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Chapter11

Geet : was looking at Maan

Maan: why are you staring at me ?

Geet:i am thinking because of me suddenly your life is up side down...

Maan: why you are thinking like that?

Geet: job gai, you have to change the city , you have to leave your brother like friends ..and

Maan: and kuch nahi...

Geet: was walking restlessly in room

Maan: ab kya huwa...

Geet: agar yeh aunty bhi fraud nikle tou...

Maan: Geet risk lana para ga.. you go and change ...he gave her the shopping bag.

Geet: thx ..

Maan: dekha tou ha nai thx..

Geet ache he hoga...

Maan: smiled wah aap ka trust ...

Geet; shyly smiled... please go from here

Maan: why?

Geet: i have to change ...

Maan: looked at her ..

Geet: go

Maan: made sad face walked out.

Geet: i think he is bit crazy haar cheeze ko itna lightly lata ha...

Maan: ha hoon ...

Geet : aap ...

Maan: yar cell lana aaya tha nechay jara hoon phir rona lago gai

Geet: smiled ..

Maan: jao..

Geet; jee...

Maan: was about to walk out ...

Geet: suna..

Maan: jee sunaiya ...

Geet: please change cell numbers ... they will trace us

Maan: wow you are genius... i did not thought of it...

Geet: kya matalb genius ...

Maan: i thought you are a shy kind of girl...

Geet: pushed him out you go we will be late flight ka time hojai ga..

Maan: went..

Geet: looked at the dresses... flash back... brij ..Geet your credit card is getting

Daarji:Brij Geet is our only daughter she can buy anything never ask about her billing..

Geet: wah Daarji bus itna pyar tha... she selected one dress and changed... "this dress is not expensive but i will say the person who had given me is world best person." she went out ...

Adi and Romeo were talking to Maan while changing the sim Adi was very angry...

Adi: you dont know that lady may be Heer had send her ...

Maan: yar Adi i can judge people..

Adi: bus kar ... jis tarah tum na judge kiya ha i know.. there was a bell at door,

Everyone looked at each other...

Maan: ab kon ha ...

Adi: please you both go in ...

Lucky looked through the key hole... "oh media wala ha"

Maan: what ?

Lucky ha yar ..there was again bell at the door..

Maan: Geet chalo..he picked up cells..

Geet: looked at him ?

Maan: Romeo bag lao...

everyone looked at each other... the all got Maan ..

Maan Geet ..he offer his hand .chalo... you all take care... i will call you ... for kitchen window he asked slide down..

Geet: i will not come..

Maan: close your eyes and come i will not let you fall down...

Geet: looked at Maan ...

Lucky jao bhabi Maan ha...

Geet: just step out .. Maan hold her tight .. they slide down

Maan: was very close to Geet she could feel his breath on her neck.. He whisper... "life ka maza tou ab aaya ga... full of adventure...

Geet: just hold his shoulder... they were standing on ground ..

Maan: you are not in air MRS...

Geet: open eyes.. we reached

Maan: smiled yes we reached to ground..he started this bike...he placed their bags on the back "chalo"

Geet seated ...

Maan"let me take you away "he raced the bike and the left the home behind...

Geet;where are we going ?she placed her chin on his shoulder and shouted in his ear

Maan: where this road will take us?

Geet; and what about that aunty?

Maan: Adi will make sure about her then we will contact her till then we will ,,,he paused..

Geet:where we will spend night ?

Maan: on bike

Geet: what?

Maan: where ever i will be tired i will park ...

Geet: what?

Maan? looked her puzzle face in mirror...

Geet: i like adventure but this is little more...

They left the city behind ...

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Geet :placed her head on Maan shoulder ... the sun was bothering her

Maan: could feel her .."are you ok ?"

Geet: yes i am fine .

Maan: self thought only daughter of Handa's always traveling in Mercedes. with me on a third hand bike ... how lord change the fate... he hold her hand which was wrap around his waist ...

Geet: i am fine you don't worry . i am enjoying the ride ..

Maan: dont lie Geet it is 40C i can feel the heat.

Geet: please aap meri fikeer na kara...

Maan: see there is a gas station there i will refill the tank you freshen up..

Geet: ok

They reached the station..

Guy: jee

Maan: fill the tank .. i there any hotel in near by.

