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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#611

hey sorry for late comment ... but the part waz damn hot ...armaan's passion n possessiveness could be totally scene ... loved the arsh hot sexy make out... n their conversation in between n how for once shilpa confessed her true feelings n desire ... n the part waz beautifully written ... n the jerk vivek n his stupid useless brain ... i waz so happy armaan knocked him down ... n didnt leave any bone ... n loved the end confrontation between armaan n shilpa ... i m so looking forward for their true confession of their feelings ... anywaz pls continue soon ... thanks for pm...take care...love aish...

Edited by aisha_ranbir8 - 14 years ago

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#612

that was xcellent...omg u have to cont soon.

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anjalip

@anjalip

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#613

amazing part

finally he cnfessed his feeling wow

great loved it s much

thanks fe the pm

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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#614

great part Rida!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it...
finally I loved Arman in ur ff pura dil se...😆
awww he asked Shilpa to marry him...
and finally he realized his love...
u brought out ArSh's emotions beautifully Rida...really good job...
and dont make us wait more...
and I guess u promised to update regularly from now on😉...so keep ur promise and update soon with a long part...
love
Afrin

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#615

loved this part rida...

sooo amazing n passionate...

armi ne achi dhulayi ki vivek ki..

n precap is awsum..

thnx for the pm...

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shaba

@Glow-n-show

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#616

plzz update soon...

& dnt frgt o pm me...

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Rida

@FleetingWishes.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#617

I have no idea wen the update will come, but defintely not in this week i suppose! though il try to write something um maybe?! nd Well BTLOO im not sure about the further story track, ive been in a confusion wd somethng regarding it, and maybe i change it whole but cant say much. il touch BTLOO once im satisfied.
thankyu :D

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tehzeeb

@tehzeebkhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#618

Ridaaa 🤗

Yaar what an updae they were so close to...☺️

Knowing you well i think thats not far🤣

loved it,superb lol heard that from some where🤣 but Rida yaar update soon na .I now i am not able to comment on ur FF most of the time bcz i read it from my Ipad s can't comment from there...But plzzz update soon love the story line so far 😃

Love Tehzeeb😊