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Chapter 3

Maan: grab her hand chalo mera saath..he just pull her with him

Geet: i will go myself .

Maan: it is all because of me if i had not asked Pari to convince you you would have never come to my show.

Geet: they don't recognize me

Maan: chup cover your face he make her wear his jacket ...he wore his helmet.

Geet: there is blood from your fore head..she said in a very low voice

Maan: looked at her... he pull her behind hi from back door of the station ...

Geet: was just walking fast to catch up speed with Maan. it was all dark a narrow street

Maan : you stay here i will bring bike ..he asked her to sit behind a car. he was about to leave her hand , he heard foot steps he hide her behind him

Man: woh bhai jee have you seen a girl

Maan: know changed his voice.. na jee .. he raised hi small finger... as if he want to go to washroom

Man: ganda ... haato woh indar ha ..all walk ahead.

Maan: whisper can you run?

Geet: yes

Maan: as they will turn right you run left side wait for me

Geet:but

Maan: that street is dark & dead end ,you just sit i will come in 30 second

He kept an eye on them as they turn to the other road, he whisper go. let free her hand, she ran & sit behind a parked.

Maan walk to right there was huge crowed ,different channel cars were standing , he just quickly open his bike , without starting he walk to Geet..

Maan : chalo he took off his helmet cover her head

Geet: blood

Maan: you sit he pull her back ask her to sit behind him

Geet: you are hurt

Maan hold me tight as you can, he wrap her arm around his chest.

As he started his bike, few people notice Maan

Lady : woh ha Maan, they started running towards them, the started throwing stone towards them

Maan: ready just bend, he drive as fast as he could he turn the next street ...at full speed he drove out of the sight ..."Yahoo we did it "

Geet: was just holding her breath..

Maan: could feel her hands clutching his shirt tightly..."we are save"

Geet: she didnot reply

Maan: hello are you ok..

Geet: jee

Maan: to bolo na, now tell me where is your home i will drop you.

Geet: told him address.

Maan: now you can relax no one can harm you..

Geet: took a deep breath...

Maan: just look at her hand which was still holding his shirt..." i love adventure ,life should be full of it ,don't you."

Geet: you drop me here i will go myself.

Maan: no i will drop you at your gate ,

Geet: ok

They reached her house road

Geet: why so many cars?

Maan: wait i will see

Geet: ok go

Maan: if you will leave my shirt then i can go.

Geet: oh sorry , she left his shirt.. & took off helmet

Maan :walk to the gate , brij saw him ..

BriJ: oh tu tha humra khandan ka mazzq udna wala... he grab Maan collar. "where is my sister?"

Geet: saw she just ran , leave him he didnot do any thing

Brij: hold Geet from her arm he drag both of them in.

Dirjee : yeh ha dono...

He pushed them in lawn

Brij : i will bring gun & shoot her. he walk in.

Geet looked at Maan

Geet: got up walked to dirjee..

Dirjee: Geet: he just slapped her she was about to fall Maan grab her.

Maan: what have she done?

Dirjee: she had ruin our horner in society, we can't face the world, all are talking about us Handa's daughter had affair,she disclosed it on channel. he try to hit her

Maan just came in between "sir it was a mistake"

Dirjee: we don't tolerate such mistake , she should die .

Maan: you can't do this

Brij "who are you?" grab his collar again

Maan: her friend

Brij: she will die he push Maan away pointed gun towards Geet

Maan: ran & snatch the gun from him

Brij how dare you?

Maan: point at him .. with one hand he ask Geet to get up from ground..

Brij i will not leave you ...

Maan: stay where you are ? or i will fire .. & say in self defense i had to do so.

Brij: teri tou

Maan: you said she is dead for you & your family right...

Dirjee : ha hum na iss ko apna khandan se nikal diya.kash yeh maar jati...

Maan: ok from today she is no more your family member ... think she is dead

Brij: what do you think of us ? we will let her live alive

Maan: yes you have to as i am taking her with me for handa family she is dead..

Brij: what is your relation with her?

Maan: koi nai but i will not let you harm her ... he push Geet back behind him

Brij: i will kill you.he try to come forward

Maan: if you take a step ahead i will shot you...

Everyone came out Geet all family ... few relatives who came to have sympathy & see home situation.all were stand with their wild eyes open.

