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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

another tamil poem by naturally kcrazy
Maan !!
sila murai kannodu maraithalum.
Sometimes hiding in front of my eyes..
pala murai ennodu tholaithalum..
Many times getting lost along with me..
valarpirai en kaadhal valaruthu..
my love grows like a growing moon...

purinthu kolvaayaa???
will u understand it??
unnai kandu oru sugam pirakkum..
i get a pleasure when i see u..
kaanamal pala idi idikkum..
many thunders hit me when i dont see u (miss u)
idhayam kooda.. paarai pola.. sumai aanathey...
Even my heart... like a rock... became a burden...

aiyo ithu pizhayo varamo..
Oh god is this a fault or a bless
Ennai solla...
What will i say?
ennai kollamal kolla...
It kills me without killing me.. (stabbing me)


Ithil viduthalai thandhu..
Will u give freedom from this?
neeyum ennai servayo??
and will u ever come to me??

thanxs a lot dear...
love
muskan



Soo Beautifully written and described.. ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskii ... such a beautiful poem 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

another tamil poem by naturally kcrazy
Maan !!
sila murai kannodu maraithalum.
Sometimes hiding in front of my eyes..
pala murai ennodu tholaithalum..
Many times getting lost along with me..
valarpirai en kaadhal valaruthu..
my love grows like a growing moon...

purinthu kolvaayaa???
will u understand it??
unnai kandu oru sugam pirakkum..
i get a pleasure when i see u..
kaanamal pala idi idikkum..
many thunders hit me when i dont see u (miss u)
idhayam kooda.. paarai pola.. sumai aanathey...
Even my heart... like a rock... became a burden...

aiyo ithu pizhayo varamo..
Oh god is this a fault or a bless
Ennai solla...
What will i say?
ennai kollamal kolla...
It kills me without killing me.. (stabbing me)


Ithil viduthalai thandhu..
Will u give freedom from this?
neeyum ennai servayo??
and will u ever come to me??

thanxs a lot dear...
love
muskan


beautiful poem 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Really this Maan is stupid ! .....

Anne... she forgot everything.... how geet helped her, how she managed dadi to accept her....she needs a tight slap 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mini tm

Next Part:-

Both went to hospital and meet with doctor .Dcotor check mk and said this is just viral fever, she need to take rest. No ice cream, cold drinks and gives some mdcne for mk.

Mk is just sit in her dadda's lap and placed her head on his shoulder.

Geet:- doctor, what about her food in break fast, lunch and dinner, cause yesterday she puke up full food and don't want to eat anything.

Doctor:- well it's happen in fever, just give her simple food, soup, plain rice and with simple curry, no spicy things for her now and make her eat horlicks and buiscuits .

Geet nodded in yes.

Then they take leaves from there.

In the car, geet said maan mujhe jara head quarter pe chor dijiye.

Maan nodded but mk who is sitting in geet's lap said no.

Both maaneet look at her and geet said kya hua/

Mk:- a.ap. ka..hi..ne..hi ..jao..ge…and hugged geet.

Geet look at maan then maan said darling, look at me, aapke mom uha jake kuhc le aayenge aapke liye. Isliye toh ja rehe hain, aur aap aapne dadda ke sath nehi rehena chathe ho kya.

Mk looks at geet then to maan said paa.r..

Geet kissed her cheeks and said mein jaldi aaungi paaka promise.

Mk twisted her lips like geet done in past and said uummmm.

Maaneet look at mk then at each other.

After geet reached head quarters. Maan try to cheer mk up.

Next:-

At the evening, mk wake up from her sleep and found her dadda doing some work in laptop. And she just goes close to her and try to look at him but she remembered her mama's word when her dadda doing work don't disturb him.

She wants to pull his sleves but sat there but withing a min maan noticed her and said how r u sweet heart? And then take her in his lap .

Mk still feel sad and said aap ….ky..a.ka..re..he ..ho. wo..rk…na….ma..ma..wi…ll..be..an..gry..