Guy: smiled .. you will just find dhaba here

Maan: where ?

Guy: it is back of this station ...

Maan: looked at Geet who was wiping her face with her duppata .. he picked up bags locked bike.. hold Geet hand and walked to the back..

Geet: where are you taking me?

Maan: lets eat some thing..

Geet: here.

Maan: yes sorry it is not ..paused

Geet: looked at him ...

Maan: smiled

Geet: i said you many times please dont think about me .. i can adjust my self...

Maan: placed the bags on a bed .. sit here i will order..

Geet: looked around

Maan: come with me .

Geet: where are you taking me ?

Maan: aao tou ..

Geet; water she looked at hand pump

Maan: yes it is cold water you wash your face .he pump out water for her looked at her while she was washing her face.

Geet: felt he was staring at her .. he was so lost that he didnot notice with eyes Geet had asked him few times . she smiled and splash a hand full of water on his face...

Maan: oh yeh kya

Geet: hosh mein larahi thi smiled

Maan : you abhi bataa hoon .. he just try to catch her she ran but slip as it was muddy and slippery . but two strong hand catch her before she fall.

Geet: just hold his shirt..

Maan: picked her up .. where were you go .. he wipe his face in her duppata.. she felt him very close to her.. he carefully made her sit on bed

Geet: wow after looking at food.i am so hungry


Maan: then start... he he offer her a plate

Geet: i can share with you no need of plate..

Maan: smiled

Geet: took the first bit ... she chew it ..

Maan: kya huwa is it not nice...

Geet: it is tasty ..she ate more.. looked at Maan he was eating Green chilly ..

Maan: looked at her ..you want?

Geet: no i am fine with this ...

Maan: looked at her she was wiping her nose with her sleeve ... "is it hot "

Geet: no

Maan: but your lips ? he saw her pink lips turning red ...

Geet: woh tou...

Maan: drag the plate away..

Geet: kya let me eat..

Maan: no you are feeling hot ..." he recollected how he kissed her , he wanted to do mischief but looked around ... he ask the dhaba own to get yogurt and sugar for her.. eat this ..

Geet: no i want that what you are eating ..

Maan: ok i will eat this now ..he dip his bread in the yogurt...

Geet: smiled...

They finished .

Maan: lets go we will reach to city before dark..

Geet: ok

Maan: try to start his bike but it was not

Geet: kya huwa

Maan: i guess it is tired, i never use it for such long time . its engine is seized .

Geet: ab kya hoga

Maan: lift?

Geet: who will give us lift?she sat on rock.

Maan: looked at a truck which was refilling .. "Geet do you want more adventure ?"

Geet: what?

Maan: pointed at the truck .. they will give us lift.

Geet: a hay truck

Maan: and few goats ..

Geet no..

Maan: it is last option dear... he pat her cheek...

Geet; ok

Maan: walked to the truck driver he talk to them for some time.. he walk back..

Geet kya huwa?

Maan: they will give us ride to the next city..

Geet: ok .. he drag his bike to the truck...

Maan: come ..gave Geet his hand

Geet: i will manage ..

Maan: just pick her up and made her sit in truck..

Geet: shyly looked at him...

Maan: chalo bhai ... he tap the truck...

Geet was sitting on the edge away from goat..

Maan: are you scared ?

Geet: yes

Maan: ok i will sit on that side ...

Geet: was looking out .. suddenly she felt Maan was snoring. his head was again and again slipping ... she care fully gave him her shoulder... but after few mins his head was in her lap he was hugging her.. she smiled he was tired, since i met him he is just running here and there could not sleep a min properly ... she looked at his smiling face..she just run her fingers in his hairs .. time passed she just let him sleep.. after couple of hours the truck stop with a bang..

Maan: woke up with a jerk "kya huwa " he looked around it was dark.

Geet: truck stopped..

Maan: whats the time? he looked at his watch ...

they heard foot steps ...

truck driver : sir koi nahi ha

police guy: with torch light spotted Maan and Geet .. are they too your goats..

truck driver.. :police sir they are husband and wife their bike was not working i am just giving them lift

police guy husband wife or they had run from their homes .. he shouted you both get down..

Geet: :Maan yeh kya she hold his arm as tight as she could...

Maan: relax come with me..

police guy: oh have you kidnap her... he pull Maan

Maan: wait..

