MG FF~PREM KI ANOKHI KAHANI~THREAD 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
great start thanks for 2 parts so sweet and nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
plzz continue and add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice one!......👍🏼
pls index the parts!.. it wil b easier fr us to follow ur FF!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
wowwww
Very nice part yr
Bt toooo short plz update long part
Anyways very nice one
Do continue it yr
Amazing
Fantastic
Thanks for the pm
Do pm me next part

Thanks
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schoooooooooooooooo cute .... loved it
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nice update ... continue soon
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so sweet and loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sweety ,

Read both parts 1& 2 . Its nice & the characters Geet-Maan are very sweet & innocent . 😊

Thanks for the pm ... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

Next Day In The Morning

Rano:Geet Utho Subah Hogai Hai

Geet:?

Rano:Geet Geet Utho

Geet:?

Rano:Main Akhari Bar Keh Rahi Hu Utho Warna Main Darji Ko Bulati Hu

Geet:Nahiii

Rano Puts Her Fingers On Her Ears

Rano:Jaldi Taiyar Hoja Aur Niche Aaja

Geet:Thik Hai

After Sometimes She Comes Down And Finishes Her Breakfast

She Goes Towards The Main Door When Rano Calls Her

Rano:Geet Kaha Ja Rahi Ho Tum Itni Subah Subah

Geet:Ma Wo Main Wo Haan Main Apne Dost Se Milne Ja Rahi Hoon

Rano:Dost Kaunsa Dost

Geet:Wo Ek Naya Dost Hai

Rano:Thik Hai Lekin Jaldi Aa Jana Darji Se Pehle

Geet:Thik Hai

Geet Goes Back At The Same Place

After Sometimes Maan Also Comes

Maan:Hello Meri Princess

Geet:Hello Mere Prince Charming

Maan:To Aaj Kya Karenge

Geet:Chalo Aaj Hum Paani Main Khel Teh Hai

Maan:Thik Hai

They Both Starts Playing Splashing Water And They Get Tired

After Sometimes Geet Sees A Mango Tree And She Tells Maan

That She Wants Mango

Maan:Kya

Geet:Haan Mujhe Mango Chahiye

Maan:Par Main Kaise

Geet Makes A Baby Face:Please

Maan:Thik Hai Lekar Aatah Hu

Maan Gets Off The Tree And Picks The Mango But While Coming Down

Banggg!!!!!!!

Fells Down

Geet:Tum Thik Ho

Maan:Haan

Geet:Dekho Tumhe Kitni Chot Aagayi Hai Mere Karan

Maan:Maine Kaha Na Main Thik Hu

Geet Starts To Cry

Maan:Chot Mujhe Lagi Hai Tum Kyu Ro Rahi Ho

Geet:Sab Mere Karan Hua Hai

Maan Cups Her Face Wipes Her Tears

Maan:Kuch Nahi Hua Main Thik Hu

Geet:Pakka

Maan:Pakka

Geet:Chalo Mango Khate Hai

Maan:Theek Hai

Maan Was Watching Her Amushingly While She Was Busy Eating Mango

And Her Face Was Covered With Juice

Maan Started Laughing

Geet:Tumhe Hansi Kyu Aa Rahi Hai

Maan:Tumhara Face

Geet:Mera Face

Maan:Tumhara Face Par Juice Lag Gaya Hai

Geet Makes A Baby Face:Mere Paas Hanky Nahi Hai

Maan:Ye Lo

Geet:Tum Wipe Kardo Na

Maan Wipes Her Face

They Play For Sometime

Maan:Ab Main Chalta Hu

Geet:Ruko

Maan:Kya Hai

Geet:Thora Neeche Ho

Maan:Kyu

Geet:Maine Kaha Na

Maan Bends Down And Geet Kisses His Cheek And Says Thank You

Maan Blushes

Geet:Tum Itna Sharma Kyu Rahe Ho

Maan:Kuch Nahi Aur Tum Muje Thank You Kyu Bol Rahi Ho

Geet:Mango Ke Liye

Maan:Hmm Bye

Geet:Bye

At Geet's Place

Rano:Geet Tu Aaj Itni Khush Kyu Hai

Geet:Maa Wo Mera Naya Dost Na Bohut Acha Hai

Rano: Naya Dost

Geet:Haan Naya Dost

Rano:Kaun Hai Tera Yeh Naya Dost

Geet:Ek Ladka

Rano:Kyaa

Geet:Haan

Rano:Agar Darji Ko Pata Chalega To Tujhe Pata Hai Na Wo Tuj Par Kitna

Gussa Karenge

Geet:Darji Ko Pata Chalega Tab Na

Rano:Matlab

Geet:Main Uske Baara Main Kisiko Nahi Bataugi

Rano:Theek Hai

Geet:?

Rano:Waise Tere Dost Ka Naam Kya Hai

Geet:Prince Charming

Rano:Prince Charming Yeh Kaisa Naam Hai

Geet:Prince Charming Acha Naam Hena Maa

Rano:Haan Acha Naam Aur Yeh Rehta Kaha Hai

Geet:Delhi Main

Rano:Matlab Wo Yaha Nahi Rehta Hai

Geet:Nahi

Rano:Theek Hain Ab Jaldi So Ja Warna Subah Jaldi Nahi Uthegi To Darji Se Daant Sun

Na Parega Tumhe

Geet:Theek Hai

Geet:Good Night Maa

Rano:Good Night

She Kisses Her Forehead And Leaves The Room

PRECAP:MAAN GOING BACK TO DELHI AND GEET GETTING ANGRY

Prev: PART 2 Next:PART 4

Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
till part 3
wow very nice story..................
childhood friends.................
Geet is so sweet and Maan amazingly likes her without any ego................
cont soon and add me to ur pm list..................dont forget to pm me.............

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