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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

awesum part dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: RB81
hei,
i feel ur FF is entirely different from all other FFs in the forum..really i loved it..its fresh..kabir,misha,pia,t,ruhi,angad are best buddies..that is tooooo coooool..in addition they hav a band "living tarnado'..that is super cool..really t being in the gang is gr8 highlight..

once abhay enters other than pia will every1 hav a grudge against him for having ruhi transferred to the other class coz of him?
i wish abhay joins the band later..n they all get along very well with abhay..that wud be soooooo lovely...

hei by the way wats ur name?

PS:in ur title if u cud include the updated part no n page no it wud be easier for ppl to follow up..thread 1 is not apt here i think..coz it implies tat 150 pages..
coz of tat i missed ur 3 parts..just today i read it..

Okay i'll do that from now on...thanks for the suggestion

and i am Shivangi

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Before the update just wanted to share that my board exams are finally over...i am damn happy... just wanted to share my happiness with you all

-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

Part 4

Mount College(next day)

Piya is all lost...because of the mysterious dream she had and didn't notice Misha calling her...She is worried..Misha senses her worry...

Misha- Kya hua Piya...subah se kahin khoyii hui ho...(to herself) Abhi to Hrithik ki koi film bhi nahi aayi hai...phir aise kyun behave kar rahi hai 😕

Piya- Kuch nahi Misha...a..a...a woh main Ruhi ke baare mein soch rahi thi..How is she??

Misha- Haan abhi woh theek hai...but i m sure going to kill the new admission jiski wajah se yeh hua hai 😡 Aaj hi aane wala hai na...some Abhijeet...

Piya- Abhay Raichand

Misha- Haan Abhay Raichand... Achcha sun woh parking lot ke end mein Silver BMW khadi hai...mast hai na

Class

Teacher- Students... let me welcome our new admission Mr. Abhay Raichand...son of the great businessman- Chand Raichand...

A Tall,mysterious looking guy enters the class...in black mysterious attire with mysterious eyes having a butter-scotch tinge...a meek smile on the face

Teacher- Misha Dobriyal..could you please vacate your seat and sit with Kabir...

(to Abhay) Abhay take your seat beside Piya Jaiswal-our all-rounder of the College...

(to Piya) Piya Jaiswal...now it's your responsibility to see that Abhay gets familiar with the College and the staff and since you are a bright student you need to help Abhay in assignment of the previous term that are required in this term even...is that clear to you Piya?

Abhay gives a meek smile to Piya which she retaliates with a cold face...he is definitely

hurt with this cold behavior...

Abhay- Hi I am Abhay Raichand...

Piya- So??

Abhay(extending his hand)- Whatsay???

Piya- Dekho mujhse friendship ke umeed mat rakho..samjhe tum?

Abhay- Lekin Kyun...tum to bright student ho...why can't you help me?

Piya- Hey Listen...main tumhari help kar doongi fine but tumhari wajah se Ruhi-my friend...she was shifted to some other class and in that shock she had a very serious accident and she is in ICU...so please mujhse issse zyada help ki umeed mat rakhna...

This was too much Abhay could tolerate...His eye-colour started darkening and Abhay just scuttled out of the class...this seemed strange!!!

Piya- What a freak!!

The entire week Abhay was scorned and disregarded by his fellow-mates and all he could do was sit alone in the canteen and see strange looks fastened on him...All this while Piya had started to melt and had sympathy for him...

During that week, Piya and Misha had managed to get Siddharth and Panchi together at a local saree-shop to bury their hatchet.Actually this was Misha's small plan...they had managed to take Panchi out on the clause that they were going to buy some clothes for Panchi to wear as Mrs. Mehra...

To thier luck Sidchi had patched up and with that Panchi's wedding arrangement got a new pace...their relationship was heading towards engagement which was soon to come.!!!!!!!!!!

Piya was still troubled with that dream which was haunting her every night. Piya had a sleepless week...Ruhi had returned to her home for complete bed-rest of a month and that added fuel to fire in Piya-Abhay relationship of hatred(only from Piya's side)...

