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Awww Ruchu, First of all please accept my sincere apology for posting my comments late.. Seriously I'd forgotten about my reserved post.. And thanks for reminding me.🤗
Now coming to your OS, its indeed a nice first attempt.. The scene is very cute and sweet.. Loved it.. You have chosen very unusual scene from DMG.. I'd never liked this 'Kushtiwala scen' in DMG, nevertheless liked your take on this.. Its with nice twist n turn..
Only one thing.. I wonder why Abhi didn't say anything in return when Nikki professes her love twice.. I'd liked to see him confessing back before jumping on the opportunity lol.. Just kidding..
You have written this scene very nicely.. Indeed a good try.. But it seems you have ended it hastily.. You could've kept it open and could've ended it with 2nd part.. Never mind, now do keep writing more and more such kinda OS on our most favorite adorable couple..
Applauses gal!! Once again.. Please do keep writing more and more..
Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago
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