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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

@Neha...thanks! Even I don't understand much of poetry myself LOL, but those were somethings I just couldn't put into a scene, I couldn't put it in AN's context...well, at least not directly. So poems seemed the best way to put the thoughts across without mentioning any names.

@Pra...thank you! Do check out the rest of the works here...as well as in the previous threads. Our writers are indeed very talented!

Yes well I didn't write the poems in AN's context at all, actually. I wrote them and I thought I might as well post them here, since they didn't go too bad with AN's essence. These were my feeble attempts to put my own thoughts and feelings into words...aah, I don't think I quite managed to pull it off.

Some things are just too complex to capture in words...they're best felt 😉

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pra19

@pra19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Khush ,

Will definitely check out . In fact I have been reading quite a lot of stuff on the first writing challenge and its all so nice . No doubt about all our writers ; they are all really very talented and have supreme imagination. Discovering these FFs and other writing has been such a pleasant surprise.

And about your poem , ohh , I definitely understood this kind of writing can only come up from one's feelings . I know they are not just for AN , must have worded my comment wrongly. You pulled it off perfectly . And I really mean it . I have never experienced such stuff , but then this would be my perfect idea of love , maybe that is why I like AN so much .

Brilliantly written . 👏👏

Edited by pra19 - 14 years ago

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

hey mitzii plzz continue ur PYT soon... i m waiting yaar... that's cute ff :)) n also ur GMEOY 😃

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Hey Khush,

This is such a beautiful piece...so much love intermingled with pain...it breaks your heart to read this one...no wonder it sapped u of ur enery...tum intni deep baatein likhogi sweets toh tumhe Maa bolna padega...loved it!!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

@Pra...yes, well it was the hardest task ever to put those feelings into writing...some things are just too deep to weave into words...they wrenched my heart out of my chest but somehow I just needed to get them out and so there you are :)

Glad you liked it...but oh I hope you can somehow circumnavigate these particular feelings...they're just...aah. I don't have words.

@Honey...finally you read them! 🤗 Yeah I know these were so complex that I couldn't find words...was sort of blinded, you could say. Just needed to vent somewhere and it took the form of this poem. Literally sapped me of energy, that one. It still sort of makes it hard to breathe for me when I read it. Weird stuff...they hurt but then you can't really run away from them either...something just pulls you back.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: hapinezz13
Hey Khush,

This is such a beautiful piece...so much love intermingled with pain...it breaks your heart to read this one...no wonder it sapped u of ur enery...tum intni deep baatein likhogi sweets toh tumhe Maa bolna padega...loved it!!

@bold...kya yaar...tum kya mujhe Maa bologi, tum toh khud hi meri Mummyji ho! 😳

Agar tum na hoti toh main kabhi kuchh likhti hi nahi...agar aaj itna sab kuchh likh rahi hoon toh it's all thanks to you Honu 🤗