my new ff on 6 jodis 'JAB WE MET' 1st part on pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
hey interesting
please put some bright colour for ShaNak( not that light green colour ) in the beginnning which says ShaNak.. Good idea..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

as long as itz got MN in it em in :)

would love to read more na

the character stretch

would love to read more

plez cont soon

n add me in ur pm listy na

thanks

-Linu

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
nice cs.
my all time favorite Mayur..............n other fav jodies also there.
wowwwwwwwwwwwww
waiting for update.
plz jaldi jaldi update karo...............i cant wait for first part!!!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Luv d cncpt dear.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow...dat was cool
huh kinda confused about all of dem.
.such alot to manage...so many bro s n sis
.anyway nice intro

p.s its impossible to hav 2 months diff between blood siblings but since its a story n crucial 4 de story line will over look it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Aishu - u got my PM?...is it possible to make changes??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
nyc Cs
But kinda confusing
agree with preeti
so many people.. in one ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeths609

wow...dat was cool

huh kinda confused about all of dem.
.such alot to manage...so many bro s n sis
.anyway nice intro

p.s its impossible to hav 2 months diff between blood siblings but since its a story n crucial 4 de story line will over look it...

oops i forgot😳 but blooper hi samajh lo😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
ummm interesting.........
nice intro....
looking forward for the next update........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello friends i m extremely sorry that i have write the concept after 1 or 2 months actually i have to handle 3 ff's n even my exams were going on n there were many other problems so i m very sorry for my late update n i hope u all like it.


CONCEPT

the concept is this that how will the jodi's meet especially how will Avni n Khanak recognize shaan n sam n whats gonna happen when mayur sajan shanak savni prida n varni how will they gonna meet what will happen when they'll meet what's written in their destiny to know more read my ff


PART 1

Its morning time n in BHUSHANS house there is very loud noises of girls n then Damini gets fed up n yelled
D. CHUPP!!!!!!!!
everyone got stopped
D. arre kab se bole jaa rahe ho pichle dus (10) minutes se mera dimag khaaye jaa rahe ho kya abh koi mujhe bataayega ke baad kya hai kis baat ka jhagra chal raha hai
R. di dekho na gunjan ko wo mujhe mera dress nahi deh rahi
D. offo to dusra pehen lo na kya hojaayega
R. nai di wo mujhe hi pehena na hai after all aaj mera 1st day hai college mein to isab ko pata to chalna chahiye na k ROSHNI BHUSHAN aayi hai
D. A nautanki bandh kar haan or Gunjan tum kyun tum subha subha mera dimaag kharaab kar rahe ho de dona usse wo dress
G. nai di pehle iss se pucho ke isne mera shalwaar kameez (churidar) kahaan rakha hai aaj mujhe wo white waala hi pehen na tha or yeh jaanti thi ke mujhe yahi pehen na hai par phir bhi dii iss se bolo na
Damini looks at Roshni
Roshni was like
R. abh di isse wo kyun chahiye isse thori na kisi larke ko impress karna hai
G. ROSHNIII!!!!!! ruk tujhe to abhi batati hun mein ruk tu
they both runs n actually all 3 (damini roshni n gunjan) were smiling n laughing but gunjan was little angry on Roshni
then they stopped
D.wese gunjan baat kya hai haan aaj se pehle to tu kabhi tayyar hone par is tarah se hmm i mean uhum uhum
G. di tum bhi
D.okay sorry baba sorry hey hey hey hey ek minute by the way roshni "isse thori na kisi larke ko impress karna hai uska kya matlab haan kaheen tum college isliye to nai"
R. di acha suno aapko pata hai yeh kis whithe dress ki baat kar rahi hai
D, abh nai
G. roshni nai dekh tu mat bol roshni
R. hmm di wo itna purana n bojat hi simple n na jaane kitna old fashion hai isiliye meine wo chuppa diya hai or isse wo dress nahi milne waala
G. acha to mein bhi nahi dungi jaa bol kya kar legi
R, hm okay i dont mind as mere paas aur bhi latest dresses hain
G, Roshni tu
D. bas bas bas bas arre gunjan mein tujhe kitni baar bolun tu ese
Suddenly a voice came
"Itni subha subha kaun larh raha hai"
n guess who is it it none another than NUPUR BHUSHAN
D. arre waah madam aap ki subha hogayi
nupur smiles
N.wese kya horaha hai
G.nupur di dekho na is roshni ko ye mujhe mera dress waapas nahi kar rahi hai
N.acha roshni very good n well done or tumhe isse yeh waapas karna bhi nahi chahiye
G.dii??????????
D.bilkul sahi keh rahi hai nupur. gunjan teri parwa hai sabko isiliye to hum tujhe mana kar rahe hain ese kapre pehen se tu is mein behen ji lagti hai bura mat maan na par plz dekh tu samajh
G. par di mein
R. ye lo gunjan i m sorry par mera tumhe hurt karne ka zara bhi maqsad nahi tha
G. ruk rosh hmm mujhe ese dresses bilkul bhi nahi chahiye jo meri pyaari princess ke pyaari si aankhon mein aansu laaye hmm
then they all hugs
then suddenly 2 voices says
aur humein to koi bhul hi gaye hain
its none another than khanak n Avni they were coming back from jogging
D. aagayi tum dono
N. arre aaj itni jaldi kese uth gaye tum sab
everyone say : DI!
N. oops sorry
damini pulls her ear n says : hmm nath khath hum sab 6 baje uth jaate hain bas tu hi ek hai jo 6:45 pe uth ti hai wo bhi isliye kyunke aaj college ka pehla din hai warna to 10 baje tak
N.arre roshni bhi to esi hai
K. hmm wese maan na parega ke sab se pehle to damini di hi uth ti hain 5:30 baje chaahe chutti ho ya na ho
A. theek kaha tumne khanak
G. arre abh college k liye late nahi horaha nupur di aap to tayyar bhi nahi huwi hain
D. okay c'mon everyone jaldi se tayyar hojao mein mein tum sab ko 5 mins deti hun phir 5 mins mein breakfast n then hummein sharp 7 am tak college mein hona chahiye okay
N, par di 5mins
D.your time starts now
N. par di
D. 4 minutes
N. okay i'll be back
all smiles

