My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) # 2 - Page 71

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update... loved both the parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
btw why did he lie about the pendant?
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

I started typing Ups & Downs but ended up typing this ... and when I was rereading it I found that I am on wrong topic 😆

Part 38

Life is not always easy for every one, and who knew it better then Savitri Devi herself, she felt the pain Geet went through, though she herself has never been in such situation as her, but she has had her own set of bad experiences and pain is universal. She also had witnessed pain in Maan's life which she always regrets, never has he ever complained, he was probably the only man in her all male relations who took her word as final, she asked him to join KC, he did in spite of the fact that he wanted to become a computer engineer, she asked him to marry Sameera, he did, though he had no woman in her life then, but had she not asked him, he would have found someone worthy of him, what Vicky said was correct, she must stop deciding for him, let him for once follow his heart, but this time what she choose for him is slowly becoming his choice, but now when Vicky said she had realized that she will not force Maan to mop Dev's misdeeds, and will never disclose that she had taken their signs on that piece of paper.

Today was 20th , Maan was in a hurry, he had told the main office that he will be out for a fortnight, and that was nothing new for them as in past also he took long routes out; the telephone was buzzing and with Nakul and Geet not being around, the personal phones went unattended most of the times, if the call was important it would be diverted to his cell, after ringing for another 2 times finally one of the house helps took it, and transferred the cal to his line,

M: hello MSK here

Brij: hello ji, Brij here

M: hello, how are you?

B: actually Maa told me that Geet's was due any time soon, so she wanted to come and visit, but that man said Geet is not here, she left with Savitri Devi

M: yes, they left for Canada

B: why?

M: why not? She has to live there, so if the child is born there, it will have Canadian citizen ship by birth

B: oh, then it's ok, BTW when will she come back

M: not soon, may be after 3-4 months

B: Good

M: any thing else

B: no, definitely not, ok ji bye

But Brij did not believe that Geet had left so he came on the same evening to check, and was stopped by the guard

G: who do you want to see?

B: I am Geet's bro; I am here to see her

G: sorry ji, but she is not here

B: where has she gone?

G: Canada

B: when did she leave?

G: let me recall, they went on 5th

B: they

G: yes, how can she go on her own, Savitri Madam went with her

B: oh, then it might be true. where is MSK?

G: Maan Sir, may be office IDK, shall I call him

B: no its ok (murmured chalo jaan chooti ab kya vaapas aaegi)

After Brij left Maan who knew that he will come, came out of the guard's room and patted guard's shoulder: Good Job

And called HSPur: Hello Mohinder ji, Brij just left, thank you for telling us, bye

Maan came to Shimla on 21st and found Geet pacing inside the room

M: hi my 3 beautiful ladies

DM: 3???

M: yes, you, her and she

DM: ???

M: my Angel, you are not counting her, nothing sweet heart just a little more time then they will also count you

DM: oh I see

M: Geet, relax why are you pacing?

G: you will not understand

M: what, DM why is she pacing

DM: she has started having pains

M: what? Labor pains? Then she should be taken to the hospital

DM: not yet, there is still time

M: but DM

DM: Maan shut up and don't panic you will make her nervous

M: but

DM: OK go make her a cup of ginger tea and bring some threptin biscuits for her, go

M: OK

By evening she was restless, and started sweating, Maan was by her side, and was quite nervous, DM monitored her and called the doctor who asked about Geet's condition and told them to bring her in a couple of ours, probably the child will be born in the early morning hours and asked her to feed some olive oil.

It was 4 am and Maan was pacing outside the labor room he can hear her whimpering and DM who also sat there noticed that not once did Geet called out for her Maa as women normally do, but uttered her Baba ji's name, she also called DM and gradually as her pains became unbearable she called out Maan, and Maan on hearing his name from her halted his pace and after few minutes her voice was replaced by a baby's crying. It was 6:30 am the sun was rising and with the rising sun baby was born.

The doctor peeped out and announced, congrats Mr. Khurana it is a Girl, and went in, Maan desperately waited for the baby to be brought out, DM giggled at his condition, he frowned and called Vicky and told him the good news.

After 40 mins the nurse brought the baby and headed to give her to DM but Maan grabbed the bundle of joy; the nurse was surprised rather shocked and then smiled and said "papa" he smiled and nodded in a yes.