Maan: i am taking her with me ..in front of you all... from today she is my responsibility.

a relative :with what relation you will keep her with you? she gave a cunning smile...

Maan: woh...

Brij: bus he smiled .

Maan: look at Geet how was holding his sleeve. "like a wife i hope no one will have objection" he just fill her maang with his blood


Everyone with open mouth looked at them ...

Maan: placed the gun down " i am taking my wife with me now , i don't want anyone to follow us or to bother us in future,or i will not leave them .."


he picked shocked Geet up in his arms walked out

Meri jaan meri jaan, meri jaan tu yeh bata

Tujhse karoon wafa ya khud se karoon


will cont if you like & comment

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Chapter 4

Maan: walk out with her to his bike, made her stand.."Chalo"

Geet: gave him a blank look ...

Maan: pull her hand ask her to sit behind him

Geet: followed his order

Maan: looked at Geet big house .. no one came to farewell her... he drive his bike... unnecessary on Mumbai crowed road

There was alot of light all around even at mid night ,but both felt it was too dark around, Maan was in fix as he was thinking what to do? he parked bike near shore.

Maan: come he gave her his hand...

Geet: looked at him

Maan: aao, lets sit here for sometime

Geet: climb the rocks

Both sit silently on the bank of sea shore

Maan: do you have any friend whom we can trust?

Geet: trust

Maan: looked at her.. i mean where you can stay the night.

Geet: shake her head in negative.

Maan: i can't roam like this whole night.

Geet; looked at him ... she wipe his dry blood from her hand .

Maan: aah

Geet: sorry Daard huwa...

Maan : smiled nahi..

Geet: wipe it with her duppata,

Maan : actually i stay with 3 stooges (Adi, Romeo & lucky)i can't take you there...

Geet: did not reply?

Maan: murmur Maan jee haar waqt josh se kam nahi lata kabhi hosh bhi karna chaiya ... now he realized in excitement he had taken a wrong decision...

Geet: listen what he said ? today you let me stay in with you tomorrow i will arrange some place for me..

Maan:"my flat mates .." he call ADI..hello

ADI: kya ha Maan

Maan: yar aik help

ADI: aray sona do

Maan: yar will you get up shouted

ADI: aara khud to tu soai ga subha tak muhje ko sona da...

Maan: where is Romeo & Lucky.

ADI:mujhe ko kya pata...he bang phone.

Maan: actually we all stay together in a small home . how to take you there?

Geet: you go i will manage

Maan: chalo he pull her up dekha jai ga... he started talking" as we are guys we spend most of time out of our flat, every one has his own time to come home.he drive to his building

Geet: acha

Maan: aagar pata hota to i would have clean it they enter


Geet: look around the living room was messy

Maan: actually we ..he started picking up things... you must be hungry...he walk to kitchen

Geet: just followed him

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Maan: feel ashamed ..aasal mein yeh log ... "what will you eat?"

Geet: just stood next to him.."water cold water

Maan: aik min , he open fridge , few things fall down. " yeh log..."

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Geet: couldn't hide her smile...

Maan: we share actually ... he gave are a glass of water

Geet; thanks

Maan: let me make dinner

Geet: looked at watch it was 2 .. leave it

Maan: but i am hungry ,so you have to give me company , he take out pasta ... "see i made this before going for show i made this ..he showed her dish

Geet:looked at him

Maan yummy ha na... he micro it

Geet: yes

Maan: shhh come with me he hold her hand on tip of his toe the crossed Adi bedroom..

Geet: just followed

Maan: my room ...he turn on light

Geet: looked at him in surprise..













Maan: looked around: oh sorry sorry he gave Geet the dish started picking up things"actually i was getting late for show & i could not find my socks...

Geet: looked at his feet he was still not wearing it

Maan: i will fix it

Geet: smiled koi baat na.

Maan cleared bed you sit her...

Geet: seated..

Maan: eat .. ask her to eat... get was shocked at his immature nature...Ahhh ..he came close to her she just placed a spoon in his mouth.. "yar time nahi milta ..i come late at night , then sleep till noon..he was picking up things & talking..kaho na acha nai ha,

Geet: ha acha

Maan: arrange his room.you sleep on bed i will sleep on floor

Geet: looked at him

Maan: koi nai aai ga he looked the door.