Maan looks at mk with confusion when mk said mama ..to..ld..me..not..to dis..turb u .. when u do …work…

Maan smiles and remember how he scold geet in past but that tiem geet just want to spend some time with him..

Maan said no dear, actually m doing this , see it then he turn the laptop towards mk and then mk noticed this and said mama….

Maan smiled and said yes ur mama, look how beautiful she is?

Mk clapped and her face fell and she said yes then said but..ma..ma.. lo.oks..pa..le..no..w

Maan also noticed it and said hmmm, ok me and u'll be take care of ur mama.

Mk smiles and nodded her head then maan call nanny to bring horlick and some buiscuits for mk .

After feeding mk , maan called geet is standing behind them and said maan, m inside the house.

Maan turns and see her.he smiles and said good, now fresh hoke jaldi aajao.

Geet nodded but before leaving she asked mk how ru dear?

Mk smiles and kissed geet's cheek and said good. Aa..p ja..ldi …se ..aj..a..ao ..na.a..ur ..ha up..ar..dad..da.ke..lappy..dekh..na..maat.

Geet surprised and look at maan who smirked and said jaan come soon.

Geet nodded and left from there and maangive mdcne to mk and then check her temperature which is below 100now.still maan carried her and take her in study toom and instructed nanny to call geet to here.

Next:-

After changing the dress , geet went to down stairs when nanny told her maan's instruction.

Geet shocked to hear it but goes to meet maan in study.

Geet enter the study and see mk is sleeping in single bed with a pink teddy bear.

Geet smiles then think iye bed toh pehele iha nehi tha.

Maan :- tumahre jaane ke baad meine iye bed iha lagai, karne ko toh tab zindegi mein kuch tha hi nehi ,sirf tumhe dhoond na, tumhara iyaad mein rehena aur kaam, , so iha hi so jata tha .

Geet looks at him when maan said but oh sajaa bhi kaam hain tumhe khone ka dard se, then maan held her hand and said tumhe jo dard mein dia usse kam mere saaja hain geet, aur tum toh mujhe saaja dene se rehe, dekho abhi gussa ho rehe ho saaja ke naam se, then he hold her face in between his plams and said kyuon geet itna paayar karte ho , kyuon khud ko saaja de rehe ho jab bhi iye saaja toh mujhe pana chaiye.

Suddenly geet cover mouth by her palm and said maan .

Maan:- geet,pls aapne aapko aur dard maat do, don't u know after see u like this it's break my hearts into million pieces. Geet, I want to see u happy, pls geet, aapne maan ki baat bol do.

Geet just stood there .maan left her and turns and see the pics of geet in the wall , maan:- oh dekho mere geet toh uha hain , jo mujhse gussa karta haq se, naraj hota haq se, khush hota mujhse, rota mere seene mein saar rakh ke, oh dekho kaise haas raha hain bilkul bacchi ajise, oh dekho kaise ro raha hain bilkul bacchi .

Maan turns and hold geet's hand and said pls give me geet, my old geet, my bubbly geet who can fight with me , angry on me, held her head in my chest and cry there , laugh there, tell her every tiny things . pls geet, give me that geet again.

I beg u.

Here geet can't take it any more and just hugged him and said maan, pls…………

Both hugged each other and stood there for some time .

After some time maan sat on the floor when geet placed her head on his shoulder and said maan , meine aapko chor ke kahi nehi jana chathi thi, par kya akrti kisse bolti ,koi nehi janta tha humara shaadi ke baarein mein aur tab mein pregnant thi,

Maan shocked and surprised and then said it means that time u came there and mujhe bolne aayi mk ke baarein mein.

Geet nodded when maan said aur meien aapne hathon aapne khihsiya ko dur kar dia and try to hit his hand when geet caught it and said maan pls.

Maan :- tum itni sab ke baad bhi aksie itni shant rehe sakte ho, y geet, y punish me, I'm failed as husband , as father, but again geet closed his mouth and said shhh, aap bahut acche pati ho, abhut aache dadda ho, pata hain ek din baramulla mein , mein na gusse mein mk ko kehe dia aap baap beti bilkul same ho, gussa jaise nose pe baithe reehte hain aur mk in anger said hmm, mein aapni dadda ke beti hoon, uska gusse oh bilkul aapki tarah hain maan.