Later when Geet was shifted to the room, a male nurse came in

MN: do you want to fill in the birth certificate details now or later

M: now

MN: ok please help fill in this form

M: ask, I will tell

MN: father's name

M (he looked at Geet and she smiled and nodded): Maan Singh Khurana

MN: mother's name

M: Geet

MN wrote Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana

MN: residential address

M told the address of KM

MN: permanent address

M: same as above

MN: phone number

M: 123000000321

MN: Guardian, any 2

M: Savitri Devi Khurana and Vicky Chawla

MN: there relation with the parents

M: my grandmother and my first cousin

MN: none form mother's side

M: add one more

MN: go ahead

M: Arjun Rathod, Her bro

MN: shall I write baby girl or will you give her a name now

DM who was looking at Maan in awe, was expecting him to say Angel but before he could say

G: Meenakshi

MN wrote and asked them to sign the form

Maan was so much taken aback by her choice of name that he did not even bother to check what MN wrote and just and signed, so did Geet, it was DM who checked the form and smile on Geet Maan Singh Khurana written there and was also amused as to why Geet choose Meenakshi as her daughter's name.

{I asked last time: my readers who read through the lines I am waiting for one question from your side... let me see how many of you read the update thoroughly }
what surprised me is no one asked me why the servant told that Geet and DM left for Canada instead of Shimla... I am hurt

but now though you did not ask I told as to why they took her to Shimla and those who still do not understand pls ask ...

do you know why she choose Meenakshi as her Angel's name?
hope to hear some one giving the correct answer
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part 39
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome, beautiful part.
loved it.
this brij ki toh mein isko CID mein hona chiaye tha nehi nehi criminal hain oh kya interrogation karta hain haar time
Geet's papa jee is nice informed maan before that brij will come at KM
.guard done grt job.
loved maan's tension for the child and geet.
geet take baba jee's name ,dadi ma's name and maan's name but not once for her mother name.
loved they birth certificate form filled up.
both were over whelmed to be proud parents don't see what written there
one more thing there is a paper which was signed by maaneet
two option I have legal document for baby adaptation paper or marraige registration paper


what surprised me is no one asked me why the servant told that Geet and DM left for Canada instead of Shimla... I am hurt
ans :- let me guess first if they will tell canada then geet's family for some couple of month don't interfere or come there

but now though you did not ask I told as to why they took her to Shimla and those who still do not understand pls ask ...
and:- like previous part u said Himachal Pradesh only the domicile of the state so it's related something

do you know why she choose Meenakshi as her Angel's name?
hope to hear some one giving the correct answer

and:-hmmm iye mujhe samajh mein nehi aaraha hain
still I guess maan want to his daughter name will Meenakshi like that

continue soon



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

THANKS FOR UPDATNG ...

WHAT ELSE NAME CAN SHE GIVE TO THE ANGEL ... MEENAKSHI IS MAAN KI ASHA ... ...
LOVED THE NAME WRITTEN ON BIRTH PAPERS MRS GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA... HOPE YE SAB SACH JALDI HOGA
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
i think the name was maan's mom name ...
and as for simla..as they have told brij and family that dev is in canada...
so definitely geet will go there..
why will she go to simla...

it was an awesome part...
i have one ques...
what papers have dadi made maan sign...
me very curious...
is it his divorce papers with sameera..or marriage papers with geet...

plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

my lame logic on the name meenakshi...


the name meenakshi has two letters 4m both maaneets name...M EE N ...m and n 4m maans name and double ee 4m geets name ...joining and jumbling their names together...aksh means symbol if i m not mistaken...

i have no clue if i made sense or not...hehe

hi niddzz

go through the previous parts

the name is important for Maan

you will know how

I'll tell in next update

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: libra25

loved the update...
i think the name was maan's mom name ...
and as for simla..as they have told brij and family that dev is in canada...
so definitely geet will go there..
why will she go to simla...

it was an awesome part...
i have one ques...
what papers have dadi made maan sign...
me very curious...
is it his divorce papers with sameera..or marriage papers with geet...

plz continue soon

hi Libra25

what's the hurry

you wiil know soon which papers

and yes you guessed it right she was her mother

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome didi ..
i wonder y she choose that name ..especially south indian name ..
(am one tooo !!!!)

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