MG FF~PREM KI ANOKHI KAHANI~THREAD 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Wow, nice concept. Princess and Prince Charming. They do not know the names. Wow. How are they suppose to recognize each other. Do update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Hey very nice update yr
Love it
Amazing
Precep is nice
Love ur update
Plz update soon can't wait for the next
Thanks for the pm
And do pm me always
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
awsome update.
geet is so cute..
love her.
aww..maan is leaving.
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
awee next update's gonna b sad
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
PART 4

Next day

At maan's place

Dadi:maan jaldi aao aur breakfast karlo

Maan:ji dadi

After having breakfast maan was going out to meet geet when dadi called him

Dadi: maan itni subah subah kaha ja rahe ho

Maan:main apne dost se milne ja raha hoon

Dadi:theek hai dev aur vicky ko bhi leko jao wo dono akele kya karege

Maan:nahi dadi

Dadi:kyu

Maan:wo log so rahe hain

Dadi:theek hai

Maan to himself:agar main dev aur vicky ko leke jata to princess ka sara dyan dev aur vicky ke taraf rehta kyonki wo princess ke age ke hai aur main akela rehta nahi main aisa nahi hone de sakta

Maan left and dev and vicky came down

Dev:good morning dadi

Dadi:tum dono to so rahe the na

Dev:nahi to aapse se kisne kaha hum to bohut der pehle hi uth chuke the

Dadi:maan ne hamse kaha ki tum dono so rahe ho

Dev:bro ne aisa kyu kaha unhone to humeh uthaya

Dadi to herself:maan ne humse jhooth kyu kaha

Dev:dadi kya hua

Dadi:kuch nahi chalo breakfast karlo

On the other side maan was going towards the market when an idea struct him

Maan:chalo aaj main princess ko gift deta hoon lekin kya loon yaha pe to sab kuch acha hai

After sometimes he saw a beautiful silver colour locket


Maan:yeh bohut acha hai yahi le leta hoon

Geet is waiting for maan and is very angry

Geet:yeh kitna late ho gaya ab jab wo ayega to main usse baat bhi nahi karoongi dusth kahi ka

After sometimes maan comes

Maan: hi princess

Geet:?

Maan:kya hua

Geet:?

Maan:princess

She turned around

Maan thinking:maine kya kiya ye isliye to naraz nahi kyonki main late aaya haan isiliye

Maan:sorry

Geet:?

Maan holding his ears:sorry sorry sorry sorry

Geet:dusth danav

Maan:kya kaha

Geet:dusth danav

Maan:maine sorry kaha na main isliye late aaya kyonki main tumhara liye gift laya tha

Geet turned around and started going home

Maan ran after her and pulled her holding her wrist

Maan:main sach main tumhare liye gift laya hu chalo apne eyes bandh karo

Geet:kyu

Maan covered his eyeswith one hand and with the other he put the locket around her neck

Maan opened her eyes

She was shocked

Geet:ye mere liye

Maan:haan

Geet:kitna sundar hai thank you

With that she gave maan a tight hug

They played for sometimes and went back home

Several days passed they used to play everyday both of them were very close to each other and if they would be separated it would be very difficult for them

It was the day when maan was going back delhi

They meet at the same place

Geet:hi prince charming

Maan:hi princess

Geet:kya hua tum itni sad kyo ho

Maan:wo main wo main wo..wo..

Geet:kya main main kar rahe ho jaldi bolo kya hua

Maan:main wapas delhi ja raha hoon

Geet:wapas kab aa rahe ho

Maan:pata nahi

Geet:pata nahi ka kya matlab hai

Maan:wapas aa bhi saktha hoon nahi bhi aa saktha

Geet had tears in her eyes and she runs away while her payal fells down

Maan:princess princess meri baat suno princess

But she ran away

While going back maan sees the payal


Maan:sayad meri princess ka hoga abhi main rakh leta hoon wapas kabhi milunga to useh de doonga

Toh de dooga

And goes back

Geet cried for maan for few days and was missing him very much

On the other hand maan was also missing her and for few days he couldn't concentrate on her studies

PRECAP:LEAP 14 YEARS

Prev: PART 3 Next: PART 5

Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Oh maaneet sepaerate thats said but awsome part and waiting for next part will they recognice each other or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Awesome update
very cute both of them.
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
nice update ,,, feeling sad for maneet ...
hope they meet soon
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39


Wowwww
Very nice update yr
Love it
nice update ,,, feeling sad for maneet ...
hope they meet soon
continue soon
Thanks for the pm
do pm me next part when u've update


Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awsesome update......loved it.....please add me 2 ur pm list & pm wenever u update......thanks

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