Geet: felt strange

Maan: pat her shoulder ok you sleep here i will go...& sleep in lounge... i just have to do some work on my system till then i am here... ok

Geet: ok

Maan: now you lay down sweet dreams he made her lay pull bedspread on her...

Geet: looked at him yeh jo mera koi nai , how much he care ...

Maan: waved his hand in front of her eyes... relax & sleep . he pull chair sit in front of his system... Geet kept on looking his him ... many time he looked at her she use to quickly close her eyes...

Maan: work till 6 in morning..he saw Geet peace fully asleep he took cushion & walked out... to sleep in living room..


AT 8 ADI woke up , he found Maan asleep in living room he was getting late for office he didnot ask... started making breakfast...

Romeo & Lucky came home after their night duty ...

Romeo: why he is sleeping here?

ADI: pata nai:

Lucky : peep in his room ..he ran out..

he pull romeo & adi to Maan room , he just placed his hand on their mouth...

they asked him from their eyes "who is she?"

all Three walk to Maan,bend over him ... ADI knocked his shoulder ...

Maan: sonado

Romeo : Mr who is that Girl

Maan: bhabhi ha tera ab sona da... all three of them scream on top of their voice... "What?"

Maan & Geet both woke up...


to be cont if you guys will like it



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Maan: tou why you all are shouting?

ADI: what do you mean? you got married & didnot inform us

Maan: yawn... "i also came to know when i got my sences back"

Romeo: what do you mean?

Maan: in life sometime we are in such condition that we have no choice left...

Romeo: hello... are you in your senses?you are in relation with Heer what will you do now...?

Maan : yeh soch soch kar tou mein bhi pagal hogaya ho... he hold his head...

Lucky: from were you found her..

Maan: lost his slept sat... "if anyone of you were be at my place at that time you would have done same..."

Adi: pagal ho tum...there must be some other way out...

Maan: yes there was one ... i would have let her die in front of my eyes...

Adi: ab kya hoga...

Maan: first of all you all just make sure Heer does not find out that i got married..

Lucky : laugh... she will come to know ... she is 24/7 in touch with you for how long you will hide from her.

Maan: till i can..

Romeo: pat his shoulder... Maan bhai jee ...pointed at door.. she is your wife ..you know the meaning of wife...

Maan: hmmm

Romeo: now three life are connected to each other..this not your tv drama...

Maan: yar please ab bus karo.. he beg them.. "i know i have done a mistake.. i who have think before doing this program...

Adi: you cannot keep her here ...as this place is not save ..

Maan: where we will go? tell me ..here 1 of us is round the clock at home.. if i take her some where else her life would be in danger.

Lucky how a girl can stay with 4 guys...?

Maan: why four 3 dever one husband... ? she can stay we have to change the myth .

Adi: this is not your tv talk show. keep your logics to yourself...

they all heard Geet room door has being closed...

Maan: shit .. she heard us...

Romeo: go & see.. you both are big mouth ,dekhta tou...

Maan: she had gone through a trauma... he just ask them to be silent...

Romeo:we are going to sleep Adi is going office ..you go...

Maan clear his throat walk in, he saw Geet still lying he just walk to her bed side ,sat...wanted to wake her up.she look so cute ,her face was showing so much stress.









He just stare at her ... you are an angel i will help you as much i can ,i know i cannot give you all that luxury that you had but i will try my level best ... he just walk to the sofa .. he was very tired and it was his sleep time he just lay down

Geet: had heard their talk. she just pretended to be asleep. when she felt he was asleep she got up. she looked at Maan .. his back was all hurt it had scar .










Geet: felt bad ,, she recollected when Brij drag him on road ... and kicked him . she just got tears in her eyes looked around to find some medicine.. she walk out... no one was there ..she walk to kitchen ... it was so messy she was not able to find turmeric. she started arranging things she cleared up the things it looked neat










she found turmeric made its paste , walk in bed room checked him fast a sleep , she very care fully apply it on his back.







Geet: brji & deerji i was your culprit not he , he just got trap because of me ... her tear drop on his back.. Maan felt some thing he just turn and grab her hand , with thinking he just pull her she lost her balance directly fall on him...

Geet: ahhh...bit loud as she was not expecting

Maan:placed his hand on her mouth...shhh shhh... Sorry ... he got scared if Romeo & lucky got up they will make fun of him..."he whisper.." sorry i thought my friends are teasing me.." he let her free she try to get up from him...

