Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#561

Descriptions of the places they visited were lovely . 👍🏼 The details that you give are very rich yet does not hamper the story flow. 👏

Loved the update ...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#562

aww ..the update was soo adorable ...

thanks alot hun!

love

Sana

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#563

part 60
wow loved it.................loved Maan care for Geet and how patient he was...........................the youngsters comment had me laughing and Maan didnt take in the negative way but was proud of it................not many are like that.......................cont soon..................

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#564

am reading ur other fic Maaneet scenes.......... thread 2........very nicely written...................any other fics u have written?

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#565

Liked the parts

Geet was getting famous

Loved it

Maan was possessive there also

Loved how the guys joked around

Baapre i got scraed seeing Geet lik that

Loved how Maan took care of her

Waiting for more updates

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Great part and well describe all places thank you for that..aww so sweet maan taking care of geet so sweet and nice thank you for pm and this part

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#567

Is d description of d places real, u have been to these places or just googled d info?anyway nice update:)

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: sarita21992
Is d description of d places real, u have been to these places or just googled d info?anyway nice update:)

How does it matter whether I have been to these places or just googled the information? To answer your question, I have been to all these places but I've also googled certain details of these places which I may have missed out. You are free to read them or give it a miss.

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: spvd
am reading ur other fic Maaneet scenes.......... thread 2........very nicely written...................any other fics u have written?

thanks. I had posted the links to all my fics on Maaneet in a seprate thread. Do you have it?

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#570

amazing update.....
you explain things so beautifully that i end up reading the update twice.....

really love your style of writing.....
great work OPTI.....

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