Maan weakly smiles and said ummm, oh hum dono ka beti hain, gussa toh hum dono ki tarah hain.

Then after some moments of silence maan asked geet hwo she handle little mk when she feared about little baby.

Geet smiles and said

After mk's birth nurse give her to me and I just wonder to see her there, she is replica of ur maan, I just kissed her and want to tell u , I just want to give u , ur daughter, ur dream. But I… anyway, then nurse and doctor helped me about feeding, bathing, changing cloths of mk, first I feared and cried there then I loved ot do them .I just want to do everything for mk.

Maan :- those things , I promised u help u but…

Geet:- maan, u know when mk is 4yr old, one day she is crying lots kisibhi tarah nehi khaiyegi nehi baar bolne par bhi nehi, danta phir bhi nehi then when I give her ur pics ,she just start to eat her dinner.in fact every lunch and dinner and bed story is full of ur story, our frist meeting, our every moments.I shared our life with her maan.

Maan heard and feel proud of geet , cause the way she handle everything and feel sad for them cause they want to be with him but.. maan feel angry on himself for his anger , he almost ruined everything.

Then maan noticed geet is smiling little and some sperk on her eyes when she told about this.she is so lost in there then suddenly tears falls from her eyes and she said but maan , mk missed u there.I try my level best to give ur love but still she missed u.

Maan just hugged her tightly and said I'm sorry geet, I'm really sorry from now ,I'll be with u and our daughter .

Next:-

Maan just hugged her tightly and said I'm sorry geet, I'm really sorry from now ,I'll be with u and our daughter .

Geet just lay her head on his chest and heart his steady heart beat.

Maan engulfed her in his arms and then both look at each other .geet look at maan and maan look at geet, then maan slowly bend and captured her lips and very gently kissed her lips. Then kissed her eyes, cheesk, nose and forehead and said let's go , have dinner, then mk ko mdcn bhi dena hain.

Geet shyly smiles and nodded.

Maan noticed her old shy smiles back. But for a min again it's vanished.

At the dinner time mk sit in maan's lap and geet fed her and maan told her a story.After that mk alsmot feel on sleep when geet make her eat mdcn which is almost puke by mk but geet try to fed her again and succed .

Then geet told nanny to take her but maan said if she wake up and not find maaneet there then she will start cry.

Geet:- nehi, maan, abhi medne lya hain so oh soyegi, aap khana kha lijiye, aapko bhi toh rest chiaye . aab no but. Chaliye

After maaneet finish there dinner. geet cleaned the table when maan changed his dress and lay besides his daughter.

After some time geet joined him. Both lay each side of mk and placed their hand on mk's forehead and look the temperature .

Next Part:-

Next day morning, geet got imp call from head office and just left the home and before leving she left a note for maan.

She feel sorry cause she want to tell maan but haven't time for it.

After 2hours when maan wake up and find geet is not there and assume may be in washroom. He looks at mk who is sleeping peacefully. He just kissed her forehead when his eyes caught a note ,

Note:-

Maan, I'm sorry but I have to go now, as some emergency come, I'll return soon,

Ur jaan.

Maan just kissed the note and pray to God for geet's success.

After his shower , he enter the room when mk wake up and looks at him and said goo…od.mor..ning…da..dda..

Maan :- take her in his arms and saod good morning sweet heart.

Mk look at him and said aap…ka..hi.ja..re..he..ho…wh..ere..is..ma..ma

Maan :- ummm, how ru my sweet heart

Mk:- fine. Wh..ere…is…ma..ma.

Maan:-ur mama went to take a new doll for u. jab tak aapke mama aajate hain tab tak aapn naha lo and if u feel nice today then we will go for a dinner.

Mk delighted then said ok and kissed maan's cheek.

Next:-

At the after noon maan got some news and delighted that time he fed mk when annie reached there.

Anni:-I need to talk to u bro.

Maan:-I don't have time then to nanny pack some cloths of our and come to the car.