Geet; shyly woh you were hurt i was just applying medicine on it...

Maan: just shocked he just stared in her eyes ...

Geet: chora na... she felt his hand is on her waist...

Maan: oh sorry.. he just let her free.. she quickly got up and ran out of room... Maan .. why i felt strange with her, i am with Heer for last 5 years i never felt like that.. why her touch last night make me feel strange?he recollected when he was driving her back home for studio her grip on his shirt ...he just smiled ...may be i did right...he again slept

Geet: was still breathing heavily her heart beat was not stable...( she didnot heard about Heer, she just heard .. Maan last word's " why four 3 dever one husband... ?" ...) she looked her self in mirror her face was all blush ... she just looked around ... tied her duppata and started cleaning... "it is my home sweet home it should be clean...Smiled"


to be cont...


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Geet was busy cleaning the mess ..she neatly arrange ..she was all mess up ..there was someone on door as the door bell rang twice. Geet looked around to see if some one coming.. she walk to room saw Maan fast asleep on bed ..

Geet: self thought let me go and open it.. as the door bell rang again... Geet walk to corridor & open the door.

Heer: was standing with her back. "Maan khulta tou.."

Geet: he is asleep..

Heer: ;looked at her in surprised..."who are you?"

Geet: i am..

Heer: looked her from up to down... "oh at last Maan kept a maid..thank God now their messy house will be bit arrange ... "she moved away Geet and walked in...

Geet: looked at her she was dress in western clothes ... " wait" she stop her as she was going to Maan room

Heer: looked at her.."kya "

Geet: " woh"

Heer: ok you go and call him tell him Heer madam is here.

Geet; looked at her... then she looked her self am i looking like a maasi...

Heer; jao na why you are looking at my face.

Geet: walked in ...she looked herself in mirror... "proud girl.."she just wipe her face with her duppata... very slowly .."soniya ... she softly touch his feet... he did not move.. how to wake him up? she looked at alarm clock... fix alarm... and on it ... it echo in the room..

Maan: jump up... as she placed it very near to his ear..." what are you doing?"

Geet: made baby face..sorry i was trying to wake you up but you were not listening me ... so i...

Maan: looked at her face..there was dust mark at her fore head... he clean it with his hand ..."what you were doing?"

Geet: kuch nai

Maan: showed her his hand with dust... "what is this?"

Geet: i was just cleaning the room...

Maan: why?

Geet: looked at him in such a way that he could not say any thing...

Maan:why you wake me?

Geet: with a soft smile on her face.. some Heer madam is here she asked me to call you..

Maan: jump out of bed in panic.. What ?where ? when?

Geet: out side...

Maan: grab his shirt and was about to go out..."what you told who you are ?

Geet: she didnot let me talk..she herself guess i am your new maid.

Maan: sorry for that...Please you go & change"he went out

Geet:what to wear... ?she just look around,picked up Maan shirt went in to freshen up.


Maan: what are you doing here?

Heer:you never have time for me...

Maan: i told you many times i am a struggler actor ,why you are wasting your time?

Heer: so what i have alot of money my dad will keep you .

Maan: please Heer i always taken you as my best friend

Heer: but i took you as my love try to come close to him

Maan: wait let me bring something for you.

Heer: hold his hand why you will bring ask your maid...

Maan: she is ...paused...

Heer: chalo let go out enjoy the day.

Maan: sorry i am busy,by the way why you came here?

Heer: i read news about your show in paper.just came here to check.

Maan: ok

Heer: warp her arm around his neck... next time don't do such things for strangers...

Maan: removed her arm... "i think you better go "

Heer: push his room door ... what your maid is doing in your room?

Maan: Heer please you go i will see you in the evening.

Heer: looked in Maan room Geet was standing wearing Maan shirt she was drying her hairs... she just walk in & pull her from her arm "how dare you wear my Maan shirt"... she push her but Maan catch her from falling.

Maan: what are you doing?

Heer: Maan you are taking her side your maid side,not mine..

Maan: stop it she is not my maid... do you get that?

Heer: had a laughter..."then who is she?"

Maan: "my wife "

to be cont


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Chapter 7

Heer: what?

Maan: she is my wife ..

Heer: how dare you? what you think of your self MR Maan Singh Khurana? what are you? with my dada links you got job.. she try to snatch Geet ..Maan pull her behind him..

Maan: that was my life worst mistake...

