Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update dear! Smouldering with passion 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update......

thanks for pm

continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

okay since I got nothing more to do now...I'll post my comment now itself.....😆

My dear Soni....first of all...you did a splendid job with the update today....the best till date....When I was reading it,all through the update I only thought how uncomfortable u would have felt writing this update on the special request of our gang....I can only hope you are not cursing us all for putting you through this.....and me for forcing u to complete it by this weekend...if you felt uncomfortable writing this update.. then I suggest you to get used to it from now...because you'll be getting more n more requests regarding such updates whenever we feel it necessary😉🤣....if requests don't work....you will then face The Don n Behen Gang 😈🤣..so gear up for all the dhamkis and yeah don't curse us too much thinking 'ye kin shaitaano se paala pada hai mera babaji'....No use Honey !!

Coming to the update....kya kahu,kaise kahu,kin shabdon mein kahu.....The first word going through my mind is MAGICAL.....Some others follow it.....umm like... BEAUTIFUL,LOVELY, ROMANTIC,HOT, PASSIONATE,AWESOME,EXCELLENT,OUT-OF-THE-WORLD,SOUL-TOUCHING,PURE BLISS....ab bass ha....mere paas aur words nahi hai....inn se kaam chala le abhi ke liye....the song you chose is among the top 10 songs of my most fav. songs list....its just beautiful...I know each n every lyric of that song....when I first heard that song it directly touched my soul....so thanks for using it to describe the love between the gorgeous couple....its bound to be magical....I don't want to elaborate on the romantic side and spoil the magic....I know you already got the hang of how I felt with this update.....Whatever I say will be less for this one scene you wrote for them....I felt it living along with them....u described it so perfectly....👏...and thanks for fulfilling the demands of EHHK ANDOLAN...we're grateful to you for this....😉😆...and we're no more on hartal too..yayy...😆

Maan out-smarted Anu to spend time with Geet...that part was so hilarious...imagining Maan doing something like that...poor Anu...but then if he didn't have done that ,how would we have got such a beautiful date to see...so no complaints...Anu...shhh...chup...bilkul chup....ab koi shikaayath nahi !!

The present track is also good today...Geet getting to know her work and coming out of her shell and trying to move on in life....and other side,Vicky came to know some more about her today...may be it might result in a beautiful friendship between them....I hope so....Far from Anu and Maan,she needs a friend with whom she can laugh n cry....lets see what happen regarding them....

Daarji can never change...it became evident today...but I fear what that evil brain of Brij's might be cooking against Geet now??Who was that in her room at nigh?Was that Brij??God I so want to kill him....

Thank you sooooo much for such a wonderful update Honey...you and Jia together made my day and pulled me out....Love you both for this 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗...I'm so glad that I came across such friends here....❤️


Eshuuu🤗🤗🤗
chal atleast it made you feel good... aur kya chahiye... infact it gave me a much needed reprise from the eppy too as i was concentrating on putting this up... for Eshu behan and Don Ashu were threatening me of dire consequences😆
oh really was this the best?😲... but story toh kahin aage nahin gayi😆... uncomfortable nahi yaar i wasn't very confident... maine pehle bhi kaha tha my theory is not so bad😉😆... and no ways honeybuns main peeth peeche tum logon ko curse nahin karoongi... aisa hoga toh humare late night sessions hain na😆
thank ku thank ku... thank ku.... itni shabd bohut hain... i m glad it helped in uplifting the mood... that song is my fav and i have always wanted to see it on Maaneet so whn i was plannin the sequence toh i jumped for it😆 and thanks for breaking the hartal.... juice bhijwaon?😆
u cracked me with the line there in red🤣... bechari Anu ka saturday barbaad ho gaya aur tu usse hush kar rahi hai... poor her🤣
i needed to show more on the present lekin unka date hi itna lamba ho gaya... Anyways Vicky and Geet would get to be friends😳
thank you so much honey... for u r an amazing person😳
Love you❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

wow..How romantic getaway..Who come at night..

