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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
plz dont let geet leave maan
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😍waiting for update sweety...
restless sleep after watching yesterdays episode and precap😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
i don't want geet to leave maan!
somewhere that love is coming back!
continue soon!
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luving the way story is evolving.
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wat geet is leaving?????????????? it's not fair...............only geet will change maan further.......
already she only changed maan as a human from monster😆 i would say.............it was not maan's fault na........all was upbringing of dadi................looking fwd...............

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey
Amazing update!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the aggreessive Maan back,
sometimes it only works on Geet..........hai na.........
Hope Geet comes out as a pregnant and have thier child back,
loved the little change in geet..............
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THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE & SUPPORT.... MORE MSG... QUICKER UPDATE... :D
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OMG dont make geet leave 😭 please please
now she is starting to feel & wants to react...
they can both leave & live at another house or kick his family out
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waitingggg😍😍
can u plz update aroma n enigma as well. am i askin toooooooooooo much.
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Posted: 14 years ago



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***REMORSE***
part 50
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Geet laid there. Panting. The cloth she had it was ripped on the floor. She felt so week. Very week. His every touch was tempting her. Tempting her to touch back. To react back. Oh what she was doing? She hides her face on the pillow. In matter of 2 hours they made love 3 time. She barely had any strength left. She wanted to but in maans arm. Just lay there. She slowly drifts way....
Maan was resting on his hand. Supporting him. He strokes geets cheek & hair. Tickling her. He could see a faint smile forming on her cheek. He was amused. Kissed her both cheek. She felt his soft lips. It tickled her. He knew how tiared she was. He cursed him self for making her this tiared but there was no other opetion. She was about to leave & in any cost he will not allow her to leave. She moved. Coming more close, against maans chest. Covers slips down. Making her Brest visible. It was bit red & sore. He kissed there 2. Promising him self he will be never this aggressive... Geet felt his hand stroking her nipple gently. She was half wale & half sleep... She couldn't help her self as the stroking sensed a chile down her body. She instantly takes her leg between maans.... Maan smirks as his every seductive touch was bringing her close to him. Forcing her to touch. He probably had no idea what excitement it was creating with in him. It felt good. That's all he cared. It's been long time since they both were happy in a same room. Same bed. Enjoying them self.... Maan could feel she was falling in to deep sleep. Very deep sleep.... Then came the shock... Her hand slides on his waist. Hugging him tight. Her ear against his chest... Her breath was fanning him. Soothing him. He felt her touch. She have never done this. Not even in her sleep... It was haven. He knew well. He slowly gradually reaching his goal to make her happy. To give her all the happiness as possible....
After two hour both wakes up again. Only to find one another cuddled up. Not willing to let go... Geet comes back to the pillow.... Her eyes was levelled with maan. She was on his arm... On his chest all along...
Maan smiles- you looking really beautiful. He moves her girl which was irritating her.
Geet: let me go! His hand was locked on her waist. She couldn't leave at all.
Maan: kha jana?
Geet: I need to go!
Maan- where?
Geet- my flat!
Maan- this is your house!
Geet- no!
Maan- it is!
Geet- let me go.... Maan frees her. She was straggling to take his grip way from him... She sits up. Holding the spread. Realising she have no cloths.... Maan amused. Seeing her helpless. Why would he be?
Geet- I need cloths!
Maan- to paro na!.. He looked at her smirking. Going back to his relaxing position. His hand under his head. Looking at the ceiling.
Geet- I need my cloths....
Maan- ha! Wardrobe!
Geet startted to get irritated by his behaviour. He wouldn't even give her the spread! What to get embraced geet Evantually thought. He knows every part of her body.... Geet stands up. All naked. Maan looks at her. Just stairs at His naked wife. Beautiful. Venerable. Every part of her body was seducing him. Every part....
Geet walks to the wardrobe & takes another shirt of his. This time black. Still her strong buds was visible. Her thigh was completely visible with her buts. Geet felt his hand on her thigh & bum. Stroking. Moving his hand back & forth....she breathed hard...
Geet- mucjce jana hi!
Maan- to javo na!
Geet- I can't go like this!
Maan- I can't do much!
Geet rolled her eyes. Of course he wont help.... & they were back in bed in no time. Making love.

Geet called the servant to bring one of her luggage back. She quickly puts Maans shirt back on & the spread round him... Leaving maan all naked on the bed. She tried her best not to look at him.... She only peps her head out & takes the luggage in.

MAan was sleep. She covers him back & changes. She looks at him once... Then slowly walks out.....

Maan wakes up. Found the bed empty. He jumps up. Cursing him self to fall sleep. How could he.... He runs to the bathroom... No geet. He quickly puts some cloths on.... Wonder rounds the house. No Geet.... He decides to ask the driver....
Maan- where did your Geet mam go?
Driver- she just left sir.... Maan runs to one of his car & disappears.



Next- Part 51


sorry for short one' long one later' :D

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Thanks for all the love & support...
not many of you commenting...
please do... it motivates me to type... allot...
I will only update
PARADOX & REMORSE from now
on....
after i finish this two... i will go back to others..
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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