Heer: had a laughter... what you think i will leave you i will ruin you. you will leave her & come back to me it is my challenge to you..

Maan: Heer if you had loved me yo would have said something else not all this rubbish...

Heer: what you think i don't love you ?

Maan: your attitude say you just wanted a handsome boy friend , when he walk with you all the girls say wow...

Heer: every girl dream that...

Maan: but love is different Heer..

Heer: shut up ... you want to tell me about love here. i will sue you i will drag you in court ...

Maan: for what?

HeeR: gave a wicked smile... i will say you married me first & this is your second wife...with out my permission you got married

Maan: are you in your senses..no one will trust you...you can't prove witness

Heer: with money i can buy any thing... she push Maan & walked out bang door .. Maan lost balance he just fall on Geet..

Maan: quickly move away..."i am sorry ..i hope you are not hurt.."

Geet: was silently crying... her eyes were closed... tears were flowing down her eyes.

Maan: why are you crying?

Geet: because of me you have to face all this?

Maan: was angry but the way Geet said he just cool down.. "i am glad because of you i came to know her true face... see we both are in same boat. we just walk behind people who had glitter... " he wanted to see her brown eyes...

Geet was just closing it as a small child...

Maan: are you scared?

Geet: open yes..

Maan: just hug her mera baby... he did it so quickly that both didnot had time to think...

Geet shocked & Maan ashamed... he feel shy ... he just left her.. sorry i was bit over... he walk out

Geet: smiled...with out any reason..


Maan: was walking in living room

Lucky : kya baat ha Heer ai thi

Maan: ha

Romeo: huwa kya ?

Maan: iss na darwaza khula... aur

Lucky : kis na...

Romeo: aapan kai bhabhi na yar..

Lucky with sleepy voice.. "yeh tou hona tha"

Romeo: ab kya hoga...

Maan:woh pagal hogai ha...

Romeo: aaj pata chal aap ko hazrat...

Maan: kya matlab

Romeo: she is phyco... she is just proud of her money...

Maan: she had said she will drag me to court... yar mere paas to itna paisa nahi ha...

Lucky : aur kya bola iss na...

Maan: she will ruin me..

Romeo: iss kia tou...

Lucky: what you will do now?

Maan: pata nahi i don't have job as last night the channel owner fired me...

Romeo: bravo bro bravo...

Maan: if guys can't help me ,just don't make fun.he sat ...

Lucky: yar you don't know these rich girls they have alot of sources ...

Romeo: kya kara yar..

Maan: mera tou koi ha bhi nahi ...

Geet was listening everything she walk out ... "You leave me.. your all problem will be solve..."


Romeo & Lucky looked at her...


to be cont ...

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Maan: what happen?

Geet: all is because of me , your boss fired you. your girl friend ditched you.. what you gain?

Maan: why you think i lost may be i gain.. may be because of you i cam to know the really face of few people.. he walk to her.. my boss always use to say you do programs and bring out the evil side of the society, we will protect you.. but see what happen they just ask me to leave .. with out thinking what the protester will do with me... he walk more close...

Geet :held her breath.

Maan: If you think i will cry like a aashiq that my Girl friend ditched me.. you are wrong.. i came to know her evil side . as i always thought she love me , she has no problem with my poverty ,but i was wrong she had ,she just wanted that a fool wag his tails behind her.. and always say yes sir..

Geet: took one step behind.

Maan: thou i dont have a home, or money like your parents. but i have a heart and mind i just have guts to face what is right? and stand for it.

Geet: was trap between Maan and wall.

Maan: i will not stop you ,as you have a right to choice your future ,but i will not leave you .if you insist i will let you free . i clam you as my wife ,i will treat you as my wife, will stand with you in thick and thin ,will not let you down ever.. that is my promise.rest all is up to you. i will help you when ever you need me.he turn back and was about to go...

Geet: suniya ..tears flow down her eyes...

Maan: stop.. he had a smile at his lips... jee bola..


Geet: i have seen a lot of money as i was born with a golden spoon in my mouth ,money cannot buy happiness or peace of mind .look at me she open her hand.. see this is all empty , i dont have anyone, who could take my side or understand me?

Maan: walk a step towards her...his eyes sparkle.. cup her face ..wipe her tears...

Geet; if you dont mind i can be part of your life , i can help you. may be we dont have a palace to live but we can build a home. she looked at Maan he was smiling...