Police guy oh attitude... he looked at Geet he put torch light on her face then he was scrolling it down Maan at once came in between them ..

Maan: she is my wife .

Police guy : show me papers ..

Maan: what papers..

Police guy Maan registration papers..

Maan: looked at Geet

Police guy: oh larka are you making me fool... daily i capture such couples who are running ... he whisper in Maan ears .. your larki belong to a rich family.. as he had seen Geet diamond earing and locket..

Maan: didnot got.." she is my wife he just hold Geet hand in his.

Police guy : hogi .. yeh tou station ja ka pata chala ga... ..put them in van...

Maan: pull Geet next to him ..

Police guy: madam you can come at front..

Maan: just raised his hand but Geet quickly hold his fist...

Geet: calm down .. " i will be with my husband.. she seated first...

Police guy : had a laughter..."husband"


Maan:was just sweating his face was totally red .. he was not looking at Geet.

Geet wipe his fore head with her duppata ..." calm down"

Maan: i will kill him.

Geet: we will prove we are husband and wife?

Maan: but how ?

Geet: looked at him..

Maan: we donot have papers .. he has our bags if he call at your home they will say we are not ..

Geet: grab his arm.. i will not leave you ..rather i will die..

Maan: i was so out of my mind that i forgot to register the marriage ...


they reached station ..

Police guy : madam you stay here let him stay in prison..

Geet: just hold Maan arm tight ..

Maan: she will be with me ...

Police guy: kab tak .. he had a laughter..

Geet; whisper calm down...

Police guy: lock them up... he open Geet purse and started reading her card... "oh Geet Handa daughter of HANDA'S"

Maan: just hold his head...

Geet: Maan i am scared

Maan: kuch nahi hoga...

Police guy: to his junior call at this number...

Sergent: sir

Police guy: hello i Handa's home..

Brij: ha

Police guy: your daughter Geet

Brij: she died he had bang the phone

Police guy: oh tou you miss Geet handa you are dead...

Geet: looked at Maan: "she cleared her throat... i am Mrs Geet Maan"

police Guy had a laughter .. all of his office staff followed him .

Sergent: sir larka ka wallet se yeh number nikla ha ..

Police Guy: he looked at the number ... oh Savitri devi

Sergent: yes should i call them .

Police guy yes...

Sergent: sir

Police Guy: hello madam are you Savitri devi

Savitri devi : yes

Police guy: madam do you know Maan and Geet

Savitri devi : yes he is my son.. she got he is in trouble that why he had asked to call her.

Police guy.. cleared his throat.. are you sure ?

Savitri devi: where is he?

Police Guy looked at Maan behind bars.. he with hand ask other to open the lockup. "he is in front of me"

Savitri devi: give him phone

Police guy: yes madam... he looked at Maan.. "why you didnot told me ?"

Maan: looked at him in anger...

Police guy: sir madam want to talk to you.

Maan: hi maa jee

Savitri devi: i am glad that in your need you have called your Maa .. where are you?

Maan:Ajmer police station

Savitri devi: ok ...

Maan: maa

Savitri devi; dont say any thing... my car will reach there... give him phone..

Police guy: jee

Savitri devi: till car reach there treat them well or.. closed the call

Police guy: madam they are my special guest .. asked his junior to offer them chair... but both Maan and Geet did not seated...

Maan: picked you the bags and he walk out with Geet hand in his

Police guy: wipe his face... "who can say he is Savitri devi son?"

junior: yes sir

Police guy : with a old bike and sitting with goats who can say that? he drank water...

junior: give him more..

Police Guy: next time dont let me drunk...

junior :ok sir..


Maan and Geet waited out side ... after 10 mins a black Mercedes reached there.

driver: are you Maan

Maan: yes

Driver ; sir you come with me he oder other guy to bring his bike.. both seated ...

Geet: looked at him

Maan: hope so not in other problem..

Geet: just looked at him.

The car stopped out side hotel Rajastan .

Geet: here

Maan: helplessly looked at her... both walk in

at reception : sir your suite is at right..

Geet:Maan is this must to stay here...

Maan: hmm ..chalo sochta ha ... he pull her with him..

As they enter room both looked at each other ...

the room decorated with flowers and candle... they both stopped...


to be cont... i will updated as soon as possible these days very busy... sorry for late updates ...