Maan carried mk and left the home .

Annie stood there slitenly then asked nanny what's the matter.

Nanny:-I don't' ask sahib jee.

Then she also left and annie murmur, jab se geet aur uski beti aayi hain, bhai hume bhol agye hain.

Maan reached at press conference and take mk with him, he reached there when repoters try to pounce on him but his guards don't allow them.

He seen geet standing there with Commisioner and then maan reached and said congratulation jaan then to commissioner thnks for agree with me.

Geet look at him then maan said go and attend the press conference ,I'll join u there soon.

Geet:- but I…

Maan placed his finger on her lips and said shh, go attend the press, for me.

After geet left maan said to mk, sweet heart just sit with nanny some time, but mk said no.

When maan said sweet ehart, iyaad hain na, hum dono milke, mama ko wapas layenge.

Mk nodded in positive then maan kissed her cheeks and gave her to nanny.

Maan give a sms to dev and instruct him something.

After geet complte her press conference when maan enter and said so every one, happy to see ur dcp now,

I just want to tell u thnsk for coming here ,I'm proud of my wife, I want to tell whole world my wife is my inspiration, cause of her I'm everything, with out her ,I'm nothing. All of u want to know y she didn't come before cause she is introvert and she didn't want to disturb by all, want to focus on her work, and me told her not to come till I want.

Geet look at him then maan just said thnk geet, u always keep my word but it's my fault to hide u from this whole world. I'm sorry then just captured her lips and give her full mouth kiss there.

Full press look at them and claps there.

There only maaneet know by some hidden meaning of maan's word.

PRECAP:-khuran's reaction after see the press conference.gk meet sasha. Maaneet with mk at dinner in hotel.

Next Part:-

Here in the km annie fuming in anger and said to dadi dekha geet ki chaal , sab kuch jaan bhoojh kekya hain usne I don't like her, she trapped bhai.

Dev shouts shut ur mouth annie, I know geet bhabi more than u know, she is loyal in every relation .

Annie smirked evily and said so do u have any soft corner for geet , nt take care of ur hubby. That geet suddenly dev slapped her hardly.

Nt shouts annie, mind ur language , and buieness .I know my hubby and may be I don't' know geet personally but I know her from maan veer jee and dev.

Here no one seen maaneet with mk stand there and heard everything, geet feel suffocated and runs from there.

Maan looks at her then leave from there, cause his first priority is geet and take her in his arms , to protect her. He know hwo voulunarable geet is now, and those hurtful words piecred heart.

Maan take notes that first he will take care of geet, then handle his so called family.

Today he has to clear amny thing to them, he gave too much to them , spl annie, may be dev was right that time, he curse to take her here.

Next:-

Geet is sitting in her bed and looking lost.Maan placed mk in another room and make her sleep.Thnk God mk is sleeping , she didn't heard those hurtfull words.

Maan's blood bolied to hear those word from annie, who could she,

Maan remembered how annie told abt arjun's infatuation for geet and blamed geet.

Maan :- dev sahi tha, usse iha le aana mere galati hain,but now I have to see geet now.

Maan enter the room and found geet looking lost,he remembered how she looks ahppy after the press conference how she look old bubbly geet but now, all cause of annie.

Maan placed his hand on her shoulder and geet just tunred and hugged him tightly.

She want to cry but can't , she want to tell maan many things now, she feels suffocating and now more after annie's accusation.

Maan soothed her back then bend and said shhh, geet, look at me, don't take annie or any one's word , just trust me geet,I'll make everything fine, I trust u ,I know u more than my self jaan,.

Geet:-par, annie,oh sach nehi hain.

Maan :- I know jaan.

Geet:-par usne aise kaise kaha, meine toh… y every one blaming me, it's u who take me with u, I went away na. then now y all giving me blame, what's my fault

Maan:- no jaan, tumhra koi galati nehi hain, sab un logo ka galti hain, usse jada mere galati hain , kyuon ki iye mess mere wajay se bhi hua hain but now I'll clear this .

Geet:- aapka koi galati nehi hain.