Maan: hmmm

Geet; why you re smiling?

Maan: i selected right person... i am lucky ..

Geet: raised her eyebrow .. "are you making fun of me"

Maan: hold his ear meri tuba ..how could i ...

Geet: phir...why are you smiling ?

Romeo and Lucky who were just standing and listening them ... cleared their throat

Geet And Maan looked at them...

Romeo: Lucky dont you think they both can open school?

Lucky: yes they can give lecture ...

Maan: showed them eyes...

Romeo :show that to some one else.. first introduce us ..

Maan: oh yes Geet his is Romeo.. my school friend,

Romeo : shakes hand with Geet.

Lucky cleared his throat...

Maan: yes he is Lucky... again my school friend..

Geet: pleasure to meet you both..

Lucky: but we are not happy...

Geet; looked at Maan...

Lucky sank in sofa... Bhabi ka hota huwa dever hungry... eating air..

Geet: smiled oh... i will make for you..

Maan: why you will make? hello what you think who is she ..she is my wife.. go and help your self...

Romeo: bhai jee ... if she is your wife then she is Our Bhabi too , we are her brothers too so you ... both Romeo and Lucky fold there sleeve ...

Geet: could not hold her self she starting laughing ...

Maan:so you are not saving me .. kya zamana ha

Romeo and Lucky started smiling ...

Geet: ok i will make ...

Romeo: oh bhabi ..abhi tou aap ki shadi huwi ha and you will cook... we were just kidding.. you sit here we will make for you...

Geet: smiled.. they made Geet and Maan sit next to each other.. both felt strange...

Lucky : bro ... (they call each other bro ...)

Maan: hmm

Lucky: i have an idea

Maan: kya.. he was just searching for job..

Lucky: why dont you go to my home ..

Maan: why?

Lucky: bro see if you will stay here bhabi parents and others will create problem .if you change city they will not be able to trace you and you can save & peacefully live...

Maan: but bro it is a small city how she will managed to live there...

Lucky started thinking

Geet: suniya

Maan: hmm

Geet; what happen if it is small me be people over there have big hearts..what this big city has given to us? and please you dont think of me i can adjust myself.

Lucky : so you both are going today...

Maan: today

Lucky:yes

Maan: but why?

Romeo: bro why you want to take risk? he came back with a tray

Maan: i am not coward

Lucky : bro now you are not alone you have a wife...

Maan: looked at Geet...hmmm

Lucky: should i arrange..

Maan; ok as you guys say... we will go...

Romeo: bro don't worry we will.be in touch.

Maan ;indirectly talk to Geet... "You get ready"

Geet: looked at him

Maan: hold her hand "Our first journey in search of home"


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chapter9

Maan: looked at Geet. "please you do packing"

Geet: of what? i just have a purse..

Maan: oh sorry.. he got up went to his room started collected all his things...

Geet; walked in . suniya ...

Maan: hmm

Geet; should i help you.

Maan: looked at her .. "i will do it" he quickly packed his dresses and his system...

Geet: was standing in a corner looking at him...

Maan: he started moving towards her ...

Geet: koi kam ha kya ...she took one step back...

Maan: naughtily smiled he picked up his books for the shelf . cleared his throat and walk back...

suddenly they heard noise out side

Geet yeh kya horaha ha?

Maan: you wait let me see..he was about to walk out

Geet step ahead hold his shoulder... "you dont go out..?" as they could hear lucky and romeo shouting

Maan: let me see

Geet: it is brij bhai voice .

Maan: are you sure ?

Geet: yes he is here we will kill me she just hide her self behind Maan

Maan: he cannot touch you , as now you are my wife .

Geet: you dont know him ? hold his arm

Maan: he also does not know me .. he called police ...

Geet: was just shivering with fear.

Maan: you sit here see i have locked the door.

Geet: why i was born ? when all hate me so much?

Maan: cup her face ..who said all hate you ? i dont hate you... they heard police alarm.

Geet: was frighten...

Maan: you sit here i will come in a min.. he walk out .she could hear him talking at top of his voice. .. she didnot move.

Lucky came in : come bhabi.

Geet: politely he said i should stay here

Lucky: he had ask me to call you..

Geet: ok ..she walked out stand behind Maan

Maan: she is my wife you can ask her.