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chapter 13

Heer walking restlessly in room."Aunty what is this?"

Aunty" beta just relax"

Heer: Aunty i am feeling sick while thinking he is with some other lady..

Aunty" smiled and lighted a cigarette " tou kya karo"

Heer: you should have saved Maan and let her stay in prison...

Savitri devi:"Heer let me do in my way beta , i understand you want they should not have any relation they will not have you just wait and see..."

Heer" looked at her watch it is 1 what you think they must be ... paused .. you have asked the hotel owner to give them the best suite ...

Savitri devi :smiled... beta jail kai hawa khana ka baad romance nahi hota ... they are in trouble , their marriage is not register they must be thinking about it... , they dont have a single penny in their pocket how will they...

Heer: Maan has ?

Savitri devi now he will not ?

Heer: how?

Savitri devi : tomorrow morning the owner of the resort will give them bill ..

Heer: but he will call you?

Savitri devi: see she switch of her cell..

Heer: iss sa kya hoga...

Savitri devi : i am out of country... my manger will ask him to join office ...

Heer: he will not i know him

Savitri devi: look at this...showed her a file.

Heer: what is this : jump out of her seat...you have given your property to Maan?

Savitri devi: beta i had to give my property to you ...as you are my only niece

Heer: but why Maan?

Savitri devi: try to understand me , when tomorrow he will see this papers he will be be shocked ,he will try to contact me ,

Heer: then?

Savitri devi : i will say i am tired and i want him to look after my factories , in this way he will she paused ..

Heer: if you think he will be your slave ,he will not as i know him very well, you are gambling nothing else , if you lost then you will be left with nothing...

Savitri devi: beta for you any thing ? dont think i have think upon it .and decided to give him my property.

Heer: but aunty this way they will come more close...

Savitri devi: beta i will make him so busy that he will not have time to scratch his head...


Heer: if they?

Savitri devi pat her head ."see fate had given me one more chance let me try"



At Ajmer

Geet: Maan

Maan: yes

Geet: aik baat balo

Maan: was sitting on sofa opening his shoes laces ..."sure"

Geet:" please lets go from here we can stay in dargha "

Maan: but:

Geet: kneel down please Maan lets not take her help , we will start our life from little ...but not from this ..she look around the room...

Maan: first you get up he made her stand ... " i also dont like taking help from other i agreed just because of you,so that you can sleep peace fully ."

Geet: if you want me to be peace fully lets go from here... she picked up both bags hold his hand and pull him out of room ..

Maan: laces to band karna do..

Geet: nahi girta .. i am holding you...

Maan: bike kharab ha

Geet: i heard police man saying that bike is fine..

Maan: looked at her.." do you want to sleep on bike"

Geet: adventure husband ka saath yeh bhi kar sakti hoon.

Maan: loved the way she said...

hotel staff :sir are you going some where ?

Maan: looked at Geet , no we will be back in hour or so.

hotel staff : ok sir..

Geet: see i was right they are keeping eye on us...she whisper..

Maan: lagta ha you watch alot of suspense movies ...

Geet: smiled chala humari jumbo jet is ready...

Maan: had a laughter , chalo raat he raat ko nikal jai...

Geet: Maan please first lets pray

Maan: ok they went to Dargha ... and prayed

Geet: poke him

Maan: kya ?

Geet: stop looking at me pray...

Maan: closed his eyes...

Geet: bus bahot hogai chala aab...

Maan: looked at her,

Geet: baad mein dekha na ... chala , she pulled him up

Maan: chalo

they walk out

Geet: Maan:

Maan: was opening his bike lock...

Geet: see that?

Maan: kya?

Geet Caravan on sale

Maan: so ?

Geet: let go

Maan: where?










Geet: lets find it owner?

Maan: pagal ho

Geet: if we buy that we can stay and travel

Maan: you are totally gone case...

Geet: see i am planning for our future .

Maan: who will pay?

Geet: me

Maan: how?

Geet: that day when i was coming to your studio , daajee gave me money to buy jewelery, i forgot to keep in locker i kept in my bag.. she gave Maan the wallet.

Maan: but why this ?

Geet: see we dont know where we will find job we we have shelter we can search city to city?