The Living Tornado was also busy preparing for the extravaganza at delhi which was due in 3 months...Our fashion diva T was busy styling the outfits and costumes for her band and working on her cymbal skills.That Silver BMW was Abhay Raichands which gained greater attention than its owner.

After that week, Piya had gathered courage to beg pardon from Abhay for uttering such rude words...she had realised that how could Abhay, who had just come from Manali a week before, know about the problem he had caused here...it was none of his fault...

Precap- Piya Apologizes to Abhay!

Part 5

Here I would add that in my ff Siddharth is not a vampire..he is a normal guy!!

Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago

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Nidhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

gr8 update.. and hey, Abhay in ur ff isn't rude! infact he entered the class with a smile and tried to befriend Piya?! Wow! Thats gr8, simply awesome!!
Luv,
Nidhi. :)

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Ramani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hei shivangi,
really loved this abhay who is coming in with a smile unlike our abhay in show..n pia showed her cold attitude..poor abhay..however she's going to apologise to him..hope he apologises her..i thought mish will treat him badly but pia did that..update was too short..as ur xams r over u better sit n write lengthy updates..ok?😊

PS:abhay in ur FF does he hav some characteristics of edward in twilight?ie,butterscotch eyes which turns shades depending on his mood..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

First of all Congrats dat ur Exams r over.. U surely 'll b very Happy.. After all ur a free bird till d results r declare.. Enjoy...!! Abt d Update.. It was Gr8.. Poor Abhay.. In ur FF Abhay is totally different or should I say Opposite from d Show.. He is not at all rude n I loved dat.. Sid-Panchi patched up.. Gud.. Wanna know more abt Piya's Dream.. Precap sounds Nice.. Hope d Apology part goes off well n they 'll b gud friends soon.. Continue soon.. 'll b waiting.. Thanx for d pm.. lol:)

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mansim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

hey nice part👏

make it a bit longer😆

abhay is not that arrogant😳 nice

update soon😉

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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-Aisi bhi ek Love Story-

Part 5

Dobriyal House

Panchi- Piya...Misha common up...don't wanna be late for college??

Piya and Misha together- Thodi der aur please...tum chalo hum 20 mins mein breakfast table pe milte hain...

(breakfast table)

Madhu enters holding breakfast in her hand.She serves it to Misha, Panchi and Arnav while Piya has to take it herself.

Madhu- Panchi beta...kuch dino mein to tum chali jaaogi...to aaj main apni dono betiyon ko apne haatho se khana khilaongi

Arnav senses Piya's loneliness and sadness.

Arnav- Aao Piya, main tumhe khilata hoon. Madhu apni teeno betiyon ko ek saath khana nahi khila sakti hai...kyun madhu?

Madhu- Meri sirf do betiyan hai Arnav...yeh jitni jaldi samajh jaao..utna achcha..

(Piya leaves)

Kabir's Islander( on their way to college)

Tee- Hey guys, i was wondering ki hum humara theme song finale mein perform karenge...kyun piya?

Piya- aaa...Well mujhe lagta hai ki humein humari entry theme song se karni chahiye!

Tee- End mein

Piya- Nahi Nahi Entry mein...forget it Tee...Okay tell me humari costumes and dresses design ho gayii!??

Tee- ya.. almost...tum batao...humare baaki songs ki lyrics pe kam kar rahi ho na?

Piya- Nahi yaar wohi to...thoda waqt lagega...but trust me is month ke end tak we may start rehearsing...

Tee- that's cool...but since Ruhi will not be performing ..we need to search for a performer with you...

Piya- We'll see that later...

Piya was talking to Tee half-minded. All her attention was on her talk with Abhay Raichand. Kya woh mujhe maaf karega...? Piya tune usse aise kyun baat ki..!

Kya main group ko is baare mein bata doon? Nahi Nahi..not now. Misha ko bata doon? Na baba na...us din woh use maarne ko keh rahi thi...aaj to mujhe bhi uske saath mar dalegi(Kabir shakes her)

Kabir- Kahan kho gayiin? College nahi jaana? Jeep se nahi uttrogi?