scene changed to SHARMAS

its a Gym actually
n there'z all 6 boys doing exercise

prithvi mayank samrat sameer varun shantanu

(i'll use sh for shaan sam for sameer n sammy for samrat okay)

v. chalo bhaiya abh college jaane k liye 15 mins hi baaki hain or aaj pehle din to mein late nahi hona chahta

sam: oho chotte aaj esaa kya khaas hai haan koi aarahi hai kya
v. bhaiya dekho na sameer bhaiya ko unse kaho k mujhse is tarah baat nahi karein n especially sab ke saamne chotte to mat bulaaye

sh. haan bhaiya (prithvi) in sab ko choro aap ne hummein 5:45 se gym mein bitha kar rakha huwa hai abh chalein

sammy: han bhaiya abh chalein wese bhi college k liye late horaha hai

m. hmm i think hummein chalna chahiye

p. hmm chalo bas paanch minute aur

everyone says : NO!!!!!!!!!!!

p. okay baba chalo

sam: humne to abhi tak breakfast bhi nahi kiya hai bhaiya aur

p. bas bas abh chalo breakfast varun ne 5:30 se bana liya tha abh chalo late nahi hora ha breakfast kar ke seedha neeche okay acha shaan sun mein varun n sameer ek saath jaa rahe hain to tu mayank aur samrat ek car mein aajaana okay

sh. okay big bro

on the other side

D. acha chalo acha nupur suno tumhe to car chalaani aat haina to ek kaam karo tum gunjan or khanak ko le jao aur mein dusri car se roshni aur avni ko lejaati hun okay

N. okay


precap : damini's n prithvi's car's accident


hey friends i know its a very short part but its tooo late so i posted a short part without pics sorry but i promise next time there will be a long part wd pics n i will post it asap ok plz give comments n press like button

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