Mayank&Nupur:With You...Last Part Pg 33

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

congratz for ur new ss!

great start dear

the story seems realy interesting

would love to read further parts

continue soon

nd plz add me to ur pm list 😊

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

update soon
and pm me

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Asmara.

@Asmara.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Awesome start....

Continue soon...

And thanks for the pm....

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Loved the update!

loved MaJan convo!

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow new ff lovely

amazing start

eager to read next part

thanks for the pm😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

OH MY GOD!! now that was extra-ordinary! 👏 👏

i LOVED the writing expression, so different from what u write before, the characters are amazing and teh bonding and conversation was so natural! loved it! keep it up princess!

nupur committing suicide! damn it! my heart was caught in a fist! spectacular work!

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

OMG so many twists and turns in just one update??
BTW it was awesome and really i didn't expected a single thing before i read.....
the way you described mayank's parents i thought they were mayank and nupur and they were not....
and i thought savitri's daughter is nupur and it became gunjan........
i thought gunjan despised nupur but not and finally at the end i thought gunjan ran towards samrat's house, i mean the guy whom gunjan is in love with........ but it was nupur and is she trying to kill herself?????
yaar tune tho kamaal kar diya yaar...........
maar daala sach mein......
waiting for teh next update

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vasantha

@VasuKaShlicious

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

OMGG sajjal di.. awesome story and that too with great part1..

please do continue soon! nw dat mayank has finally seen her.. i wanna knw the further story..

wanna knw mre abou nupur!