Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: Shalve
loved it...superb...awesome update....

thanks dear😃

glad you enjoyed

Originally posted by: maneet1985
hey!!!! ur fanfic is awesome....

please add me to ur PM list!!!

ur ff was suggested to me by aash!!!.. it is absolutely awesome....

please continue soon!!!!

deepz

Thanks a ton Deepz😃

Asshu is way too sweet... I m glad you have enjoyed the ff...

would love to hear more from you😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: heermeher
Hi Stawberry,

My mY that was an awesome date.

Thanks for covering all the point as suggested

Past:
Luv the date actually it was outing cum date. He kidnapped her from his own sister poor anu feel sorry for she wanted to spend time with geet but couldnt becoz of her possesive brother towards his lady luv.

the cottage was awesome cant stop thinking about it and their dance cum initiate scene.

Present:
Vicky is big flirt i say but he doesnot know who geet is.

so finally geet started coping up with life. thats good step taken by her .

Suggestion: Now i want geet to design the report which will be send to maan somehow as maan knows her work he will figure out as he has the same work done by geet. with just a hope to see her he fly to mumbai before the expected

anyways its just outline to bring maan to mumbai just based on his insticts

Hey Rakhi.... 🤗...

chal update pad ke tera gussa toh shaant hua😆

yup u right... its just the two of them... call it their reprise.. date or outing whatever but as he said a day exclusively for him😳

glad you liked their intimate scene and the dance...

oh yes... Vicky is a damn big flirt... and about ur suggestion... madame he's coming down... will definitely try to use this... but not sure in same manner😳

Thanks a loads Rakhi...

Love ya😳

Originally posted by: mrk_1
that was awsome one yaar

Thanks dear...

glad you enjoyed😃

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mamon.moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

very nice update. good to see geet is now being settled in her new life. the flasback was really nice. maneet scene was very romantic and passionate. who was the person in geet's bedroom. I guess now brij will cause the trouble. continue soon.............

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Sonia.....nonu...next update kab mil raha hai😆😆

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: mamon.moon
very nice update. good to see geet is now being settled in her new life. the flasback was really nice. maneet scene was very romantic and passionate. who was the person in geet's bedroom. I guess now brij will cause the trouble. continue soon.............

Thanks dearie...

glad that you enjoyed😃

the mystery man will be out to bring out the whole mystery soon😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: namita25
Sonia.....nonu...next update kab mil raha hai😆😆

Namu... two days more... by wednesday😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Anu got cornered😲😆....wow😆....thats a first😆...no comments over the date as I am an innocent bachha😳😆....so moving on...is Arjun negative🤔 but i know he is not😆.... I get the feel someone related to Maan might also b involved in the mess😆....

I emotionally blackmailed mommy today and exchanged cell with her though only on temp basis but I'll figure out a way to make it permanent.... today I was literally abt to indulge in a verbal with some random man on the road.... I went to the CSD this afternoon with Dadi and that man gave the indicator for right and went straight I was abt to bang the car right into his.... it was dadi who stopped me from yelling at him...i came home and told dad n he was like you should have called the CMP guys... and I was like papa I was nowhere near a guard post, how was I supposed to call them...

BTW .... i did fight with papa over the phone....but i had to shut up when i got a warning from mommy that she will confisicate my lappy if i dont stop cribing😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

First of all... sorry for being late.. I really thought I commented 🤪

Wah wah wah.. Sonia... mazaa aa gaya yaar... Kya update tha... you know to refresh my memory I re-read the part again....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Love the song you chose. Very beautiful..

So finally you gave in to the demands of EHHKA.. so proud to be a part of the group...🤣

These two can sizzle anywhere...be it screen or a piece of paper...😆😆 or a page on the internet...😆😆 ok I have no idea what i am blaberring...You did such a fine job of the cottage scene ki kya bolun...

Maan is so much smarter than his sister 😆😆 Can u plz let them be in the cottage for longer...??? do chaar gaane aur ga lene do inko...😉😆😆

Thankyou for the lovely update.. I know chota comment tha but right now I am pressed for time...

Lub ju tons....❤️

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

Hi,

Wonderful update!!!!!!

Well I read ur ff for first time and loved it!!!!!!

I loved all the way \you have cleverly switched between past and present,

the connection was shown beautifully,

Loved the romance and start of love between Maaneet.......

Anu's plan and execution was simply unbelievable...........

Other than Maaneet, all other characters were also amazing........

be it Anu, the mist adorable and mischief......, then Arjun, sweet guy..., Daadi......Geets parents.....pammi, pinky & Adi....everyone were amazing.........

not to forget Vicky and Shasha were also very kind and sweet.........

Hmmm so Geet and Maan are parted due to half information,

thats what i believe reading all the updates!!!!!!!

I liked every bit of the FF,

amazing job!!!!!!

Please add me to your PM list and I would love to read them regularly and comment.....

I will also send the buddy request just to make our work easy........

and continue soon.........

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: .muskaan

Anu got cornered😲😆....wow😆....thats a first😆...no comments over the date as I am an innocent bachha😳😆....so moving on...is Arjun negative🤔 but i know he is not😆.... I get the feel someone related to Maan might also b involved in the mess😆....

I emotionally blackmailed mommy today and exchanged cell with her though only on temp basis but I'll figure out a way to make it permanent.... today I was literally abt to indulge in a verbal with some random man on the road.... I went to the CSD this afternoon with Dadi and that man gave the indicator for right and went straight I was abt to bang the car right into his.... it was dadi who stopped me from yelling at him...i came home and told dad n he was like you should have called the CMP guys... and I was like papa I was nowhere near a guard post, how was I supposed to call them...

BTW .... i did fight with papa over the phone....but i had to shut up when i got a warning from mommy that she will confisicate my lappy if i dont stop cribing😭

ha ha ha... Muski... her bro smarter than her na when it comes to getting his ways😆 so he simply dodged her plans!

ohh 'innocent bachi' tell me you didn't enjoy the date😉😆... yup yup... find out who else involved in this mess!

some people reallly have a pathetic traffic sense... i hope u and dadi are not hurt! as much as u would be tempted there's no point getting into brawl with these guys... they r seriously good for nothing! and u right whr would u go hunting for the cop! irritating it is!

aww... u fought with uncle too😕😆... Muski sudhar ja... kabhi kisi ko toh baksh de😆