Geet: looked at brij. his eyes was all red.she walk to Maan and hold his shirt sleeve.

Maan: whisper tell police officer that you are my wife

Brij: shouted .. aashiq ha yeh ..

Police officer...: you stay silent let me ask madam

Geet: yes he is right..

Police officer: what come again?

Geet: i am his wife. i dont know who he is . she pointed at brij..

Brij : aik dafa tum mujhe ko milo i will tell you who i am..you dont remember me

Geet: was so frighten that she felt weak in her legs.. her head spin she fainted... Maan was not looking at her she just collapse to ground..

Maan: was shocked he just quickly kneel down picked her up ... "lucky bring water"

Lucky and Romeo ran..

Maan: made her lay on bed .. he splash some water on her face.. Geet open eyes..

Geet: was gaining conscious.. she was holding his shirt..

Romeo and Lucky looked at each other they went out .. they deal wit police and called dr.

Maan: was just patting her face.. whispering trust me he can not touch you till i am live.. he can not even harm your single hair... Geet was looking at him she was giving a blank look ..

Maan you just trust me he cannot do any thing...

Geet: whisper i am only your ..only yours ... her eyes was saying so many things

Maan: yes you are only mine ...just could not hold him self long he bend and kissed her to show are she is only his ...


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chapter 10

Geet didnot knew how to react as his action was so fast.. she just k** him back... and closed her eyes...

There was a knocked at the door.

Maan: came back to his senses.. he felt guilty of his act .."sorry pata nahi kya hogaya tha... "he just walked and open door ...

Romeo: Bro Dr is here

Maan: move back as he could not see at Geet..

Dr: checked Geet and wrote few medicines. "you are her husband?" she asked Maan who was standing in corner smoking...

Maan: yes

DR: she is just stress out keep her happy..

Maan: ok he looked at Geet who was talking to Romeo... "let me take this "he took her bag and walk out...

Geet: was feeling uncomfortable with Romeo and Lucky ... "bhai where is he?"

Romeo: looked at lucky ..

Lucky: he went out with DR may be he went to supermarket to get medicines..

Geet:acha..

Romeo: with eyes asked Lucky to move...

Lucky ok you rest he will when he will come we will ask him you called him...

Geet: acha..

they both walked out.

Maan: walk to the near store he bought medicines he walked to a clothes shop...

shopkeeper : what you want?

Maan: show me some dress ...

Shopkeeper showed him few ...

Maan: what is the price?he selected one

Shopkeeper:1000 rs

Maan: he look in to his wallet "but i just why 750 rs"

Shopkeeper : snatch for his hand..paisa lao phir lejao...

Maan: ok show me some cheap dress..

Shopkeeper: pushed him out..."from here you can not buy any thing get out..."

Savitri devi (Dadi maa) enter Maan bang it to her... "dekhe kar beta.."

Maan: sorry maa jee...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): looked at him ..hold his hand what you said ?

Maan: bit frighten as if he had said something wrong ... sorry madam ..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): beta you can call me Maa jee ..

Shopkeeper: Savitri jee chora ... pata nai kahan se agai ha ...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): looked a Maan worried face..."if i am not wrong you are the anchor of a tv show"

Maan: jee mein chalta hoon..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): wait she had over heard Maan and shopkeeper talk .. with eyes she asked shopkeeper to pack all the suites ...

Maan: was just looking out...he wanted to rush out but Savitri devi was holding his hand ...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): yeh loo... she gave him all the shopping bags ...

Maan: but

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): you called me Maa as a Maa take it and no if and but this is my card call me when ever you need me ...

Maan: but...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): beta i am your fan . i love your program i never miss your program thou i miss to take my medicine she winked him...

Maan: thankx

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): your yesterday program was best ... i dont know what happened to that girl ...

Maan: slip of tongue "i married her..." shit,,,

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): looked at him she paid the bill. "i will come later she told the shopkeeper and pull Maan with her in to her car...he was on driving seat

Maan: where are you taking me?

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): sit

Maan: are you too for an NGO?

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): do i look like

Maan: yes

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): beta i am not from any NGO.. she gave him her card..

Maan: read chairman of Savitri industries .. Oh you are the famous ...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): yes i am

Maan: mama pleasure meeting you ..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): no mama call me Maa...

Maan: ok Maa

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): where is she ?

Maan: at my home .

