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Lifu18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

love ur ff but isnt panchi n misha pia's half sister cox they all are related in blood as they have the same father or does ur ff have a step mom or dad sumtin like dat if so sorry for my blabbering love ur ff continue soon

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peeehu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey nyce beginning plz add me to pm list

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Nidhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

this concept of 'the living tornado' is completely different and frest.. I like this one, and ofcourse u should continue.!

I'll be looking forward to new updates,
Luv,
Nidhi. :)

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PINKY04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

its nyc u should continue and do pm me the next part!!

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Lifu18
love ur ff but isnt panchi n misha pia's half sister cox they all are related in blood as they have the same father or does ur ff have a step mom or dad sumtin like dat if so sorry for my blabbering love ur ff continue soon

Acctually i will reveal that later!!!

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Thank You all of you.... you encourage me to continue the part soon

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569360

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

simply awesome...
loved it completely
keep writing

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Aisi bhi ek Love Story

Part 3

Piya- 5 baje bola tha or gadhi abhi tak nahi aayi..6:30 ho raha hai....

Misha enters huffing and puffing with beads of sweat on her face and panting....

Sorry Piya...my bike broke down in the middle of the race and i've come walking...um rather running to this place and see!! i m not late....

Piya- Haan...you are definitely on time....

Misha- Pata hai Piya..Ruhi has just broken down...not even talking to anyone...i tried to contact her but all in vain...Even Angad is trying to contact her and she is not answering the call...I am too scared for her...how the f*** can sumbody do this to Ruhi😡

Piya- Ye baat hum raat ko karenge pehle tell me tumhe mujhse Panchi and Sid jiju ke baare mein kya baat karni thi?

Misha- Chal baith..batati hoon...

Misha and Piya take a table and order Banana Splits for themselves and start gossiping

Misha- Yaar sun..hume na Panchi aur Sid ko...Sid jiju ko milwana chahiye...

Piya(gulps)- Why the hell we would do that? Tu jaanti nahi kya mamma ko...hum dono ko kachcha chab jayengi...'Ladka aur Ladki shaadi se pehle nahi mil sakte'

Misha- Arey Dabba...un dono ke beech misunderstanding ho gayii hai...tu to jaanti hai sid ke nature ko...Panchi se milne se pehle he was a Casanova right..so his exes, on seeing Panchi not there took him to a club and had his pics clicked with them...They posted them on Panchi's facebook wall...and are now trying to break their relationship considering that Panchhi changed Sid jiju...

Piya- Hey you never told me that...achcha unko milwana kaise hai..?

Misha- Dekh ***********************************************************************************************

Piya- That's a f***ing good idea Mish!!!!

Misha- I know that...(pats herself)

Piya mobile rings...

Piya- Hey KB wassup...

Kabir- nothing much... zara mish ko phone dena...uska phone nahi lag raha hai

Piya- Chal deti hoon...Mish KB ko tujhse baat karni hai...

Misha- hey dude...wassup??

Kabir- Aur teri bike race kaisi thi?

Misha- Freaking Cool KB....i won!!!!!

Kabir- That's like my babes!!1

Misha- KB shut up ur mouth....(to herself)babes..? yukk yukk yukk...

Kabir- Achcha sun Ruhi is critical

Misha- What ???

Piya- Kya hogaya Mish...🤔

Misha is unable to speak...gathers courage

Kabir- She was walking on the road when someone bumped her...she is in trauma...

Misha- Which...ho...hospital she's in??

Kabir- Life Care

Piya- Kaun hospital gaya....koi mujhe batayega...?

Misha narrates her the incident

Kabir- KB you s**** can't you hve told me about this...don't i care for her...idiot

Piya dashes her Mercedes Benz to Life Care...where she pulls Kabir's collar for telling Mish and not her....

Docter- She needs blood... B -ve

The Living Tornado turn the hospital upside down for the blood but to no success

Nurse- Docter Docter her pulse is dropping....

Angad has turned pale looking at Ruhi's condition...on spur of the moment they realise that Tee's blood group matches...evryone sighs in relief.

Ruhi recovers and the group leaves cursing the new admission for her condition

Dobriyal House

Madhu- Misha beta...how is ruhi..?(seeing piya...) aaj to neend bhi nahi aayegi is manhoos ki shakl jo dekh li

Arnav- Bas Karo Madhu...bachchi hai..itna kyun bura-bhala kehti ho?

Madhu- Tumhi ne isk...

Misha- Mamma Mamma..Ruhi is out of danger.... main aur piya sone jaa rahe hai.. good night mom and dad

Piya is all heartbroken...Misha consoles her...

Hey birdie tum to mamma ko jaanti ho phir why are you so sad

They sleep

The shadow is advancing towards Piya...this time really close....Piya advances towards it and advances her hand to touch it and it vanishes in the fog....

Precap

Abhay Raichand enters the College

Part 4

Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hei,
i feel ur FF is entirely different from all other FFs in the forum..really i loved it..its fresh..kabir,misha,pia,t,ruhi,angad are best buddies..that is tooooo coooool..in addition they hav a band "living tarnado'..that is super cool..really t being in the gang is gr8 highlight..

once abhay enters other than pia will every1 hav a grudge against him for having ruhi transferred to the other class coz of him?
i wish abhay joins the band later..n they all get along very well with abhay..that wud be soooooo lovely...

hei by the way wats ur name?

PS:in ur title if u cud include the updated part no n page no it wud be easier for ppl to follow up..thread 1 is not apt here i think..coz it implies tat 150 pages..
coz of tat i missed ur 3 parts..just today i read it..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Gr8 part.. Mish-Piya's talk was nice.. Sum1 should teach Madhu a gud lesson.. Poor Piya.. Wats wit d shadow..?? Eagerly waiting for Abhay's Entry.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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