Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar - Page 31

Originally posted by: -jia-

First of all... sorry for being late.. I really thought I commented 🤪

Wah wah wah.. Sonia... mazaa aa gaya yaar... Kya update tha... you know to refresh my memory I re-read the part again....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Love the song you chose. Very beautiful..

So finally you gave in to the demands of EHHKA.. so proud to be a part of the group...🤣

These two can sizzle anywhere...be it screen or a piece of paper...😆😆 or a page on the internet...😆😆 ok I have no idea what i am blaberring...You did such a fine job of the cottage scene ki kya bolun...

Maan is so much smarter than his sister 😆😆 Can u plz let them be in the cottage for longer...??? do chaar gaane aur ga lene do inko...😉😆😆

Thankyou for the lovely update.. I know chota comment tha but right now I am pressed for time...

Lub ju tons....❤️

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi,

Wonderful update!!!!!!

Well I read ur ff for first time and loved it!!!!!!

I loved all the way \you have cleverly switched between past and present,

the connection was shown beautifully,

Loved the romance and start of love between Maaneet.......

Anu's plan and execution was simply unbelievable...........

Other than Maaneet, all other characters were also amazing........

be it Anu, the mist adorable and mischief......, then Arjun, sweet guy..., Daadi......Geets parents.....pammi, pinky & Adi....everyone were amazing.........

not to forget Vicky and Shasha were also very kind and sweet.........

Hmmm so Geet and Maan are parted due to half information,

thats what i believe reading all the updates!!!!!!!

I liked every bit of the FF,

amazing job!!!!!!

Please add me to your PM list and I would love to read them regularly and comment.....

I will also send the buddy request just to make our work easy........

and continue soon.........

Originally posted by: heermeher

Stawberry update kab kar rahi ho

When did maan give geet the chain and secondly the windchime scene

Originally posted by: euphoric

Thanks a ton Lakshmi and welcome to Ripped Apart😃

I'm so glad that the ff appealed to ur likings and u enjoyed it... and also that you liked the characters portrayals... agree Anu is the cutest of all out here... thanks for appreciating

yes Maaneet are separated due to some misunderstandings and communication gap that came in due to unforeseen circumstances

I've added you to the PM list dear... will love to hear more from u on the updates...

hope it keeps to ur liking😃

Sonia

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hey thanks for adding me!!!!!!!

curious to read more.............

Originally posted by: heermeher

Just dropped in to say hi😊