Piya- Nahi kuch nai...chalo

As per routine..Piya sat beside Abhay

Piya- Hi Abhay...How was your weekend?

Abhay(coldly)- Good (and looks away)

Piya- Hey bhagwaan itna gussa? tu to gayi piya! Hey Abhay...I am really sorry for my behaviour last week? Actually i was tensed because of Ruhi- my friend...she had an accident...thats why i was angry

Abhay- If some other time Ruhi will be in trouble..you'll hurt my feelings again (to himself) teri feelings kab se ho gayi Abhay!!!

Piya- Hey...dekho...listen... i am sorry na(loudly) itna kyun bhao kha raha hai...?

Teacher- Ms. Piya Jaiswal...could you please maintain silence and concentrate??

Piya- Ya sure...sorry ma'am...(looks down) dekho ab to mujhe daant bhi pad gayii... ab to maaf kar de

Class gets over. Abhay leaves.Piya is startled.speaks to herself baap re baap..itna gussa...waise tune aisa kaam hi kiya hai...kya zarorat thi use yeh sab kehne ki..chal ab jaa manane...

Piya is walking past the corridor where Kabir stops her.

Kabir- What the f***? Why did you apologize to Abhay-that freakiing fellow...did you forget Ruhi's condition?

Piya- What's his fault? He shifted from manali a day before he came to college..How could he be responsible for Ruhi's condition...c'mon KB be practical!!!

Kabir- Just leave... tum jaano aur tumhara 'Abhay Raichand' jaane... jao jao manao use!

Piya- KB..you are impossible!! (leaves)

Abhay was pacing fast to his car across the parking lot..Piya stopped him with a jerk.

Piya- Listen na!! Abhay stop..please na i am sorry...maan jao na please!!

Abhay- Just leave piya

Piya- Achcha listen..(kneels down) Mr. Abhay Raichand...(politely) I am really sorry!!

please maan jao na..pata hai aaj tak maine kisi ke aage kneel down nahi kiya (breaks down into a sob)

Abhay- Hey piya( stoops down) c'mon yaar...okay stop crying okay...okay maafi manzoor!!!😊

Piya- Sachchi

Abhay- Sachchi- Sachchi!!!!😛

Piya(extends her hand)- so whatsay?

Abhay- I say okay!!(hugs her tightly).

Piya- Dosti pakki waali ho gayi na??

Abhay- bilkul pakki waali!!!!

I say it's a great friendship in the history of mankind!!!

The Living Tornado had been watching this spectacle with red-bloodshot eyes... They still coudn't believe that Piya who was so much a non-mixer had invited friendship with Abhay-their enemy!!

That night Misha pulled her in the room and asked

Misha- Why Piya ..how could you do this...Don't you remember Ruhi's condition?

Piya- Misha..let me make it very loud and clear...did Abhay bump Ruhi...did he ask her to walk non-attentively in the middle of the road? It was Ruhi's foolishness...was it worth risking her life just because she was tranferred? For a minute Misha, be practical. Weren't you sad looking how the entire college was oblivious to Abhay? I don't think i did any wrong in apologizing him. You should have seen his face after the way i had reacted with him on the first day?

Misha(amazed)- Waah Piya! itna lamba bhashan tune aaj tak nahi diya!!! leaving jests out of service...you are right Piya... we shouldn't have done this~!!~ I am sorry Piya!

Piya- It's okay Mish- just make KB and others realize this as soon as possible.

Misha- I will piya, don't worry!!

Piya- Okay now go to sleep...we have to get up early for college...waise kal economics ki class jaldi hai na??

Misha- Yeah!!!

They are absorbed in deep sleep!

For the first time in these ten days the shadow was much closer than ever...Piya could feel the scent which was quite familiar to her...Piya wondered whose it was?? She is startled to realize that was it Abhay's??

Piya wakes up from the slumber only to find that both Misha and Panchi were asleep...

She looked at the watch...it was 4:30 in the morning...She wanted to share her feelings but thought that neither Mish nor Panchi would believe her

Precap- She decides to call Abhay(her new friend)!!!!

PART 6

Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago