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Posted: 14 years ago
Im waiting di.... Please update.... Dying to read the next part.... Ur "TM" is truely magical....its awesome....
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOMMMMMEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update deewangi soon! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hope maan gets to know the truth ON HER BDAY PARTY........;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 199 – part 120

In part 199 when Maan came to know all truth about how Arjun hassled Gee tin London nd how badly he kicked nd punched him I was too happy y to read this unaware of the future track ...... nd when they merged in one i thought Geet will finally enter in in Khurana mansion ..........

In part 120 I did not like how Dadi reacted finding Geet in morning in Maan's room I thought she was a modern woman ......... maybe she was little offended but then she cud have tried to settle out things by offering them to get married as she is unaware of their marriage .... But it was great reading Arjun is finally back to his sanity

part 121 – part 122

in part 121 maneet hospital moment was really cute .........

Maan is a business tycoon but really is worse in handling personal life why cud he just not go nd tell dadi he is married to geet .........She will be little or more angry initially knowing the truth but will finally accept their maariage ..........

122 – maan has always taken Geet in granted nd hurting geet ...........in this part nd some further parts really make me hate maan .............nd i really hate him ...............😡

First of all congo for new thread 12 ,13,14 ,15 and 16🥳 i know its little too early ...........😆 great going with ur brilliant writing skill 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Part 123

Shame on you Maan 😡geet never hid her marriage its you coward not able to speak the truth ..........

I seriously seriously hate maan 😡 ...........he dznt deserve geet not at all sorry musky ........... How dare he calling her friends joker ............how will he know what frnds mean when he is not having any true friend ..........

He dznt even deserve geet's unconditional love when his ego is bigger than his love ...........

Part 124 – part 140

I know first time m saying this but i really loved loved seeing maan pain .............

just one thing hurts to read geet has gone though more pain than maan .............she was not in contact with her family for last 7 years .........

How could she let MK talk to him maan needs to be punished more ............

you know i actually wanted maan to know the truth that MK is his daughter nd geet not allowing him to talk to her ...........the best punishment for maan .........I not at all pity maan not even a single % ................

7 years he missed geet's love infact still he is missing but .............but why geet had to go thru so much of pain atleast she cud be in contact with her parents ..........😭😭😭😭😭. Maan was at-least with his family ..........geet was all alone now she hss becum so cold .......

Musky this is not enough make maan rpent more nd more ............ Raj was right ....maan lost everything very before he lost geet that because of his mistakes

NOW SOMETHING ABOUT MK .............❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

MK very sweet and cute just like geet ❤️❤️❤️ ................so maan thinks she is just 4 or 5 why never asks geet MK'S age ............. I know he will never he is such a brainless person ........😕

Because of maan geet went to lots oF trouble how hard it would have been for geet to lie to mk everyday and to each and every person ...........😭

I seriously seriously loved the possessiveness MK has for her dad 😆 ................

so MK can now surely reunite her parents but musky i want maan to stoop him on his knees to beg for forgiveness o geet ...........i know geet is never angry with him but does he realize how much he has hurt her ??????

She was so bubbly , chirpy , infectious nd now look hwo cold she ahs becum .......

Part 131 = this was so painful when geet was hoping to go to maan's home and again how her dreams shattered .........😭😭😭

The new flavour of thrill nd suspense is really interesting ....


i want maan to know as soon as it possible that geet is new what is she .........

.....MK is co cute uska gussa in part 136 lovely .........wow nd maneet's little interaction though maan dznt know MK is hsi daughter she surely gonna unite her parents again in a lovely way .........

Cuz the track is working like before how geet first had met maan nd then their endless calls, maan's first kiss to geet on her cheeks , ............

This is sad to know geet has completely changed dznt wear saree well she only liked to wear saree for maan nd no parties she loved partying ........

Lol..........😆.so Maan considering guatam kumar GK .......cant he think once geet khurana of gk .........



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Posted: 14 years ago
mini tm:-

Next:-

Dadi :- u , I want to meet dcp, what r u doing here, look geet, go , maan need u.

Geet said I know, he needs me dadi but if u want to talk to gk , dcp of delhi then tell me if u want to talk with ur maan's wife then also tell me but to whom u choose .

Dadi:- u mean u r dcp.

Khan excused himself and thinks kya family hain, mere dimag kharap ho jayga, lagta hain iss khurana khandan ke wajay se humare gk madam aise ho gaye.

Dadi:-ok, I want ur help.

Geet:- dadi, I mean madam we will help u and we will give mr khurana full protection.

Here maan heard mr khurana and thinks may be she is still angry but he seen love, care for him then y she addressed him as mr khurana.

Here dadi hold her hands and said thanks beta.

Geet:- it's ok , it's our duty. Aap ghar jaiye , have faith on us, no one can touch again mr khurana.

Maan to himself again mr khurana, y geet, y , isse accha hota toh mein maar jata , iye roj roj ka marna ,but u love me I know but then y this mr khurana.

Dadi left and before that she gave blessing to geet.

Geet noticed maan with mk and maan looking at her with sad and hurt face.

Geet shook her head and think baap ban gaye but bacche ke bacche hain abhi tak, choti choti baat pe sad ho jate hain. Uff mein kya karu in dono baap beti ko leke.both r same

Next:-

Geet told khan and ayur to meet her in km outhouse and then take maan with her , mk also going with them she is sad to see her dadda hurt, injured and sad.

She is trying to cheer him up by said a story of angel .

Both reached at home with mk when dadi said they can move to main house when maan said no, I'll not, we r happy in out house .

Dadi :-ok beta, as long as u r happy ,We r also happy.

Maan just smirks and left the place with mk.

Geet follows him.

Geet said maan, I want to talk to u.

Maan :-umm

Geet:- not here,then to mk, beta , go to ur room, , play with nanny, I have some work ur dadda, I'll call u.

Mk hugged maan and said no.I'm…no..t…go…ing…an..y.wh..e..re…

Geet:- beta….

Mk more tightly hugged maan's waist and said no…no…no..no

Maan take her in his arms and geet said maan samal ke u r not fit , ur wounds will be opened up.

Maan:-geet, pls let my princess stay some time then we will talk at night.

Geet:-ummmm

Next:-

at room, maan playing with mk after some time maan feel sleepy when mk said aa…p…me…re…go..dhi..me..in…so..ja..o…

Maan smiles and said beta aapko lag jayegi.

Mk smiles and said na…aap…so…ja..o…aa..o.

Then maan laid on his daughter's lap.mk gently caressed his head and said cl…o..se ur ….ey…es …da..dd.a….

Maan again smiles and close his eyes and feel mk gently patted him and after some time he dose off to sleep.

Geet seen it and tears full on her eyes again, she is happy to see the bonding between father –daughter.

Geet wipes her tears and wonders after 7yrs she is again crying, yes maan and mk is her angel , life, soul and heart. Only her maan and mk can let her feel life again. She forget all feeling but around these two she feel everything again. She closed her eyes when nanny said khan and ayur come to meet her.

Geet:- tell them to sit ,I'm coming.

Next:-

Geet come and see ayur and khan sit there but dev is also there with annie and arjun.

Geet's anger rises up then she said khan and ayur come to study we will talk there , they left from there.Geet to dev, annie and arjun, pls maan is tired now and takin nap , so pls, all of u come tomorrow or when maan will wake up ,I'll call u later.

Annie:- ek min gk, he is our family member and we don't need ur permission to meet him, after u came in his life , everything is wrong, only u r the reason he is sad and hurt. If he marry sameera then everything is fine but u came and along with that ur daughter also came , what do u want money ….I trust u as my friend but I don't know u r here to create problem in our life. Y r u came here, y r u broke my friend sameera's heart and life, she went to depression, cause of u.

Here,dev and arjun try to shut annie but she is going on.

Geet listen everything then said ho gaya lecture iya kuch baki hain if yes then go from here before it's too late . I heard ur lecture cause once u r my friend and u r maan's sis.I respect all maan's relation but that doesn't mean u r standing in front of me and say anything again our relation.if u have little time then think what u done in past now get lost from here and I'm not old geet who will heard all of lecture here.