Maan:- nehi geet, mere galati hain

Both argued some time then suddenly maan grabbed her lips and kissed her there for few moments and said shhhh, bahut bolti ho tum jaan, now get ready for party or else I'll happy to help u .

Geet shocked, surprised and happy then blushed slightly and said mein ready ho jaungi.

Maan :- ok but I would love to help u for this.

Precap:- family dinner, gk meet sasha.

Note:- sorry feeling sleepy so delay the family dinner

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing n heart touching poem muski
luved it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

another tamil poem by naturally kcrazy
Maan !!
sila murai kannodu maraithalum.
Sometimes hiding in front of my eyes..
pala murai ennodu tholaithalum..
Many times getting lost along with me..
valarpirai en kaadhal valaruthu..
my love grows like a growing moon...

purinthu kolvaayaa???
will u understand it??
unnai kandu oru sugam pirakkum..
i get a pleasure when i see u..
kaanamal pala idi idikkum..
many thunders hit me when i dont see u (miss u)
idhayam kooda.. paarai pola.. sumai aanathey...
Even my heart... like a rock... became a burden...

aiyo ithu pizhayo varamo..
Oh god is this a fault or a bless
Ennai solla...
What will i say?
ennai kollamal kolla...
It kills me without killing me.. (stabbing me)


Ithil viduthalai thandhu..
Will u give freedom from this?
neeyum ennai servayo??
and will u ever come to me??

thanxs a lot dear...
love
muskan

kavithai romba nallarikedhe

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Mini tm

Next Part:-

Both went to hospital and meet with doctor .Dcotor check mk and said this is just viral fever, she need to take rest. No ice cream, cold drinks and gives some mdcne for mk.

Mk is just sit in her dadda's lap and placed her head on his shoulder.

Geet:- doctor, what about her food in break fast, lunch and dinner, cause yesterday she puke up full food and don't want to eat anything.

Doctor:- well it's happen in fever, just give her simple food, soup, plain rice and with simple curry, no spicy things for her now and make her eat horlicks and buiscuits .

Geet nodded in yes.

Then they take leaves from there.

In the car, geet said maan mujhe jara head quarter pe chor dijiye.

Maan nodded but mk who is sitting in geet's lap said no.

Both maaneet look at her and geet said kya hua/

Mk:- a.ap. ka..hi..ne..hi ..jao..ge'and hugged geet.

Geet look at maan then maan said darling, look at me, aapke mom uha jake kuhc le aayenge aapke liye. Isliye toh ja rehe hain, aur aap aapne dadda ke sath nehi rehena chathe ho kya.

Mk looks at geet then to maan said paa.r..

Geet kissed her cheeks and said mein jaldi aaungi paaka promise.

Mk twisted her lips like geet done in past and said uummmm.

Maaneet look at mk then at each other.

After geet reached head quarters. Maan try to cheer mk up.

Next:-

At the evening, mk wake up from her sleep and found her dadda doing some work in laptop. And she just goes close to her and try to look at him but she remembered her mama's word when her dadda doing work don't disturb him.

She wants to pull his sleves but sat there but withing a min maan noticed her and said how r u sweet heart? And then take her in his lap .

Mk still feel sad and said aap '.ky..a.ka..re..he ..ho. wo..rk'na'.ma..ma..wi'll..be..an..gry..

Maan looks at mk with confusion when mk said mama ..to..ld..me..not..to dis..turb u .. when u do 'work'

Maan smiles and remember how he scold geet in past but that tiem geet just want to spend some time with him..

Maan said no dear, actually m doing this , see it then he turn the laptop towards mk and then mk noticed this and said mama'.

Maan smiled and said yes ur mama, look how beautiful she is?

Mk clapped and her face fell and she said yes then said but..ma..ma.. lo.oks..pa..le..no..w

Maan also noticed it and said hmmm, ok me and u'll be take care of ur mama.

Mk smiles and nodded her head then maan call nanny to bring horlick and some buiscuits for mk .

After feeding mk , maan called geet is standing behind them and said maan, m inside the house.