thanks Payal...
glad u enjoyed the getaway😆
and who came... well thts a suspense😆

Originally posted by: cyum321

Awesome......

jaldi sai dosra update bhi kerdo😳

Thanks dear....
will surely try to put it soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

such a beautiful update. romantic, hot, passionate and all. 😊

I wonder who was there beside the bed. Continue soon. 😊

Hey Geet... thanks a loads😃
well tht mystery will also be solved soon😆
Thanks Dear...
glad you enjoyed😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

LOVED IT

waiting eagerly 4 maaneet meeting
past was too good..loved every bit of it..
loved maan wen he took geet away..

geet moving ahead in life was superb

n hw come geet doesnt know vicky?? or vicky doesnt know geet??
dint anu tell geet abt vicky??
maan dint bother to mention abt him as he was too lost in geet😆

well awesome update as usual
plz do continue soon
thanks 4 d update n pm😊

Hey Sai...
Sweetie we talking about Maan here... its hightly unlikely of him to discuss his love life with his younger brother over the phone😆... Anu and Dadi ma also got to know, he didn't share with them... even his parents have not been aware of him and Geet... whereas if u see when Geet heard the name Vicky she was confused as she was familiar with the name but she didn't may much attention to it... besides he's coming to India after 2 years...
Maaneet meeting in the present will take a little more time dear... and past is soon moving towards the HP separation too....
Thanks a ton dear😃

Originally posted by: hinalshah

loved it very much n the song is also one of my favorites but who the hell was the person that came to geet's room

Thanks Hinal...
glad u liked the song selection and update😃
thoda patience to know who came into Geet's room😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

flashback - love how maan abducted geet so he could spend time with her. Love the cottage maan has taken geet to.

I am sure geet and maan will enjoy the Jacuzzi one day. So sweet of maan to order all of geet's favourite food.

Lool geet falls into the water while fishing. Aww they both cannot keep their hands off each other. Love how geet tells ILU to maan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puth

awesome update sonia....
you do write romantic stuff well dear......i loved the song selection as well.............

thanks dearie...
glad u enjoyed and liked the song too😃

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

awesome update

loved his surprise for her..soo romantic and sweet
ohh maan 😳
omg who was in her room? it better not have been that Brij!
con't soon

thank you princess😃
its MSK na.. could his surprise be anything less😉😆
the mystery man will be out in open soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Good to see geet settling in and vicky is so cute and hmm I think pinky was on about NT and awe loved the flashback their moments together was so sweet and passionate especially liked the fishing part it was so cute and awe I really like that song too and recently its been stuck in my head a lot so it was a nice surprise to see you use it in this update and ooh wonder who was in her room and what's cooking in brijs head anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

hey Shamima... thanks a ton😃
yes Geet is moving ahead... she needs to be herself na to be able to face Maan😆... who else would Pinky be warning her about?... its one of my fav songs too and though have listened to it 100 times i just can't over it... glad u liked the fishing part😊

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Loved it..... Awesome yaar... Wats wid d last portion is it tym 4r Hp story in past???? Dey r still finding her toh dats means brij will come to mumbai.....

Hey Aditi... thanks dearie...
yup u r right... we r moving towards the HP story in the past...
as per Brij coming to Mumbai... u'll have to wait for that😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakadafi

That was a beautiful update! Great job done 👏

thanks dearie...
glad u enjoyed😳

Originally posted by: simi91

love maaneet scene so cute & romantic & present part wow ur sasha is positive for change i wonder what i'll brij do cant wait maaneet to meet again ur damn good writer my dear wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm

Thanks a ton Simi😃
glad u enjoyed Maaneet moments😳... and isn't Geet going through much already to face Sasha.. NT is there too honey... y create more troubles for her haina😆 Brij is going to be nasty out here😡
thanks for appreciating dear... will try to

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