BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122)

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#941

it was super mesmerizing epilogue love it core i'm speechless my dear i hope yu come up

with lovely FF soonnnnnnnnnn

i'll miss reading😭😭😭

thank yuuuuuuuuu so much

from bottom of my heart

muah

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#942

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

cute epilogue

loved it

maaneet were adorable

thanksssssssssssssss 4 da pm

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#943

magnificent epilogue
love it core
i'm gonner miss reading
it
i hope yu come soon
with another amazing
FF my dear
thank yuuuuuuuuuuu so much
thanks pm

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#944

Great ending!

And amazing FF!

I will miss your regular updates!

And thanks for entertaining us with your beautiful writing!

Hope you will soon come with another story for us 😳 !

Will be waiting, until then take care ❤️

Edited by kooliio - 14 years ago

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#945

amazing story line.
thanks for sharing it with us.....................

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#946

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dear.......ur update just n n also ...also .......⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

..dear...👏👏👏

..really .....😳

....4 ur hard work dear..👍🏼.

tons of huges n kisses.... ....🤗

...4 pm me...

..2 always PM me....😉

once again .....😃

feel sad 4 it's end...😭

lov,❤️

Tama

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#947

You asked me for my favourite scens? Well I loved every update. You don't drag your stories so every scene is pivotal. No unnecessary frills.

But out of all if I had to pick one it would be without doubt the one in Chapter 13 where Geet bursts out at Maan. I had quoted that scene in my comment too.

I also liked the scene where Maan uses Ahana getting hurt as an example for Geet to understand how the pain of one you love pierces your own heart too.

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#948

mindblowing,superb ending!!!nthng 2 say abt it..
i wd lk 2 c u in Hall Of Fame!! :D
tk cr..n did u submit Sandstorm yet??

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#949

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
mindblowing,superb ending!!!nthng 2 say abt it..
i wd lk 2 c u in Hall Of Fame!! :D
tk cr..n did u submit Sandstorm yet??

Sandstorm where ?