Heartbeat -An AR Mini FF *Completed* 21/3/11

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

I thnk rid is that person and if she is than do anythng but dont kill her. As without her armaan is incomplete and without thm ff is incomplete.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Yuep. !
Want ridhima aka mrs. Malik safe and romantic as she is.

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Black_beauty

@Black_beauty

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

I loved it!!<3
but why do I have this wierd feeling that riddhima os the donor!!
I don't know why but her excuses,her blood test,her 2 week long trip,her tears,her goodbyes!--they just add up to one thing--is riddhima the donor??: (
I hope not-----I want to see AR together in the end!

Thanks for the PM..
Update soon: )

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Meghna

@Meghzz

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

i looovee this FF! so well written! ive cried so much in all the other parts please make me happy with the last part!!!!

riddhima being the donor willl mean she dying right, dont do that please :( doesnt feel good to ask you to change the storyline but ah sad endings ;'( The writer however knows whats best for her ff so itll be ur decision but just a small request, pls dont kill her, show her in coma or smething, anything lol doesnt sound too logical even then :(

regardless of all that, you're an aammmaaaaaaazing writer xxx

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Thanks for the feedback!

Pssht. Now I'm in two minds. 😕

Don't expect me to update this soon... I have a lot to figure out! 😳

But you can expect an update on my other FF LOVE IS... after 24th!!! 😆

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago

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Tina

@Tina_moonchild

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

i have no words to describe how i'm feeling right now...one word for this part - terrific !!!!👏

but plz don't make riddhima the donor.....its so freakin painful man!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the pm....and cont soon...😊

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Crazyy_Fan

@Crazyy_Fan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Awesome part...n as much as i love ridzz.....i feel d essence n charm of d storyy wud go awayy if u keep ridzz alive-fit n fyn typez.....Continuee wid wat u wer thinking..but but but dun make armaan a devdaas...u cud show sumthin lyk ppl cum n go...u love dem n hav dere memoriezz imprinted in ur heart forever.....hold on to d happy memories..chrish dem..dun despise dem....forget d bad memz...dey wont do ny good to u..mak him value d sacrifice ridz made so dat he cud live..dun mak him do suicide or nythin lyk dat..coz if dat happenzz ridzi's love n sacrifice wudn't exactlyy be worth it....but plz dun fix him up wid another gal....since dis izz an AR ff...... dis was jus a suggestion 😳 plzz go on wid wateva u think izz correct 😳

p.s. other readerzz if u read dis dun kill me lolll ;)

&&& I love d wayy u write Aanya :D

Keep it going ;)

Continuee sooooonnn n i m eagerlyy waiting for d updt of Love is :D

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Crazyy_Fan
Awesome part...n as much as i love ridzz.....i feel d essence n charm of d storyy wud go awayy if u keep ridzz alive-fit n fyn typez.....Continuee wid wat u wer thinking..but but but dun make armaan a devdaas...u cud show sumthin lyk ppl cum n go...u love dem n hav dere memoriezz imprinted in ur heart forever.....hold on to d happy memories..chrish dem..dun despise dem....forget d bad memz...dey wont do ny good to u..mak him value d sacrifice ridz made so dat he cud live..dun mak him do suicide or nythin lyk dat..coz if dat happenzz ridzi's love n sacrifice wudn't exactlyy be worth it....but plz dun fix him up wid another gal....since dis izz an AR ff...... dis was jus a suggestion 😳 plzz go on wid wateva u think izz correct 😳

p.s. other readerzz if u read dis dun kill me lolll ;)

&&& I love d wayy u write Aanya :D

Keep it going ;)

Continuee sooooonnn n i m eagerlyy waiting for d updt of Love is :D

Awwh thanks Sakshi!!!

Babe, your comment made me happiest!!! 😳

I think Imma continue with what I had in mind before!

Naah. Devdas or Armaan with someone else doesn't work for me either! 😆

I seriously love u 😆

xoxo

Aanya

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MY AR FF: LOVE IS... : Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044

MY AR Mini FF: HEARTBEAT: Link - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957

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558278

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Okay part was soo amazing but if ridz is the donor toh na I'll kill u! Can u make her just be weak? Like she got someone's heart and in return like gave a kidney to their family member?

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Crazyy_Fan

@Crazyy_Fan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Awwh thanks Sakshi!!!

Babe, your comment made me happiest!!! 😳

I think Imma continue with what I had in mind before!

Naah. Devdas or Armaan with someone else doesn't work for me either! 😆

I seriously love u 😆

xoxo

Aanya

🤗Ur replyy stitched a smile on mah face Aanya :D

n remembr no thanxx n all 😈

Datzz relliiii greatt

Lol 😆 same pinch 😆

I love u too 😆

Love

~Sakshi~