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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

Nice FF. I read both BSLS and Precious Love today. Both are nice.

Coming back to this update, I thought you would not give away about Geet's Veju. I was enjoying Maan's jealously.

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Avani

@avani_9

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

wooow luvd geet n pari'z convo......ohh so finally maan cums 2 kno dat d person whom geet loves too much iz nt her bf bt itz her bro.......will eagrly wait 4 jungle moment......
Thnx 4 pm.....

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#343

🤣 🤣 Poor Geet , her babaji loves to see her cornered specially in front of Maan 😆

Maan was grinning like a fool 😆 🤣

The update was super , super cute . The phone convo between Geet & Pari was superb 👏 ; till Geet herself mentioned about her big brother Maan was clueless & felt his heart break into pieces 😕 🤣

Loved it ... 👍🏼 👍🏼

Edited by gawdygory - 14 years ago

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

heyyy dear .. lovely updates ... read all d parts just today itself ...

found it interesting ....

plllzzzzz .. update soon ... pm me ...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

part 16
Geet darling till the last minute didnt realise shes not alone.................and Maan oh my, is now happy that all this time she was talking about her veer................but really loved the lines.................cont soon............

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhh ..muskaaan...... dhokebaaz kahin ki............
phir se wohi jungle precap...yahaan mein kya kya soch rahi thi...
anywaysireally liked Geet-pinky convo.....awwww Maan was so relieved when he learned that Geet was talking about her bro.......
Muskaan beta agle update mein dhokha mat dena...nahin toh achcha nahin hoga.

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Huner

@Be.edgy

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

haha Phew Maan knows the truth!! 😆 Bechara had lost all the hope.. 😆
Yaar Geet is soo adorable!! blabbered out everything... She's such a cutieee.. Oh! Jungle! and we are waiting for jungle mein mungle.. 😳
Continue soon..

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

Brilliant part. loved it.
but too short.
geet-pari conversation was awesome.
poor maan but when he heard veer jee tabjake jaan mein jaan aya maan ka.
update soon.