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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

gr888 part

do cont soon :)

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

awesome update

loved it loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Oh feeling so bad for saba and Ali

hope they will meet soon

thanks for Pm cont soon

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

*sigh*

I am scared now. Anna is so fragile, she couldn't even tolerate chris holding someone else's hand. with a momentary fear that he does not belongs to her, i am scared for the girl, and chris couldn't see her tears, plz don't make them face what ali and saba did, they both won't be able to survive. Ali and saba knew they were heading towards danger, they did it on purpose, they knew it was darkness ahead, so somewhat it is easier to tolerate, but chris and anna..*sigh*..they both re innocence at it's peak..plz don't break their companionship..

excellent writing pearl..it has caught my heart..cont. soon..God Bless..

P.S - u are giving excellent titles..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Amazing update Jaee...waiting for the next part......cont soon
thanks for the pm

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ginny munjal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

wonderful part :)

thanks fr the pm :)

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

hey jaee😊
really sorry for late reply
i read all the parts but just didnt get enough time to post my comment..i am really sorry for that😭

but all the parts were beautiful😳
and this one is also fab..😃
have no words to describe how beautiful writer you are👏⭐️
too good
continue soon😳

love
tasfia

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

superb ff jaee.......

its just awesome.........

could feel it.....

do continue sooooooooooon........

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

excellent piece of worj jaee...m soo loving da cntrast......
anna n chris r living in adreamland whereas saba n ali's dreams hav been shattered.....

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

*edited*

Sigh!! I have to edit this today, but I don't know what to say... I suddenly feel a terrible loss and emptiness in my heart... when it was starting to feel the love that emerged between Chris and Anna, it was subjected to darkness, pain and the sufferings of Ali and Saba... Saba stepped into the fire on her own will, but turning your back on love is more painful than walking on burning charcoal... but living your life with feeling the emptiness in every moment, is even more excruciating...

I guess... pain is the beauty of love Very well said Jiya, pain is another colour of love ...

Thanks for the pm Jaee

~jiya~

P.S. I may not be commenting on the few next updates, but please keep pm-in me, I'll be back soon 😊
God Bless You It's okay Jiya, thank you so much for your wonderful comment :)

Originally posted by: -afsha-
I loved the part
My defination for love is that is jus gives pain
So its better stay away frm thatNo Afsha, life is not just about happiness - it's also abut tears ... the tears make the happiness even more wanted and beautiful but just because of tears, you don't stop living then why stop loving? It's the most beautiful feeling felt by humans ...
Reading Saba n Ali's part i thnk wat i thnk is so true
I jus wish Chris n Anna dosent face the same as Saba n Ali
The paths of love are not easy ... Thank you so much for your lovely comment :)

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali
simply beautiful.

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Part 5:

jaee

after reading this I hv no words to say!!!
Simply amazing

love d way u r showing d contrast between both d couples

lovely update

cont soon

Thank you so much guys :)

Originally posted by: princez_94
This ff is like a dream... Anna and Chris are living in it, seeing and feeling the good side of it... and Saba & Ali were also like them, didnt have any dreams before and when they had, it got snatched away from them...And leaving behind nothing but the sweet memories of the past... as u said "broke the castle of their dreams"
Laiba very well put - Anna and Chris are going to walk on the same path where the footprints of Saba and Ali are present ...

Amazing update Jaee... I was actually wating for it, was about to log out when i saw ur PM... and then in fraction of a second I'm here...

(sorry for writing useless stuff, it just after reading an update it just leaves me speachless...) Thank you so much Laiba, that is so sweet :)

-Laiba

Originally posted by: .PINK.
gr888 part
do cont soon :)

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani
nice part

beautiful

continue soon

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Oh feeling so bad for saba and Ali
hope they will meet soon
thanks for Pm cont soon

Thank you so much guys :)

Originally posted by: -Mehak
*sigh*

I am scared now. Anna is so fragile, she couldn't even tolerate chris holding someone else's hand. with a momentary fear that he does not belongs to her, i am scared for the girl, and chris couldn't see her tears, plz don't make them face what ali and saba did, they both won't be able to survive. Ali and saba knew they were heading towards danger, they did it on purpose, they knew it was darkness ahead, so somewhat it is easier to tolerate, but chris and anna..*sigh*..they both re innocence at it's peak..plz don't break their companionship..

excellent writing pearl..it has caught my heart..cont. soon..God Bless..

P.S - u are giving excellent titles..

Thank you Di - your comments are always special to me ... Love has a very different path with petals and thorns and to enjoy the petals, Anna and Chris have to tolerate the thorns - that would be the test of their love for each other ... Thank you so much Di :)

Originally posted by: achoose
awesome...no words......................

Originally posted by: gopi06
Amazing update Jaee...waiting for the next part......cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ginny09
wonderful part :)
thanks fr the pm :)

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
hey jaee😊
really sorry for late reply
i read all the parts but just didnt get enough time to post my comment..i am really sorry for that😭

but all the parts were beautiful😳
and this one is also fab..😃
have no words to describe how beautiful writer you are👏⭐️
too good
continue soon😳

love
tasfia

Originally posted by: ammuakhi
superb ff jaee.......
its just awesome.........
could feel it.....
do continue sooooooooooon........

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon

love
Riddss

Originally posted by: cutiepie12
excellent piece of worj jaee...m soo loving da cntrast......
anna n chris r living in adreamland whereas saba n ali's dreams hav been shattered.....

Thank you all :) Your comments are always encouraging and endearing :)

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago