My Other Half - DISCONTINUED

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

superb update, loved how you did a part reflecting geet's pov as well, please do continue soon and thanks for the pm~

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

awesommeeeeeeeee..loved it..loved the necklace part but the accident ruined it...i hope he saves her

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Awesome update

Loved it loadz

hehehe the iPhone being vampire

awwwww yay maan gave her his gift

precap is scaring me

Cant wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

nice...

i hope that geet will be ok!

continue soon!

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

great update...
oh no hope maan saves geet

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

brill update

loved it all except for that stupid boss dude ruining our

wonderful 😍 maaneet moment

ufffffff maan better kick his ass real bad as pay back

how dare he come between them 😡😆

anyways enough of my rant

cont soon hun

will be waiting

hope geet doesnt drown

p.s. thanks for the pm

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

loved the update.............

loved it how maan was teasing her the with the battery thing............

omg she fell..............she cant swim hope maan will save her b4 any one gets to her

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

part 10
nice part................
OMG Geet can swim and Maan just couldnt stop her fall..................
who is that HE?
is he the came one who is after Geet?
cont soon........................

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#259

Really liked how you incorporated maan and geets pov it showed the depth of their feeling and awe geet so innocent when maan joked about with th iPod and she believed it and awe the necklace he gave it to her that was so sweet and ergh that guy is so determined to get get killed but that's going to be hard considering maan is with her and ooh she fell in the river hope maan can save her anyways great update and can't wait ti read more 😊