Maan turns and see her.he smiles and said good, now fresh hoke jaldi aajao.

Geet nodded but before leaving she asked mk how ru dear?

Mk smiles and kissed geet's cheek and said good. Aa..p ja..ldi 'se ..aj..a..ao ..na.a..ur ..ha up..ar..dad..da.ke..lappy..dekh..na..maat.

Geet surprised and look at maan who smirked and said jaan come soon.

Geet nodded and left from there and maangive mdcne to mk and then check her temperature which is below 100now.still maan carried her and take her in study toom and instructed nanny to call geet to here.

Next:-

After changing the dress , geet went to down stairs when nanny told her maan's instruction.

Geet shocked to hear it but goes to meet maan in study.

Geet enter the study and see mk is sleeping in single bed with a pink teddy bear.

Geet smiles then think iye bed toh pehele iha nehi tha.

Maan :- tumahre jaane ke baad meine iye bed iha lagai, karne ko toh tab zindegi mein kuch tha hi nehi ,sirf tumhe dhoond na, tumhara iyaad mein rehena aur kaam, , so iha hi so jata tha .

Geet looks at him when maan said but oh sajaa bhi kaam hain tumhe khone ka dard se, then maan held her hand and said tumhe jo dard mein dia usse kam mere saaja hain geet, aur tum toh mujhe saaja dene se rehe, dekho abhi gussa ho rehe ho saaja ke naam se, then he hold her face in between his plams and said kyuon geet itna paayar karte ho , kyuon khud ko saaja de rehe ho jab bhi iye saaja toh mujhe pana chaiye.

Suddenly geet cover mouth by her palm and said maan .

Maan:- geet,pls aapne aapko aur dard maat do, don't u know after see u like this it's break my hearts into million pieces. Geet, I want to see u happy, pls geet, aapne maan ki baat bol do.

Geet just stood there .maan left her and turns and see the pics of geet in the wall , maan:- oh dekho mere geet toh uha hain , jo mujhse gussa karta haq se, naraj hota haq se, khush hota mujhse, rota mere seene mein saar rakh ke, oh dekho kaise haas raha hain bilkul bacchi ajise, oh dekho kaise ro raha hain bilkul bacchi .

Maan turns and hold geet's hand and said pls give me geet, my old geet, my bubbly geet who can fight with me , angry on me, held her head in my chest and cry there , laugh there, tell her every tiny things . pls geet, give me that geet again.

I beg u.

Here geet can't take it any more and just hugged him and said maan, pls''''

Both hugged each other and stood there for some time .

After some time maan sat on the floor when geet placed her head on his shoulder and said maan , meine aapko chor ke kahi nehi jana chathi thi, par kya akrti kisse bolti ,koi nehi janta tha humara shaadi ke baarein mein aur tab mein pregnant thi,

Maan shocked and surprised and then said it means that time u came there and mujhe bolne aayi mk ke baarein mein.

Geet nodded when maan said aur meien aapne hathon aapne khihsiya ko dur kar dia and try to hit his hand when geet caught it and said maan pls.

Maan :- tum itni sab ke baad bhi aksie itni shant rehe sakte ho, y geet, y punish me, I'm failed as husband , as father, but again geet closed his mouth and said shhh, aap bahut acche pati ho, abhut aache dadda ho, pata hain ek din baramulla mein , mein na gusse mein mk ko kehe dia aap baap beti bilkul same ho, gussa jaise nose pe baithe reehte hain aur mk in anger said hmm, mein aapni dadda ke beti hoon, uska gusse oh bilkul aapki tarah hain maan.

Maan weakly smiles and said ummm, oh hum dono ka beti hain, gussa toh hum dono ki tarah hain.

Then after some moments of silence maan asked geet hwo she handle little mk when she feared about little baby.

Geet smiles and said

After mk's birth nurse give her to me and I just wonder to see her there, she is replica of ur maan, I just kissed her and want to tell u , I just want to give u , ur daughter, ur dream. But I' anyway, then nurse and doctor helped me about feeding, bathing, changing cloths of mk, first I feared and cried there then I loved ot do them .I just want to do everything for mk.