Maan:you are ..

Geet: go baat karo.

Maan: who will drive i dont know?

Geet: mein hoon na...

Maan: knocked the door...


a old guy came out..

Maan: sir we want to buy?

old man: it is 2 at night and you want to buy?

Maan: fee ashame..actually we ..

Geet: push him back ... babajee namasta

Old man : rub his eyes...

Geet: baba jee we want to buy your caravan .

Old man: i cannot sale now at this hour?

Geet: babajee actually we were look for it for ages , i just pray in dargha meri wish puri ho as i step down i saw this ... she looked in

Maan: looked at her nautanki...

old man: congrats your wish is fulfilled ... he walk in come in ...

Geet: chala

Maan: yeh kya ha?

Geet: jab kam na bana tou nautanki karni parti ha...

Maan: i dont know how much he will charge ?

Geet: we will see?

Old man: it worth 5 lakh .

Geet; oh ...

old man: kya huwa

Geet; mera paas to bus 2 ha

Old man; you find some other?

Geet: so you dont want my wish to be fullfil,

Old man: yeh kab bola mein na ?

Geet: aap kuch to kam kara, see she looked around.

Maan: was just looking at Geet he didnot said a word.

old Man: beta 2 to kam ha ,

Geet: ok take my chain..as i just have this right now.

Old Man: no no...

Geet uncle jee please give us... take this 2 lakh ...

Old man: looked at Geet face.. he knew his caravan does not worth so much , he said ok...

Geet: thank:

Old man: you both have to wait till morning so that i transfer the paper on your name..

Maan: whisper we will register our marriage too.

Geet: but we have to get out of here ...

Old man :koi problem ha.

Geet: yes

old man: kya

Geet if we drive to some other city like

old man : but i am tired ?

Geet we will drive ?

Old man: are you both thief...

Geet: looked at Maan, she taken out her id card and showed him

Old man: oh Handa jee kai beti ho, once i worked in their factory ...

Maan : just could not imagine that much sharp Geet is...

Geet chala..

Old man: ha...

Maan: with help of Geet brought his bike in..

Old Man: this is key , he gave to Maan you drive i am sleeping... he pull the bed out...

Maan: madam you drive...

Geet: smiled and started the car.

Maan: you will get tired?

Geet: you keep talking to me i will not, when you have company you never feel tired... she speed to highway.




Next morning

Sarvitri devi called hotel "how is Mr and Mrs Maan"

hotel staff: madam they did not came back last night..

Savitri Devi: what? she shouted ... Heer who was sleeping in her room woke up ,

Heer Kya huwa aunty

Savitri devi : i lost



to be cont ...

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dii actually i hd totally 4got tht hw n where maaneet met n tht argggh dev loose charecter bt thnxx 4 posting here in d forum n story to superb ja rahi hai prt 17 jaldi post karo na n simplicity in ur story roks

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Originally posted by: chandreyeeroy

dii actually i hd totally 4got tht hw n where maaneet met n tht argggh dev loose charecter bt thnxx 4 posting here in d forum n story to superb ja rahi hai prt 17 jaldi post karo na n simplicity in ur story roks


may be today ... i updated my both FF's lets see ...
many of my readers were facing prob... 😡in using blog
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hey am really happy that ur came back n post maaneet FF in IF...
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nice ff.i m waiting for more.
plz continue soon
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hi... lovely to see you back on IF
i been following this ss on your blog this is a lovely story just love it plz cont soon
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omg you started writing here
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thank u so much
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chapter 14

Maan: looked at Geet who was trying to concentrated on highway." i think with in 30 mins we will reach city"

Geet: jee

Maan: you must be tired as you could not sleep a single min through out the night.

Geet: looked at him .."aap bhi tou nai soai baat karta raha "

Maan: meri baat aur ha for shooting i have stayed awake whole night.

Geet: phir meri baat bhi aur ha smiled

Maan: kya matlab

Geet: i will tell you later.

Maan: looked at back,"yeh uncle jee kitna snore karta ha"

Geet: smiled .


they reached the city .

Maan: you park the car near a public place i will take uncle on my bike to court .

Geet: but i

Maan: you sleep in mean time.

Geet: aik baat bolo

Maan: yes

Geet: please don't mind

Maan: bolo na?

Geet: register our marriage..