Dev :-sorry bhabi

Geet:-ummm

Geet entered the study room and talk with khan and ayur.

Geet shocked to see some facts and know about the name who wants to kill maan, who is very close to maan.

Geet thinks if maan will know then what will happen?

After ayur and khan left she entered her room with dinner of them , nanny help her.

She seen both father- daughter sleeping there peacefully.

She make them wake up and told to eat fast.

After some time both sleepy father–daughter duo fed by geet.

Nannu is happy to see them happy and content .

After dinner , geet also eat and make mk sleep and then lay besides maan.She slowly patted him and looking at him.

She thinks maan looking pale, y, here is every one but seems no one is looking or caring him properly. I know he has habit to forget to takes meals . no one dare to face him,who will take his famous anger. Geet slowly gets close to kiss him but then just caressed and lay besides him.

Next day morning, maan wake up and see his life and soul r sleeping peacefully.He gives peck to both of them on their forehead.

When geet said maan don't go today and take rest.

Maan smiles and just lay there when geet said r u still sad abt yesterday,.

Maan look at her then asked tumhe pata….

Geet :-umm then said mr khurana kaha tha par kyuon kaha oh pata hain nehi par dimag hain aapka har time utla hi sochte hain, maan that time I'm not ur wife only.I'm dcp and I have to professional , u taught me that.remember.

Maan feels ashamed and said I'm sorry but geet said no sorry. Maan I think we less communicate and .. maan I don't give u time and …it's all my fault geet.I'm sorry.

Geet just said no maan, pls don't say sorry,

Maan:- can we start from the beginning again.

Geet look at maan then slowly nodded here mk said….uff….ma…ma…da…da… ki..tne…ba..at…ka..rte…ho..so…jao…na……mk..fe.el…slee…py…

Maaneet smiles and maan said iye bilkul tumhari tarah hain.

Geet:- no iye aapki tara hain .

Maan:-nehi tumhari tarah.

Geet:- nehi aapki tarah

Maan:-nehi bilkul tumahra gussa aur kisi ko mere paas nehi dekh sakti .

Geet:- gussa oh toh aapke tarah ahin, har time nose pe baithi rehete hain …..then both smiles and give peck on mk's forehead and maan said I want to know about that 7yrs geet.

Geet look at maan.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 141 -145

Awww jr prem is so cute .... he helped mk ❤️❤️❤️❤️ ......

.lol maan will when get to know MK is his daughter .......nd maan when called geet jaan oh !!!! i guess soon they are gonna reunite <3

Lol 7 years abhi tak sameera ko koi mila nahi still she has not left the hope 😆 ...........cant she see even after dadi announced maan's engagement with her on news still he is not showing interest in her😡 ......

m not sad to to see mana in pain he deserves it but m sad to see get in pain .........😭

Bahot rulaya musky

Loved what MK did with sameera 😆😆😆............wow the description how she was handling her lehnaga sounded very cute .........nd geet drinking toom much .........

144 precap was MK's birthday but 145 it is maan's birthday r daughter nd daddy having same birthdate wow so cute ........

Maan's plight he must be feeling like killing himself even after hurting geet this much she loves him so much nd is not angry with him ......

i remember maan's birthday in London when geet had accepted their marriage ........the story is again moving magically ........... superb updates musky ..........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i dnt have any problem if u punish maan more but i feel bad for geet .........😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 18mypride

ummmmmmmmmmm..... COINCIDENCE....I KEPT MY AS PRIDE ... MYPRIDE IS EAGLE...😉 WAITING HONEY MUSKY.... FOR CLEARENCE.....PLZZZZZZZZZZZ

COINCIDENCE . . . i just chose it as i did not like any other pic😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting eagerly update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...!!
Feeling very bad for geet...!!
Hope maan will soon know the truth...!!
Can't wait for the next part...!!!
Please continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon i hav eegjam jaldi jaldi mera boards hai

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