Maan :- those things , I promised u help u but'

Geet:- maan, u know when mk is 4yr old, one day she is crying lots kisibhi tarah nehi khaiyegi nehi baar bolne par bhi nehi, danta phir bhi nehi then when I give her ur pics ,she just start to eat her dinner.in fact every lunch and dinner and bed story is full of ur story, our frist meeting, our every moments.I shared our life with her maan.

Maan heard and feel proud of geet , cause the way she handle everything and feel sad for them cause they want to be with him but.. maan feel angry on himself for his anger , he almost ruined everything.

Then maan noticed geet is smiling little and some sperk on her eyes when she told about this.she is so lost in there then suddenly tears falls from her eyes and she said but maan , mk missed u there.I try my level best to give ur love but still she missed u.

Maan just hugged her tightly and said I'm sorry geet, I'm really sorry from now ,I'll be with u and our daughter .

Next:-

Maan just hugged her tightly and said I'm sorry geet, I'm really sorry from now ,I'll be with u and our daughter .

Geet just lay her head on his chest and heart his steady heart beat.

Maan engulfed her in his arms and then both look at each other .geet look at maan and maan look at geet, then maan slowly bend and captured her lips and very gently kissed her lips. Then kissed her eyes, cheesk, nose and forehead and said let's go , have dinner, then mk ko mdcn bhi dena hain.

Geet shyly smiles and nodded.

Maan noticed her old shy smiles back. But for a min again it's vanished.

At the dinner time mk sit in maan's lap and geet fed her and maan told her a story.After that mk alsmot feel on sleep when geet make her eat mdcn which is almost puke by mk but geet try to fed her again and succed .

Then geet told nanny to take her but maan said if she wake up and not find maaneet there then she will start cry.

Geet:- nehi, maan, abhi medne lya hain so oh soyegi, aap khana kha lijiye, aapko bhi toh rest chiaye . aab no but. Chaliye

After maaneet finish there dinner. geet cleaned the table when maan changed his dress and lay besides his daughter.

After some time geet joined him. Both lay each side of mk and placed their hand on mk's forehead and look the temperature .

Next Part:-

Next day morning, geet got imp call from head office and just left the home and before leving she left a note for maan.

She feel sorry cause she want to tell maan but haven't time for it.

After 2hours when maan wake up and find geet is not there and assume may be in washroom. He looks at mk who is sleeping peacefully. He just kissed her forehead when his eyes caught a note ,

Note:-

Maan, I'm sorry but I have to go now, as some emergency come, I'll return soon,

Ur jaan.

Maan just kissed the note and pray to God for geet's success.

After his shower , he enter the room when mk wake up and looks at him and said goo'od.mor..ning'da..dda..

Maan :- take her in his arms and saod good morning sweet heart.

Mk look at him and said aap'ka..hi.ja..re..he..ho'wh..ere..is..ma..ma

Maan :- ummm, how ru my sweet heart

Mk:- fine. Wh..ere'is'ma..ma.

Maan:-ur mama went to take a new doll for u. jab tak aapke mama aajate hain tab tak aapn naha lo and if u feel nice today then we will go for a dinner.

Mk delighted then said ok and kissed maan's cheek.

Next:-

At the after noon maan got some news and delighted that time he fed mk when annie reached there.

Anni:-I need to talk to u bro.

Maan:-I don't have time then to nanny pack some cloths of our and come to the car.

Maan carried mk and left the home .

Annie stood there slitenly then asked nanny what's the matter.

Nanny:-I don't' ask sahib jee.

Then she also left and annie murmur, jab se geet aur uski beti aayi hain, bhai hume bhol agye hain.

Maan reached at press conference and take mk with him, he reached there when repoters try to pounce on him but his guards don't allow them.

He seen geet standing there with Commisioner and then maan reached and said congratulation jaan then to commissioner thnks for agree with me.

Geet look at him then maan said go and attend the press conference ,I'll join u there soon.

Geet:- but I'

Maan placed his finger on her lips and said shh, go attend the press, for me.