Maan: smiled i will take to the lawyer, i know next time no Savitri jee will save us.

Geet: actually i don't want anyone help.

Maan ok you park near this garden, i will wake him.

Geet: smiled...


Maan woke the old man and he ask him to come with him to the registry office .

Old Man: beta you are Handa's daughter why are you so formal

Geet: i am just Maan's wife not any one daughter's..

Maan: looked at Geet

Geet: "Maan" he was standing at van door

Maan: kya?

Geet: gave him a box . "you will need this"

Maan: "yeh kya ha?"

Geet: plz pay him .. push him out "go me sleepy"

Maan: could not argue with her. he left with the old man.


Geet: clear the mess

Geet : now it look like a home.

she try to lay down for a while but kids voice was disturbing her. " why i am so restless over here no one know us ,he must be safe. ...Oh how fool i am i have cell i can call him" she called Maan.

Maan: was sitting in waiting room.he looked at the number " hello are you ok koi prob tou nai"

Geet: bus bus bus sub question aik saath.."i am fine i just call to know your well being"

Maan: it will take about hour or so . you rest.

Geet: ok take care .

Maan you too.

Geet: cut the call... she just twist & turn but could not sleep... "oh Geet jee your pati will be hungry when he will come back why don't you cook." she open fridge there was nothing in it , she look out of the window saw a vegetable hawker ..."i should go & buy " she walk out


Hawker : beta what you want?

geet: looked at veg "oh i don't know what he like should i ask him " she was about to call"nahi sara surprise kharab hojaga.. she bought .. she look at small kids they were playing in park ...

two small kids pass her."oh i am so hungry" he said to other.

other kid: "yar this shopkeeper is such a thief he sell everything so expensive we can't afford ...

other kid: my mom give me 30 rps & in that i can just get a bottle

Geet: smiled she bought few potato & walk to the store bought flour & few other things..."lord Him self give opportunity."... walk back to carvan & start cooking.with in 30 mins she baked muffins fry chips & made lemonade.. she placed in paper plates walk out , there was a bench near the carvan she placed there ...

Geet: how to attracted kids... she say a balloon guy called him buy few, with marker she wrote on it 20 per plate come fast & enjoy your break...

one kid who was doing fielding near the bench "aunty is this for us "

Geet: jee beta i just made for you all.

Kid : wait i will call all they all are hungry .

Geet: ok she smiled i am sure Maan will be happy...

with in two mins there were 24 kids ...

one kid: oh aunty it is yummy can i have more muffin

Geet: yes you all keep an eye i will bring more.

kids all together you dont worry .. the sat on the van step...

Maan walk back he saw kids standing around the carvan got worried ran...

One kid: hello uncle where are you going? he stand with his bat.

Maan: geet..

other kid : i think he want to steal aunti baking .. he came with his bat...

Maan: wait wait as he saw other coming with wickets ... " i am not a thief "

kid: give us 30 rps then we will give u a plate..

Maan: what plate?the made him stand next to the tree

Kid aunty is making for kids if any adult will buy it he has to pay more ...

Maan: shouted on top of his voice Geet

Geet: was frying she just ran out "Maan ha"

Kid wait aunty we are handling him

Geet: oh he is your uncle leave him ...

kid : but he was running.

Maan: Geet what is all this?

Geet; you come in i will tell you she just pull Maan in.

kids whistle... ohhh

Geet: maro gai she gave them the tray & closed the door.

Maan: what is this ?

Geet showed him money .."i was not sleepy & kids were hungry i baked & fry & at half rate sale it ."

Maan: but

Geet: Maan no if & but in this way we can earn.

Maan: looked at her face.

Geet: where is your bike?

Maan: hold her hand .. placed an envelope

Geet: yeh kya ha?

Maan: our small home paper he pointed at carvan & some money.

Geet: you sold your bike ..

Maan: yes

Geet: why? i gave you my ...paused

Maan: we have car why we need bike , with this we can start something

Geet: but

Maan: please ... you are doing so much for me ,can't i

Geet: smiled.

Maan: hold her i came here to take you they will register our marriage after hour..

Geet: shyly smiled.

Maan: get ready. he look around

Geet: placed a plate in front of her .."20 rs please"

Maan: placed his wallet in her hand."all your's"


to be cont

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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