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): if you dont mind can you tell me what all happen? as i just saw your program and read in news paper..

Maan: told her the whole story

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): what are your plans ?

Maan: looked at her with blank face.

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): bolo

Maan: i am planning to take her away from her as here our life is in danger..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): acha..

Maan:was still confused why he had trusted her may be Heer had send her .he was puzzle

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): can you drive?

Maan: yes i can drive bike...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): smiled beta car

Maan: no

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): take me to her?

Maan:but

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): you dont trust me

Maan: i am confused right now..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): the guy who does such big shows confused ?

Maan: actually she is scared i can't afford any kind of risk...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): smiled like the way you care for her.

Maan: smiled

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): i know you dont have job as your channel had publish in news paper that you are no more part of their channel ..i offer you job if you like you can join me it is in Mumbai. you can take her with you and stay there peacefully.

Maan: looked at her

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): what are you thinking ?

Maan: Mumbai..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): yes

Maan: ok i will think

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): no time to think you go home i will arrange ticked for you both and send you car to pick you up ...

Maan: but

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): no but give me your address

Maan: looked puzzle

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): i know you can't trust a stranger so quickly in today's fake world but sometime we have to .

Maan: pointed at the flat ..that is my home..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): go and pack.. she was on calling some one

Maan :was about to walk out

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): take these she gave him shopping bags ...

Maan: picked up...

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): it is 12 you have to leave at 3 ...be quick..

Maan: mama..

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): looked at him ...

Maan: you cut from my first pay

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): what?

Maan: i want to say please cut this from my first pay ..as i want to give her everything from what i earn ... he closed the door and walk to the other side of room

Savitri devi (Dadi maa): hmmm nice you impressed me ... she drove



Maan: enter home

Romeo: where were you?

Lucky : time dekha ha ?

Geet: do ghanta hogai ha .. apan moble bhi yahan chor kar gai tha... she said from behind

Maan: was looking at all three of them as the open fire at him as he kept first step in home..

Romeo: acha ha aab bhabi class lagai ...

Geet: was now very much free with Romeo and Lucky as she was talking to them in his absence ... "this is not the way" she walked to the bed room

Maan: iss ko kya huwa...

Romeo: you have scared us ..

Maan: yar woh ..

Lucky : oh from where you got money he looked at the shopping bags...

Maan: yar lambhi story ha wait aakar bataa hoon , pehla iss ko maana loo. he walked in room Geet was standing next to window ..looking out ..

Maan: yeh dekho what i bought for you?

Geet: i dont want?

Maan: placed his hand on her shoulder .."acha meri taraf to dekho "

Geet: no leave me go and do shopping ... she was crying ..

Maan: hold his ear yeh dekho i am holding ears next time i will not do like that i will always care cell. he turn her

Geet:looked at his face

Maan: oh you are crying ...

Geet: no laughing

Maan: but why are you crying ?

Geet: i thought you did not like... paused

Maan: what?

Geet: lower her eyes that what happen between us...

Maan:he got oh that was lucky for me .. or best he pull her to hug her

Maan: wipe her tears ,, Oh mera baby... i promise i will never do this .. aaj tak no one cares that why i am care free ,,

Geet: looked at him..

Maan: ok come with me he pull her out of room where Luck y and Romeo where waiting...

Romeo: bus bhabhi aap ok itna jaildi mana bhi leya ...

Geet; shyly smiled

Maan: what you guys thing of me? he made Geet next to him ...

Lucky: bolo

Maan: we are going to mumbai

all three in chorus "what?"

Maan: told them what all happen..?

Geet: why you trusted her?

Maan: i dont have choice as if we stay here our life is in danger and their too he pointed at Lucky and Romeo..

Lucky & Romeo: jaan bhi ..

Geet: chup...

Maan: looked at her...

Lucky and Romeo kept their finger on their lips...

Maan: had a laughter...

Geet:you too...

Lucky and Romeo smiled...

Geet: every one had to die one day lets take a chance and trust this lady...

Maan: hmmm

Geet: how will will go?

Maan: 3 baja ki flight ha

Geet: it is 1: 30

Maan: yes ...

Lucky : why you are sitting then?

Maan: i have a problem ?

Romeo: what?

Geet: looked at him "KYA?"

Maan: i am scared of Air traveling ... he said so cutely they could not hold their laughter...

Geet: looked at him "mein hoon na"


Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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