After geet left maan said to mk, sweet heart just sit with nanny some time, but mk said no.

When maan said sweet ehart, iyaad hain na, hum dono milke, mama ko wapas layenge.

Mk nodded in positive then maan kissed her cheeks and gave her to nanny.

Maan give a sms to dev and instruct him something.

After geet complte her press conference when maan enter and said so every one, happy to see ur dcp now,

I just want to tell u thnsk for coming here ,I'm proud of my wife, I want to tell whole world my wife is my inspiration, cause of her I'm everything, with out her ,I'm nothing. All of u want to know y she didn't come before cause she is introvert and she didn't want to disturb by all, want to focus on her work, and me told her not to come till I want.

Geet look at him then maan just said thnk geet, u always keep my word but it's my fault to hide u from this whole world. I'm sorry then just captured her lips and give her full mouth kiss there.

Full press look at them and claps there.

There only maaneet know by some hidden meaning of maan's word.

PRECAP:-khuran's reaction after see the press conference.gk meet sasha. Maaneet with mk at dinner in hotel.

Next Part:-

Here in the km annie fuming in anger and said to dadi dekha geet ki chaal , sab kuch jaan bhoojh kekya hain usne I don't like her, she trapped bhai.

Dev shouts shut ur mouth annie, I know geet bhabi more than u know, she is loyal in every relation .

Annie smirked evily and said so do u have any soft corner for geet , nt take care of ur hubby. That geet suddenly dev slapped her hardly.

Nt shouts annie, mind ur language , and buieness .I know my hubby and may be I don't' know geet personally but I know her from maan veer jee and dev.

Here no one seen maaneet with mk stand there and heard everything, geet feel suffocated and runs from there.

Maan looks at her then leave from there, cause his first priority is geet and take her in his arms , to protect her. He know hwo voulunarable geet is now, and those hurtful words piecred heart.

Maan take notes that first he will take care of geet, then handle his so called family.

Today he has to clear amny thing to them, he gave too much to them , spl annie, may be dev was right that time, he curse to take her here.

Next:-

Geet is sitting in her bed and looking lost.Maan placed mk in another room and make her sleep.Thnk God mk is sleeping , she didn't heard those hurtfull words.

Maan's blood bolied to hear those word from annie, who could she,

Maan remembered how annie told abt arjun's infatuation for geet and blamed geet.

Maan :- dev sahi tha, usse iha le aana mere galati hain,but now I have to see geet now.

Maan enter the room and found geet looking lost,he remembered how she looks ahppy after the press conference how she look old bubbly geet but now, all cause of annie.

Maan placed his hand on her shoulder and geet just tunred and hugged him tightly.

She want to cry but can't , she want to tell maan many things now, she feels suffocating and now more after annie's accusation.

Maan soothed her back then bend and said shhh, geet, look at me, don't take annie or any one's word , just trust me geet,I'll make everything fine, I trust u ,I know u more than my self jaan,.

Geet:-par, annie,oh sach nehi hain.

Maan :- I know jaan.

Geet:-par usne aise kaise kaha, meine toh' y every one blaming me, it's u who take me with u, I went away na. then now y all giving me blame, what's my fault

Maan:- no jaan, tumhra koi galati nehi hain, sab un logo ka galti hain, usse jada mere galati hain , kyuon ki iye mess mere wajay se bhi hua hain but now I'll clear this .

Geet:- aapka koi galati nehi hain.

Maan:- nehi geet, mere galati hain

Both argued some time then suddenly maan grabbed her lips and kissed her there for few moments and said shhhh, bahut bolti ho tum jaan, now get ready for party or else I'll happy to help u .

Geet shocked, surprised and happy then blushed slightly and said mein ready ho jaungi.

Maan :- ok but I would love to help u for this.

Precap:- family dinner, gk meet sasha.

Note:- sorry feeling sleepy so delay the family dinner

Awesum story line luved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...it was just wonderful....annie is so bad....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update love it hope you clear their MU soon and let maan know the truth that mk is his daughter update soon please

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