you hang around for another ten minutes or so, I'll post the next and final update before the epilogue.

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams
Very nice update Opti. Maan's interaction with the kids is beautifully described. I was all smiles while reading the 'punching' part. Great going ...

Thanks scorpio. That's my favourite part too.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Firstly a big , big for giving 2 back - to - back Maneet updates .

I simply loved this line .....Chalo, greedy fellow. Time to go to sleep." to Ishan . It was too sweet 😆 . Maan & baby scenes were super cute .

The 2nd part where Maan gets to know the entire truth from both Yash & Anwesha was superb .....

BRILLIANT parts ...

Thanks.Maan finally comes to know everything and has managed to use his kids to manofy his Geet.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
awesome part
glad that Maan finally knows the truth
and being the honest man he is, he will bail Arjun out
Hopefully this time Arjun has changed..
con't soon!

Thanks. Yes, Maan will get Arjun out and drop all charges against him but he will be careful not to let him harm his family.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Maan and his kids so sweet and cute ...No please Arjun ko bahar mat nikaloo maan noo he is not good he will harm you again ......great part and thank you

thanks monika. Dont worry Arjun cannot harm Maan anymore.